This was good in the beginning, but after a few chapters, everything started to feel strange, absurd and forced ... Especially in the arc Spirit hall move ... or maybe when he went to a human city for the first time ... Honestly, that very bad ... At least in my opinion ...
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LIKE(Sorry for my bad english!) This might be a bit of a spoiler, so don't blame me. 1. In the Spirit Hall Move Arc, the MC should be able to avoid being hunted by the Spirit hall if he is more careful ... but, due to forced plot or something like that, the MCs foolishly get into their trap ... * sigh * 2. Regarding the appearance of the main character ... Well, I concluded that Author-san wanted to make the MC look cool / mature as fast as possible, so he made the MC look 14-15 years old while the MC was actually only 8 years old ... This shouldn't be a big deal, but what's the point if everyone knows that the MC is actually only an 8 year old kid? * sigh * 3. Love interest ... Well ... if you expect something romantic in this novel then ... you will be disappointed ... There is no interesting interaction between the MC and his love interest ... Honestly, it feels like reading a xianxia / wuxia novel, where the MC meets a beautiful girl and says' what is this, why is my heart beating so fast. is this Love? Yes this must be love! ' and the girl fell into the MC harem ... 4. Lastly ... I don't know what other people think but I feel very confused reading this novel. How should I explain it ... Hmm ... you better read it yourself and you might understand what I mean ...
1) Let's imagine for a moment influence and information network the Spirit Hall has. They perform awakening for people! Their people stationed near every single village. I think you expect too much stupidity from the organization of such scale and resources after having three months to investigate him. 2) From the entire world, only 3 people know (aside from Hu Liena). How come it became everyone? 3) You know, there will be no harem and Liena is a plot twist here. They lived together for a year every day. Give both some slack. They are closer than family. P.S. the plot is too vast in not linear to explain everything like in generic cultivation novel within couple of chapters. There will be flashbacks and many talks and pov chapters with events of the past in them that will make everything clearer.
Hi author i havent read this, but still want to ask base on your synopsis. Mc will be op right? Will mc enemy will also be buffed? Or you will make an oc enemy thats on par with mc? If that happen its the same thing as mc not being op. Like whats the use of being op when your enemy is the same? Just asking and the latter part is just my opinion.
Greymark:1) Let's imagine for a moment influence and information network the Spirit Hall has. They perform awakening for people! Their people stationed near every single village. I think you expect too much stupidity from the organization of such scale and resources after having three months to investigate him. 2) From the entire world, only 3 people know (aside from Hu Liena). How come it became everyone? 3) You know, there will be no harem and Liena is a plot twist here. They lived together for a year every day. Give both some slack. They are closer than family. P.S. the plot is too vast in not linear to explain everything like in generic cultivation novel within couple of chapters. There will be flashbacks and many talks and pov chapters with events of the past in them that will make everything clearer.
He naturally will have strong enemies, or the story will get boring fast, but generally he is way above the norm in terms of battle power. In a sense the only way for others to fight him is using higher cultivation. Like, really higher, not couple of steps.
noobageddon_:Hi author i havent read this, but still want to ask base on your synopsis. Mc will be op right? Will mc enemy will also be buffed? Or you will make an oc enemy thats on par with mc? If that happen its the same thing as mc not being op. Like whats the use of being op when your enemy is the same? Just asking and the latter part is just my opinion.
MC can be said to be OP, but the enemy is even more OP. especially their information network, that's too OP! As if they knew everything that happened on the Douluo continent. P.S. I have read till(?) chapter 36 and ... Well, I feel that only the body and strength of the MC is developing, but not with his brain ...
noobageddon_:Hi author i havent read this, but still want to ask base on your synopsis. Mc will be op right? Will mc enemy will also be buffed? Or you will make an oc enemy thats on par with mc? If that happen its the same thing as mc not being op. Like whats the use of being op when your enemy is the same? Just asking and the latter part is just my opinion.
I agree with this review I honestly don't like where the story ended up heading.
That not really OP, it is how it should be if any organization of that sort has at least a couple smart people at their ruling top. They naturally don't know everything, but Na'er is different. She was a crucial part and they didn't care about waste of manpower or resources to find her. Still, it wasn't Spirit Hall who found her in the end, they only executed the task. As for MC and his brain... I wonder about that. I warned that my plot is not exactly linear, but many readers expect very generic and straightforward xianxia plotline. Well, not gonna happen. Spoiler just for you, MC by the 36 chapters already have organization established and it was slightly mentioned before.
LiaFeil:MC can be said to be OP, but the enemy is even more OP. especially their information network, that's too OP! As if they knew everything that happened on the Douluo continent. P.S. I have read till(?) chapter 36 and ... Well, I feel that only the body and strength of the MC is developing, but not with his brain ...
This is not about the Xiaxia plot or something like that. the problem is. MC knows if he and Na'er are hunted by the spirit hall. (* cough * this might be a spoiler, but since I gave a warning at the beginning, so don't blame me) But what the MC did was separate from Na'er and end with Na'er's death. In this section I question the intelligence of the MC brain. He knew if Na'er was being hunted by the Spirit hall, then why was he still separating from her?
Greymark:That not really OP, it is how it should be if any organization of that sort has at least a couple smart people at their ruling top. They naturally don't know everything, but Na'er is different. She was a crucial part and they didn't care about waste of manpower or resources to find her. Still, it wasn't Spirit Hall who found her in the end, they only executed the task. As for MC and his brain... I wonder about that. I warned that my plot is not exactly linear, but many readers expect very generic and straightforward xianxia plotline. Well, not gonna happen. Spoiler just for you, MC by the 36 chapters already have organization established and it was slightly mentioned before.
(Will warn about spoiler too. Ah, so awkward.) Exactly because they were hunted as "pair of the boy and girl". Plus, back then he didn't have much of a choice. He needed to remove everyone who might have become witnesses, and he killed everyone. He thought that sending her to a legitimate schooling institute for a peaceful life is better to hide her. Plus, he had people with plot armor there. Don't forget that Tang Hao was near Tang San and actually if I was him I would have thought that the safest place is near the original MC. It is just that Tang Hao... well... no spoiler here. You will learn in the future. Actually, that move proved to be the right one. It wasn't Spirit Hall that found her, they could not track her down. It was an entity way above their level.
LiaFeil:This is not about the Xiaxia plot or something like that. the problem is. MC knows if he and Na'er are hunted by the spirit hall. (* cough * this might be a spoiler, but since I gave a warning at the beginning, so don't blame me) But what the MC did was separate from Na'er and end with Na'er's death. In this section I question the intelligence of the MC brain. He knew if Na'er was being hunted by the Spirit hall, then why was he still separating from her?
If anything, he wasn't stupid, but he miscalculated.
LiaFeil:This is not about the Xiaxia plot or something like that. the problem is. MC knows if he and Na'er are hunted by the spirit hall. (* cough * this might be a spoiler, but since I gave a warning at the beginning, so don't blame me) But what the MC did was separate from Na'er and end with Na'er's death. In this section I question the intelligence of the MC brain. He knew if Na'er was being hunted by the Spirit hall, then why was he still separating from her?
