ipanchu

It is a very fun read! The main character is very likeable. The side characters are well written in that they have the same personality and temperaments as their film counterparts. I have very few issues with it: 1. Some chapters have too much "explanations". We don't need this much detail! It feels too dragged out. This gets much better in latter chapters! I believe the author is improving as he writes. 2. Too much glazing! I know that Mc glazing is a staple in this website. However, it brings down the quality of the story when it is overdone. Some people might like this style of writing, but I personally do not. I do not mind if updates take long, as long as the chapter quality is up to par! Please take your time while writing this awesome fanfic!

These people are bots

You are a degenerate. I am also a degenerate, but you are 10x worse.

I want a longer title. An entire paragraph.

yes

rude

faker reference

This chapter needs proofreading. Too much grammatical errors.

It started off slowly. And it was worth it.

The ship just sank boys