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Primordial_OriginLv23yr
2021-09-23 02:43

End of vol 1 so far. ​Will continue but I'm very much confused and annoyed. Will update my rating once I've read more. For now that is my rating (4.0-all 5 stars exept for Storg Development with 3 stars and Character Design with 2 stars) Reasons/Questions: Minimal changes to none so far based on the ending of Volume 1. Which is BS considering the supposedly butterfly effect of his presence in the story. Another BS as well is regarding MC's budding emotions to essentially nerf his rationality and intelligence. Him being made a creepy possessive like teenager all pumped up by hormones. Pretty disappointing. Also, didn't the MC have guns as well? So confused why he didn't use it so far. Also it should be an advanced or a bit better than conventional ones, considering him supposedly being genius and cautious. This is based on how he thinks he is being chased by someone to the point of chasing him all they way to another universe and him having unheard of levels of survival instinct from his backstory. Therefore he should be continuously thinking of ways to strengthen himself or how to better protect himself in whatever way possible to survive. And in a planet where no mystical energy and barriers exist, etc. Cold weapons will always be more safe and efficient weapon of choice. This also proven considering his hand were almost punctured through by a bullet near the end of Vol 1. Moreover, what enemy are we talking about here? I thought everyone in Universe 0 died. So no evidence of him being alive in the first place should be present to let his enemies know he is alive. And even if there is a way to know. With him being the creator of the device to transport himself out of Universe 0 despite its barriers being strengthened to multiple levels not knowing where he will end up to. How could his enemies know and chase him? That would make their technology the same level or just a tad bit lower compared or even higher to what the MC has access to. And with him being a Homo-Superior which are Pinnacle Race in terms of technology and including his advantages gained from his family should be impossible. Futhermore, isn't 'psyche' pertains to mind? So how can his soul be damaged if Alice dies?? Shouldn't the soul damage be an effect of the more sacred connection being the 'soul mates' instead of the 'psyche-imprinting' ???

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Primordial_OriginLv2

Dropped it at the start of Volume 4. I'll let the rating stay the same. It's really not that bad at all but it's just isn't my cup of tea. So I won't lower the rating just because of my preference but stay objective just like how I did only my original review. Still same reason I dropped it and why I gave a 4.0 rating. The way the MC developed.... him ultra nerf being techno-maner/genius/SRNT/came from a highly advanced age but can't seem the hack a freaking PRIMITIVE(On his PoV) satellite. Tsk. What BS. From ultra killer massacring top clan of a pinnacle race to getting knocked out due plain stupidity by putting too much power to his kick due to disgust (not wanting to be touched by something tenctacle like mutation of T-zombie). Too long resident evil saga. Literal 5 volumes. Too slow for pacing for me. There's a few more but I will leave it just that. To be fair. Others might like or others might not like it. I'm the latter. For future readers, your choice...pick your poison.

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KiiidddLv14

This I what I was worried about, I am at ch.5 so right after the prologue and this novel seems so jumbled together and with the lack of understanding given to the read that it definitely makes me worry about the rest of the novel

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