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2021-01-14 11:09

I think this the author's first story?? or maybe he is new to this kind of entertainment? I mean writing novels. I get it, he is trying to implement some comedy which didn't work for me I guess since it's pretty childish, I still don't get it what's the used of infinity money and everything. He has infinity mana, great but still weak, probably some "spicy drama" also ruin your story but anyway, Just like other reviews he is pretty, I mean very stupid and naive, if your reason is he has a "child body" it will not affect your mental age, How can someone be stupid he just idle for 5 years, even a **** will use that year to train, he didn't utilize his cheats and I don't get the point of giving him so. Overall this is the story for someone who wants to start reading novels. I have countless years of experience reading novels, and no my standards are not that high but the story is pretty tolerable for some time.

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Although, I enjoyed it, keep up the good work author-nim 👍

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