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Dayside
DaysideLv124yr
2020-07-31 20:43

Well written, close to 0 grammatical errors. Updates were pretty high for now, though I do expect it to drop a bit after the start. Story development is as generic as possibly can be so far. The main character has nothing interesting or unique about him. World background is just mostly canon HP with a few additions like the generic magic core thing and a few new families and one girl that isn't canon.

Harry Potter - Scion of House Ignis

Loyal_Hunter
4.5
29 Chs

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ipanchu
ipanchuLv4

Thanks for the review.

4yr
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Loyal_Hunter
Loyal_HunterAuthor

When you wrote this review, the story was barely in Hogwarts, maybe not even that. I've already added quite a few more elements into the fic for it to be less 'generic' than just copying canon and I haven't even started 3rd year, which will be far more eventful and different than the first 2 years and will add a lot more things that are most definitely not 'canon'. In this fic, the MC will do more interesting things that are further away from canon as he becomes older, more knowledgeable and stronger. I also plan on continuing his adventures past Hogwarts and into the life of an ad-ult. Even now, I think it is too early to review this fic as 'generic' as I haven't added any of the larger ideas that I have for this fic. I could just delete your review or something but that would make me seem like someone who can't take any sort of criticism, I just prefer my fic to be criticised on parts that actually need criticism at that moment in time. I would just like to say that I don't plan on making this a fic that is a carbon copy of canon with just a different protagonist. Thank you for the review.

4yr
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Dayside
DaysideLv12

Perhaps I shall give it another shot then?

Loyal_Hunter:When you wrote this review, the story was barely in Hogwarts, maybe not even that. I've already added quite a few more elements into the fic for it to be less 'generic' than just copying canon and I haven't even started 3rd year, which will be far more eventful and different than the first 2 years and will add a lot more things that are most definitely not 'canon'. In this fic, the MC will do more interesting things that are further away from canon as he becomes older, more knowledgeable and stronger. I also plan on continuing his adventures past Hogwarts and into the life of an ad-ult. Even now, I think it is too early to review this fic as 'generic' as I haven't added any of the larger ideas that I have for this fic. I could just delete your review or something but that would make me seem like someone who can't take any sort of criticism, I just prefer my fic to be criticised on parts that actually need criticism at that moment in time. I would just like to say that I don't plan on making this a fic that is a carbon copy of canon with just a different protagonist. Thank you for the review.
4yr
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Loyal_Hunter
Loyal_HunterAuthor

If not even the author can give himself a shameless 5 star review then who can? This story may be trash, but it's my trash. ...............

4yr

Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

In my opinion below average. Pretty much cliche fanfiction. If you read one you read them all. Worst of all there's are a.....TALKING SYSTEM! The worst kind! It speaks like--- 'Hello, young one' like the fuk Lol?! Moreover, cliche dumbledore is apparently bad etc. It would be more unique to see the point of view of a pureblood society or something however here mc I feel is another pro muggle proud nonsense type character which is boring. ; Lastly, apparently, he is supposed to be a pureblood but is raised by muggles or something??-why not be a muggle-born then?!I want something different you know... :(

4yr
Khors
KhorsLv15

The story has good grammar and it’s entertaining even though there’s only 3 chapters but I’m looking forward to reading more as you release it. Oh yeah if you ever need help editing I don’t mind helping you out because I feel like this story and you have a lot of potential.

4yr
AAM0825
AAM0825Lv3

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 great, I hope you don't drop

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CalciumLurcher
CalciumLurcherLv10

Writing quality: pretty good in the first place compared to allot of the stuff I've read, it gets better further into the book. Barely any mistakes in grammar either. Stability of updates: good, a little bit unstable with gaps every now and then that only last a few days. Story development: amazing, delves into the world it's set in and even builds up more. Character design: great, for once the characters actually feel like real people and act like a real person unlike many other books that make the side-characters cater to the mc every whim and seem to only exist for the mc. world background: the author mentions unnecessary characters and makes it apparent that the world isn't halted around the mc and that there is other stuff happening that the mc isn't apart of. it gives a sense of realism that you don't get with other books that pretend that only the stuff that is happening around the mc is important. it shows that there is more going on than what you see.

4yr
Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6

Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

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Grass_Cutter
Grass_CutterLv4

Very good I like the concept 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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