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2022-10-09 03:40

The novel creates a story where the main character is born as an infinite powered god into a royal family. The mc isnt explicity told he has infinite power so he doesnt realize it, at all, even though his status shows he has infinity in every stat including money. The premise of the novel, the mc being infinitely op, which draws people in, is a blatant lie. sure, his status says “infinite” but he has no trouble controlling his strength, speed, or intelligence. he is also immortal but that hasnt even been mentioned. The writing is sub-par. the author uses spaces inbetween letters (ex. a a a a h h h h) which serves no purpose other than to increase the length of the chapter and to annoy the reader. this does not change, the author acknowledges the criticism and ignores it. The world building is great, like every novel with the previous charactersitics. The author places more attention to the world building then they do the actual main character. In my opinion, the author is trying to place the mc low on the progressiom spectrum to allow for more chapters, since authors dont know how to write an mc that doesnt train every couple of chapters, but there isnt any suspense of wonder to the result of the training. his training will be veiwed as pure idiocy later on so how could i care for it? The people he meets are interesting and he isnt sure about being their “master” which makes sense, thats weird, but he doesnt have any specialized connection to ant other character. he is fond of his sister but the most we read of it if a couple paragraphs. I assume the story picks up once he realizes hes op but i dont think it can come back from this redundancy of power scaling.

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and it's because the mc got senile after his death lol

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