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LaurentCross
LaurentCrossLv134yr
2020-07-28 08:15

Story was really good up to chapter 20 then it went completely downhill everything felt forced and It wasn't entertaining or good I honestly tried to continue but ending up dropping at chapter 32. Especially how he dosent seek revenge pisses me off total buzzkill you honestly made your mc a generic nice guy wich ruined it for me.

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Greymark
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So in your opinion he should have killed Xiao Wu, Tang San and Yu Xioagang, because they didn't pay attention to Na'er, when she was stronger than them all and went out alone? And do it in front of Erlong, who can stop him. Mind one thing please. They are not responsible for what happened at all. I don't quite understand what you are implying here, if he can't find a single clue about how it happened at all. Revenge against whom? He doesn't know who did it for now, but he will know in the future. That is not revenge. If you want MC to go bonkers and kill irrelevant people... well yeah, in that sense no revenge happened, and he is too thoughtful for that and not generic xianxia character.

LaurentCross
LaurentCrossLv13

I want him to seek out the people who were the ones who actually killed her your mc just moved on like nothing happened I never once said kill innocents I clearly stated he should seek revenge for the ones who did actually kill her you clearly can't accept feedback honestly aurthors like you are delusional I never once said to kill a innocent I did say he should seek revenge any normal person would if a loved one was brutally murdered but I understand that your mc is generic Japanese garbage

Greymark:So in your opinion he should have killed Xiao Wu, Tang San and Yu Xioagang, because they didn't pay attention to Na'er, when she was stronger than them all and went out alone? And do it in front of Erlong, who can stop him. Mind one thing please. They are not responsible for what happened at all. I don't quite understand what you are implying here, if he can't find a single clue about how it happened at all. Revenge against whom? He doesn't know who did it for now, but he will know in the future. That is not revenge. If you want MC to go bonkers and kill irrelevant people... well yeah, in that sense no revenge happened, and he is too thoughtful for that and not generic xianxia character.
Greymark
GreymarkAuthor

Funny. I believe I clearly stated that he tried to find clues for a whole week but he can't. If anything, my novel is rather realistic in that regard and there are fails and things that MC can't do with his current strength/level/resources. He can't find them. Of course I can ignite some lucky plot armor and make two Tilted Douluos unable to hide their tracks in front of spirit elder, but that is really... stupid, I guess. Especially when in all those novels people with higher cultivation can even stand in front of the ones with lower remaining unnoticed. It is not some beta or japanese or what not. As I see it, you just don't like the realism of the story. And also, he will know who did it. If you think he won't do anything about them, you are gravely mistaken.

LaurentCross:I want him to seek out the people who were the ones who actually killed her your mc just moved on like nothing happened I never once said kill innocents I clearly stated he should seek revenge for the ones who did actually kill her you clearly can't accept feedback honestly aurthors like you are delusional I never once said to kill a innocent I did say he should seek revenge any normal person would if a loved one was brutally murdered but I understand that your mc is generic Japanese garbage
Mad_Hatter2
Mad_Hatter2Lv3

Sheesh, you guys are arguing like professionals 😂

Greymark:Funny. I believe I clearly stated that he tried to find clues for a whole week but he can't. If anything, my novel is rather realistic in that regard and there are fails and things that MC can't do with his current strength/level/resources. He can't find them. Of course I can ignite some lucky plot armor and make two Tilted Douluos unable to hide their tracks in front of spirit elder, but that is really... stupid, I guess. Especially when in all those novels people with higher cultivation can even stand in front of the ones with lower remaining unnoticed. It is not some beta or japanese or what not. As I see it, you just don't like the realism of the story. And also, he will know who did it. If you think he won't do anything about them, you are gravely mistaken.
Greymark
GreymarkAuthor

I prefer to think we are discussing things using facts and logic. ;)

Mad_Hatter2:Sheesh, you guys are arguing like professionals 😂
WormDragon
WormDragonLv4

Stop writing, your a noob as a writer

Greymark:So in your opinion he should have killed Xiao Wu, Tang San and Yu Xioagang, because they didn't pay attention to Na'er, when she was stronger than them all and went out alone? And do it in front of Erlong, who can stop him. Mind one thing please. They are not responsible for what happened at all. I don't quite understand what you are implying here, if he can't find a single clue about how it happened at all. Revenge against whom? He doesn't know who did it for now, but he will know in the future. That is not revenge. If you want MC to go bonkers and kill irrelevant people... well yeah, in that sense no revenge happened, and he is too thoughtful for that and not generic xianxia character.
WormDragon
WormDragonLv4

Why kill her in the first place, you retard

Greymark:So in your opinion he should have killed Xiao Wu, Tang San and Yu Xioagang, because they didn't pay attention to Na'er, when she was stronger than them all and went out alone? And do it in front of Erlong, who can stop him. Mind one thing please. They are not responsible for what happened at all. I don't quite understand what you are implying here, if he can't find a single clue about how it happened at all. Revenge against whom? He doesn't know who did it for now, but he will know in the future. That is not revenge. If you want MC to go bonkers and kill irrelevant people... well yeah, in that sense no revenge happened, and he is too thoughtful for that and not generic xianxia character.
WormDragon
WormDragonLv4

Realistic my ass, yeah, kill and rape all things. That's where you good at. You must be a rapist

Greymark:Funny. I believe I clearly stated that he tried to find clues for a whole week but he can't. If anything, my novel is rather realistic in that regard and there are fails and things that MC can't do with his current strength/level/resources. He can't find them. Of course I can ignite some lucky plot armor and make two Tilted Douluos unable to hide their tracks in front of spirit elder, but that is really... stupid, I guess. Especially when in all those novels people with higher cultivation can even stand in front of the ones with lower remaining unnoticed. It is not some beta or japanese or what not. As I see it, you just don't like the realism of the story. And also, he will know who did it. If you think he won't do anything about them, you are gravely mistaken.
WormDragon
WormDragonLv4

Yeah, if you are so good, then why not write an original novel. Noob

Greymark:I prefer to think we are discussing things using facts and logic. ;)
WormDragon
WormDragonLv4

Yeah, if you are so good, then why not write an original novel. Noob

Greymark:I prefer to think we are discussing things using facts and logic. ;)
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