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Riryz
RiryzLv54yr
2020-08-03 13:30

For new readers deciding to pick this up, I think its a decent novel to read. The start is hard to read but its gets better and enjoyable. Dont give up on the novel after only 5 chapters. Now my review/opinion for those that are deciding if they want to drop it afer having read a couple of chapters. (with slight spoilers): Im not gonna lie, after ch5 I wanted to drop this. It was very hard to read without getting annoyed by how the story was written. I went to the reviews and mostly found either low rated with only 5 or less chapters read talking sh about the early chapters or 5 star rating with no actual review (just "good good good", "exp" and "more pls"). This made me want to drop even more. I did not drop and was pleasantly surprised by the quality reading further. This also made me write a review myself so people in my situation get a little more info so they dont judge the novel on just the beginning and hopefully not give up on this just yet. Im glad I decided to stick it out and continue reading. After ch5 it gets much better. (currently at ch33) Its just that in the early chapters a lot of bad things happened at the same time which made it not really enjoyable to read. Like the way his birth was handled which makes no sense since a god send him to the world and his parents are supposed to be extremely famous, it makes no sense that what happened to him should have been possible, even the Tsuchikage says this in the novel. Then the almost impossible to complete 2nd quest with a ridiculous punishment which screams plotarmor is gonna kick in. Lastly the MC not wanting to physically train because he doesnt want to be hurt despite him choosing the world himself. All of this gets much better. The story writing is pretty good, he no longer gets ridiculous quests with punishments that take away things earned by his hard work and his personality changes which made him seem a proper MC doing his best to get strong and survive. Seriously, keep reading. You wont regret it...probably. In the end its still wish fulfillment (which the author already indicated) so if thats not your thing then so be it.

Hard to reincarnate into world of naruto as Iwa shinobi

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3.9
85 Chs

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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

This seems like a wish fulfillment FF...... -MC is orphaned isnt of being taken care by someone like the kage or their friends, and this is important cause MC is the child of 2 S rankers and in the early chps its shown MC mom was close with the kage,,,so yah, pretty stupid for MC to be left in the orphanage,,,plus its not like MC would be attacked or kidnapped. And everyone [ or atleast] many know who his parents are so yah. -MC choose a pretty stupid ability,,,basically he choose an ability to make all his earth jutsu bombs,,,whilst this seems OP, it isnt...its hard to control, isnt versatile and is kinda useless.. .he ignored deidara ability for this, deidara ability is kinda top 10 abilities in naruto...I mean its OP and versatile...plus this easily allows MC to make earth jutsu bombs so yah...MC choose stupid ability -This story follows the naruto talk no jutsu style....seeing as how MC wanted to build friendships for allies, kinda pointless......I hope u know that madara, hashirama, naruto, sasuke, orochi, pain, itachi, etc all disagree with that ****.....one man army all the way

4yr

TwistedUExile
TwistedUExileLv14

This story they you probably never find in naruto fanfiction because most other naruto fanfiction always have something to do with the hidden leaf and it gets boring because same thing prevent uchiha genocide, save sakumo, or prevent uzmaki village from getting destroyed. That why a fanfic like this because it bring a new perspective but hope become tailbesat holder and learn dust releases

4yr
RandomIsGood
RandomIsGoodLv5

All though I had no problem with the first few chapters I just wanna say that this novels is bad he treats iwa a ninja village like its nothing and wants to defeat his seniors when he has literally no special power he is a weakass and acts like he is something special

4yr
Demonzor
DemonzorLv14

This story is dumb how can he be reborn into the world as a baby yet not have chakra it’s stupid what was the point. Then the fact that he’s the son of a s rank ninjas yet it’s like it wasn’t important at all

4yr
Eclairs
EclairsLv4

Really a story that written by a child. Mc is stupid, makes decision based on his emotion or just because he feltlike it with no future hopes. Stupid Plot holes are littered all over the story. Everyone is stupid as Author is stupid. He ask to be reborn in Naruto world, knowing this world have Overpower character, no value of human life, betrayal and very bad history of Human Right violation. And that is a decison he made before he knew he will be given special powers. And after suffering from just a bit of it he complains like a Bitxh expecting something good to just come to him.

4yr
WealthyRaccoon
WealthyRaccoonLv14

Like the iwagakure setting but the mc is absolute trash of the highest order. Massively inflated ego super overconfident and generally annoying. E***w

4yr
King_P
King_PLv14

Mc was a ***** of the system. . And now he is a ***** of Iwa as well. . What's the point of reincarnation if he is just going to be attack dog of his village.

4yr
LLP_G10
LLP_G10Lv4

Mc is a shinobi iwa, very rare to find in other fanfics The beginning is very strange as he was born for example and the grammar is full of errors, but from chapter 5-6 onwards the grammar improves a lot

4yr
VINCI88
VINCI88Lv2

The fanfic is very nice. The simple novelty of having a ninja from another village other than Konoha grants many points to this story. Mc has many flaws, especially his arrogance, however this makes him simply human. I disagree with many choices made by the protagonist, especially those of the first chapters when he had to choose his skills. however there is tremendous potential in his Kekkei Genkai, you may want to read Sir Lucifer Morningstar's 'I am Mr Five' fic to find inspiration on the possible uses of his ability. honestly I would like it if the protagonist finds a way to use his skill in the same way as Whitebeard's Gura Gura no Mi, after all with explosions you can create seismic waves. becoming the man capable of literally shaking the entire ninja world would be awesome. Another flaw is its lack of development in Lightning-type techniques. His Kekkei Genkai grants him an affinity for Earth and Lightning, but we have seen very little development on lightning-type techniques. if mc has some knowledge of how the earth's magnetic field works, he could theoretically exploit its affinity for lightning to create real storms. another big flaw is the lack of medical or sensory techniques, not to mention the absolute lack of trying to learn some Genjutsu. ok! If you have no fantasy eyes, in Naruto's world it seems pointless to learn Genjutsu, but it's always a useful skill to have, Kurenai has become a Jounin with Genjutsu. Then there are the medical skills and honestly if you don't want to learn any medical jutsu you need to get your hands on the Tsunade technique. Plus there is also the poison issue to consider and I can't believe he went to war with Suna without poison training. Then there are the sensory and revelation issues. The easy way to get rid of this problem would be to get a summon, but he could also try to get a ninja dog. having a reliable partner like a ninja dog or even more ninja dogs like kakashi is a sure way to eliminate these flaws. Finally there is the fuinjutsu. During the invasion of Uzushiokagure he used the system to copy a lot of fuinjutsu but he never tried to use them. It almost seems like his fuinjutsu abilities are zero. Yet our mc knows that it is a ninja art that can defeat the most powerful creatures in the world of naruto and create OP techniques such as the Hirashin technique. Honestly I'm glad that as a ninja he has a lot of flaws, but I find it inconceivable that Mc keeps his arrogance without trying to cover up his flaws as a ninja.

4yr
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