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skulputulurubug
skulputulurubugLv144yr
2020-08-07 16:00

Okay... Author clarified that first 30 chapters are brainless stupid senseless utter garbage that will make sense later on... but I can literally feel my brain melting right now... 20 chapters in and I ask myself why use Soul land when you add stupid demons and random bull ****... I like fanfics that expand the world and don't revolve around OG mc but this demons crap is just ****ting all over the original work you could've expanded your powers differently have hidden sects another continent ffs but demons crap... that only your mc a 3 year old orphan and intellectual beasts were able to discover? And the only other humans who know are slaves? Why didn't you just make an original work ffs... I really need to rant cause the 21 chapters I read are so fucking stupid

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Greymark
GreymarkAuthor

In short, you dislike demons.

skulputulurubug
skulputulurubugLv14

Not at all, what I don't like is ****ting all over soul land for your fanfic by adding stupid stuff, the world is expanded by 2 and 3 which you could've used as reference for your fanfic but instead you throw random **** that wouldn't make sense for soul land 2 and 3

Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv10

True, could of had a hidden cult of evil soul masters, the initial people from body sect or even people drifting there from another continent but no, we get demons, four cliche divine chinese beasts and a dead female lead, this isn't Douluo Dalu anymore, it's a different novel entirely with spirit rings and a bunch of people with the same name.

skulputulurubug:Not at all, what I don't like is ****ting all over soul land for your fanfic by adding stupid stuff, the world is expanded by 2 and 3 which you could've used as reference for your fanfic but instead you throw random **** that wouldn't make sense for soul land 2 and 3
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