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SquareGoat
SquareGoatAuthor4yr
2020-07-25 16:48

Hey guys! This is the Author with a brand new story. As this is a WPC entry, this story was never premeditated so bear with the story. The story focuses on the main character's journey towards self-discovery. He is an NPC that suddenly gained sentience without the need for an AI. And of course, he's immortal and brings a chicken with him, cuz why not?

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ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14

so does he come to the real world

SquareGoat
SquareGoatAuthor

the story hasn't progressed to that stage yet but the stage has been set with characters that with characters that may have the capability to bring him in the real world. however, thats for the far future

ProfessorofCulture:so does he come to the real world
Omnidoa
OmnidoaLv6

wait so he'll be brought into the real world?

SquareGoat:the story hasn't progressed to that stage yet but the stage has been set with characters that with characters that may have the capability to bring him in the real world. however, thats for the far future
SquareGoat
SquareGoatAuthor

no comment

Omnidoa:wait so he'll be brought into the real world?
Omnidoa
OmnidoaLv6

um okay lol, can you give me a hint it's an important part of my decision 🙏

SquareGoat:no comment
Omnidoa
OmnidoaLv6

If you don't want to though that's completely fine to though!

SquareGoat:no comment
SquareGoat
SquareGoatAuthor

well, if youve properly read the klein sister side story every now and then, and also read a very specific detail, you will find out the answer to that. hint hint: eyes black

Omnidoa:If you don't want to though that's completely fine to though!
Omnidoa
OmnidoaLv6

okay! Thank you I'll pay attention when I reach there! Also: I wanted to say I appreciate your grammar. Novels with bad grammar are hard to get into :)

SquareGoat:well, if youve properly read the klein sister side story every now and then, and also read a very specific detail, you will find out the answer to that. hint hint: eyes black
QuestionableReadin
QuestionableReadinLv4

I wanted to ask here becuase i dont think you would read it if itwqs a chapter comment, so, does bob feel pain? I know its a bit of a dumb question, but at a certain point in the novel, his practically throwing himself into danger

SquareGoat
SquareGoatAuthor

he does. the pain he feels becomes progressive to the point that it scares him but theres a convenient solution for that in the following chapters

QuestionableReadin:I wanted to ask here becuase i dont think you would read it if itwqs a chapter comment, so, does bob feel pain? I know its a bit of a dumb question, but at a certain point in the novel, his practically throwing himself into danger
QuestionableReadin
QuestionableReadinLv4

Kk, thanks for telling

SquareGoat:he does. the pain he feels becomes progressive to the point that it scares him but theres a convenient solution for that in the following chapters
Matt_pike
Matt_pikeLv5

Any romance

SquareGoat:he does. the pain he feels becomes progressive to the point that it scares him but theres a convenient solution for that in the following chapters
Matt_pike
Matt_pikeLv5

?

SquareGoat:he does. the pain he feels becomes progressive to the point that it scares him but theres a convenient solution for that in the following chapters
Daku_Doragon
Daku_DoragonLv13

first author I've seen that doesn't shamelessly put 5 stars. 🤣 love the story, only 25 in but I can tell its good enough to be at least 4.6

Zostran
ZostranLv12

Did you drop it?

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EmzByte13
EmzByte13Lv12

Holy shít, this novel is great! Of course, nothing is perfect (and that's why I'm giving it just over 4 stars) but this book is damn close. I suppose I'll write a fully-fledged review, so here we go! : Writing quality- I haven't really noticed anything wrong with it. If there's typos, or grammatical errors, I certainly haven't seen them but if I'm honest, I'm not a very observant person. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ The story also flows nicely, and it's written quite well. Not to mention the humour in this novel is right up my alley, as in my opinion the only thing funnier than dark humor is straightforward, trying-to-be-serious-and-not-at-the-same-time humour. I dunno how it works, but it does, and I think I've laughed at almost every single chapter. I've also cried, and have been left speechless on many occasions. It's been a héll of a ride so far, that's for sure! Story development- Now, this is an area that I did have one or two minor problems with. We were warned that there was no particular plan for this novel, but oh man, sometimes I felt that the story could be going anywhere. Of course, it isn't cliché, and that's wonderful (beyond wonderful, actually. It's refreshing) but I just felt like some things in the novel just didn't matter as they were arbitrarily decided and came out of nowhere sometimes- and that feeling of detachment isn't so wonderful. Other than that... it's been fantastic so far! Character design- Oh man, where do I start? I think Bob is one of the best MC's I've ever read about. He's an idiot with a chicken, a naive, poor, hapless, gullible, but loveable idiot with a chicken. If I was Christian, I would say 'God help his soul', but I'm not, so, yeah... And it's not only Bob and his chicken (at this point, they're a package deal- it doesn't feel right to mention one without the other), I think I've actually liked every single character that has been introduced thus far (ch 69, and there have been quite a few characters!) and that's only happened at most 4/5 times in the 7 or so years I've been reading all sorts of novels... Updating stability- Well, I've read all the chapters that were already here, so I can't say anything about the updating stability. There did seem to be a couple of bumps based off of the 'author's thoughts' bits, so I had to deduct one star of this category for that. World background- Ahh, what can I say... It's been slowly but steadily revealed as we go along, in a rather smooth way might I add. The place names have been hilarious, much like the rest of the story, and somehow the author has made everything plausible and detailed. To sum it up, I don't think I'll ever be able to type enough praise for this novel, so I'll try and condense all of it into one thumbs-up emoji: 👍 (I hope you can see all the sincerity. 😅) I'm looking forward to see how this story, the characters and the world itself develop, and while I'm waiting for a fúck-ton of chapters to be released, I'll see if the author's written anything else!

MacGillavry
MacGillavryLv11
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