Primordial_Origin
Born from the Primal Chaos. Strongest of the Primordials. Creator of the Origin Path.
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Beautiful chapter. Splendid plot and machinations moving. This story not having enough Power Stones and comments is injustice. Hope this story gets picked up by the mainstream readers soon. There's a ton of ASOIAF/GoT fics but so few have the quality enough for it to be a worth while read. This story sure is worth it in my opinion. Looking forward to more! All power to the author of this amazing story. 🔥
Given how the Hydra didn't got the scepter so they won't be able to conduct experiments with it, does it mean that Wanda and Pietro won't have their powers? Or they would still acquire it when Damian finally enacts his plan to return the energy levels of Earth to what it was before in Ancient Times thereby masproducing Mutants.
Does it really have 5 legs? Even the pup version also has 5 legs on it.
Night-impossible? Should be nigh-impossible I think and also to what? I wonder as well why they didn't just transport several more Tier 11 experts or Familiars given that they would only be needed for a day or few days at most. Essentially an inconsequential time especially given how the five elders, architect, and diablo are already Tier 12 and present still in Astral Boundary. If they could have 7 spare Tier 12's surely the Tier 11's is already at least 2 dozen. So, transporting a few more through the portal just like Vena at Grayfia is doable and more strategic given the importance of what they are trying to do. My guess would be that the author just didn't thought of it given how before this he was having a massive writer's block to the point of making an entire filler arc like Interlude just to be able to post something in the meanwhile.
Selene is slowly turning into a textbook cockroach villain which I'm pretty sure the greater majority of readers regardless of their preference for type of stories hate. Really wish Selene to get axed soon. I'm also a bit confused with MC's meta knowledge about Marvel and his access to internet plus the hellfire club data, doesn't he know that Selene is a monarch of a country which means they could easily find where she is? If I got it right it looks like he is postponing their hunt for Selene due to not knowing her whereabouts when her country is easily a good place to at the very least start looking at or attract her attention or forced her to come out of hiding.
For someone who just said about what truly matters is 'love' before dying and wishes to see her again in heaven as hid last thought. It is pretty hard to believe considering he didn't thought of her even once or asked about her during his meeting with TOAA. Also, I could accept and believe his reaction when he finished his new discovery in chapter 1, but his reaction after meeting TOAA is pretty hard to take given his supposed age when he died. Anw, that's all, don't really have a negative or positive take overall when he chose nothing for his 'golden finger'. Fanfic wise it really is unique which makes the premise alone interesting for me.
Can't wait for this story to officially end. This story is easily one of the best GoT/ASOIAF fanfic in the whole internet right now and a complete carefully planned ending would solidify that statement more. Unlike other equally stunning fics out there but failed to deliver a beautiful finishing touches making the overall story sub-par. Thanks for the chapter!
If at some point in your life you've already amassed enough wealth in the unit of Billions, I highly doubt you'd get shocked and excited by earning a few millions. Especially given how he alone could easily do that given his powers and the big fat red paint he put on his back by his actions and display of powers during the heist. He did retain all his past life's memories, intelligence, and wisdom right? I feel like the mc is lacking so much in terms of strategic mindset and long term planning given his past occupation. Overall, still a very entertaining read so far and looking forward to more. Thanks for the chapter!
I'm a bit confused, I thought he already awakened the Tensei-Mangekyou based on Chapter 4 after eating his first Chakra Fruit. Does it mean he is stuck on his progress to further develop it? Because from what I understand he is currently trying to evolved his Tensei-Sharigan on this chapter which contradicts what happened in Chapter 4.