Item: Multi-Dimension Harem Adventure
Rating: 4.2

DarquesseLv64yr

2020-11-03 06:37

Overall an interesting work with one major issue. The only issue is that the Author does not know how to use tenses. In other words, the author doesn't know to add "ed" to the end of verbs describing past events, or add "s" to the end of words that are plural. Overall an issue that could easily be fixed just by pasting the story into word.

Multi-Dimension Harem Adventure

LuxVonDeux

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