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SpectralApparition
SpectralApparitionLv54yr
2020-11-29 02:11

This story falls in the same pit of those other authors using the "old man" age without actually have the mc act smarter than your average 12-18 year old mc in other stories. could not read pass 5 since it weird me out when I see the mc acting like that (and no, mc is not acting to hide anything since it's him speaking to himself, already giving me an idea of what his actual mental age actually is) If you skip and ignore tha "old man" then it's ok. I think it's the same level of writing/plot you are probably accustom to in this site.

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it could have been a good story only ruined by the bad writing

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