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KeiysLv134yr
2020-07-29 14:51

You need to read this novel!!! (This review is based on chapters up to the 82nd) Firstly, this is not your typical reincarnation story. The story is full of mysteries that will never fail to hook you. The plot is multi-layered so you won’t be able to guess everything in one go, hence it’s not boring or predictable. I love how author reveal one thing after another in a pace that is neither too slow nor too hasty. So, there is not one chapter that I find boring or unnecessary. This is such a nice thing because sometimes I find stories (even those that I really like) to be dragging or too slow. I can totally feel that the plot is well thought and solid. Secondly, I love how the chapters are quite long. So even if author only updates one chapter daily, but the reading experience is kind of similar to reading 2 chapters daily. So even though the novel has only 82 chapters as of now, but I think it is quite comparable to 150 chapters of most other novels. So far I’ve only encountered 2 or 3 books in webnovel that publish long chapters like this one. So I really really love the author for this. And so far the update seems regular; one chapter daily with extra chapter once in a while. Thirdly, I love the character build in this story. For starter, I so very much in love with both the main couple. The FL was supposedly a villainess in her first life but seems like there is some conspiracies behind the happenings in her previous life. And I love how thoroughly author incorporated the legend of a phoenix in her character; from how she lives a few life with one being better than the previous to her being the heart of phoenix. She is lovely, smart and has a mature beauty; beautiful face with a seductive body. The ML is portrayed as a very good looking man. But because he had lived a very hard life since young, he is quite aloof and quiet. But after meeting the FL, he starts changing and find enjoyment in interacting with her. He is notorious for being the ‘shadow beast’ but personality he is a gentleman through and through. He fits with the saying ‘gentleman in the streets, beast in the sheets’ 😝. I really love how he is with the FL. Their love and passion for each other are to die for and I love every fluffy and steamy moments of them 😆. So, give this a try and you’ll love it!

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sola_colaAuthor

Thank you for the review! So far. this is one of the few reviews that made me cry. I'm so touched. Thank you for appreciating the story, the characters, and the pacing. I've always worried about whether the flow of the story is going too fast. This comment puts me at ease. Again, thank you. I mean it. :)

KeiysLv13

You’re welcome 😊. I’m glad this review makes you feel that way. It’s the least I could do to show my appreciation and support for this novel. And actually, I should be thanking you for writing this amazing story. I think this is comfortably paced. It might seem fast by a glimpse but because of the world and time setting, and most importantly the experiences/memories of FL’s first life, the pace is definitely justifiable. I don’t find it necessary for their progress to be dragged as it is in accordance to the FL’s resolve and ML’s character. I’m sure that most people will like this novel, it’s the matter of whether they’d discover this or not. I’ve stumbled upon this book and added it to my library a few weeks back but only read it just recently. I think maybe you could add something to the synopsis to hook new readers even more? Like maybe hinting them on how this story is full of mysteries and twists (without spoiling the plot of course 😉). Or maybe include some excerpt of an interesting scene into the synopsis (which is many 😆)? Hehe idk but I think the synopsis doesn’t quite reflect the awesomeness of this story. Or maybe you can pin some reviews that you think might be helpful for the novel. I’ve seen some authors do that and I find it very helpful because I would read the reviews first before starting a novel. Hehe I hope this could help and I’m not babbling too much.

sola_cola:Thank you for the review! So far. this is one of the few reviews that made me cry. I'm so touched. Thank you for appreciating the story, the characters, and the pacing. I've always worried about whether the flow of the story is going too fast. This comment puts me at ease. Again, thank you. I mean it. :)
sola_colaAuthor

Thank you for the advice! 🥰 I'll work on a better synopsis soon. 😊

Keiys:You’re welcome 😊. I’m glad this review makes you feel that way. It’s the least I could do to show my appreciation and support for this novel. And actually, I should be thanking you for writing this amazing story. I think this is comfortably paced. It might seem fast by a glimpse but because of the world and time setting, and most importantly the experiences/memories of FL’s first life, the pace is definitely justifiable. I don’t find it necessary for their progress to be dragged as it is in accordance to the FL’s resolve and ML’s character. I’m sure that most people will like this novel, it’s the matter of whether they’d discover this or not. I’ve stumbled upon this book and added it to my library a few weeks back but only read it just recently. I think maybe you could add something to the synopsis to hook new readers even more? Like maybe hinting them on how this story is full of mysteries and twists (without spoiling the plot of course 😉). Or maybe include some excerpt of an interesting scene into the synopsis (which is many 😆)? Hehe idk but I think the synopsis doesn’t quite reflect the awesomeness of this story. Or maybe you can pin some reviews that you think might be helpful for the novel. I’ve seen some authors do that and I find it very helpful because I would read the reviews first before starting a novel. Hehe I hope this could help and I’m not babbling too much.
sola_colaAuthor

+ i'll try to figure out how to pin a review. TBH, webnovel still confuses me even if it has already been almost 2 months since i started to write here. i only post the update, read the comments and reply if my wifi is cooperating, then log out. i guess i need to study how to use the app properly to promote my story better 😅

Keiys:You’re welcome 😊. I’m glad this review makes you feel that way. It’s the least I could do to show my appreciation and support for this novel. And actually, I should be thanking you for writing this amazing story. I think this is comfortably paced. It might seem fast by a glimpse but because of the world and time setting, and most importantly the experiences/memories of FL’s first life, the pace is definitely justifiable. I don’t find it necessary for their progress to be dragged as it is in accordance to the FL’s resolve and ML’s character. I’m sure that most people will like this novel, it’s the matter of whether they’d discover this or not. I’ve stumbled upon this book and added it to my library a few weeks back but only read it just recently. I think maybe you could add something to the synopsis to hook new readers even more? Like maybe hinting them on how this story is full of mysteries and twists (without spoiling the plot of course 😉). Or maybe include some excerpt of an interesting scene into the synopsis (which is many 😆)? Hehe idk but I think the synopsis doesn’t quite reflect the awesomeness of this story. Or maybe you can pin some reviews that you think might be helpful for the novel. I’ve seen some authors do that and I find it very helpful because I would read the reviews first before starting a novel. Hehe I hope this could help and I’m not babbling too much.
KeiysLv13

Oh me too hahah I’ve been here since last year but I still don’t know much about this app; I read, comment, vote, basically only the basic things. I’ve been told that I can add tag to a novel even as reader but up till now I still haven’t figured out how 😅. Anyways, good luck author 💪💪.

sola_cola:+ i'll try to figure out how to pin a review. TBH, webnovel still confuses me even if it has already been almost 2 months since i started to write here. i only post the update, read the comments and reply if my wifi is cooperating, then log out. i guess i need to study how to use the app properly to promote my story better 😅
Sage_GeorgeLv13

I wasn't sure I was going to like this novel. But your review tipped it over the edge. So, thank you.

KeiysLv13

You’re welcome ☺️. Do give this a try! The story is really good!!

Sage_George:I wasn't sure I was going to like this novel. But your review tipped it over the edge. So, thank you.
ChayeshyaLv2

💞💞💖💖💖

RainyDay87Lv2

Its the same for me

Sage_George:I wasn't sure I was going to like this novel. But your review tipped it over the edge. So, thank you.
hobbesLv2

totally agree with you !!!

HeryewillkillLv1

yoo this review is halla detailed tho 🤭

yfc_aztigmaeLv12

this is the review I've been looking for .

Bell_ChanLv2

i agree

emachinexrerreLv13

typical smytical I'm on it boss

Tejaswi_Dut_SharmaLv13

I want to read something lite so please tell me in this book there is any kind of misunderstanding between couple or not

sola_cola:Thank you for the review! So far. this is one of the few reviews that made me cry. I'm so touched. Thank you for appreciating the story, the characters, and the pacing. I've always worried about whether the flow of the story is going too fast. This comment puts me at ease. Again, thank you. I mean it. :)
sola_colaAuthor

the male and female lead have good communication. :)

Tejaswi_Dut_Sharma:I want to read something lite so please tell me in this book there is any kind of misunderstanding between couple or not
WuW_YoULv2

WoW..this is the most enjoyable novel I've read so far this story is so good I can't stop reading it and I like this novel cause the MC is not weak and a pushover and the ML is so understanding to the MC..😆😆😆😆😆😆😆I really like it.. thanks author for making this novel so enjoyable to read😊😊😊

SA_RA_9787Lv2

plz like here

Hari_Priya_4989Lv4

is it completed?

Mack_an_CheeseLv3

I think it's been like 2 to 3yrs that I've been on Webnovel and I only just found out last week what the points are used for😂 I didn't know I could buy fast passes and borders for my profile pic💀😭

Keiys:Oh me too hahah I’ve been here since last year but I still don’t know much about this app; I read, comment, vote, basically only the basic things. I’ve been told that I can add tag to a novel even as reader but up till now I still haven’t figured out how 😅. Anyways, good luck author 💪💪.
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RetrenityLv13

Let me just start off by with this: this novel never crossed my mind to read it because of the TITLE. It honestly reminds me of many popular translated (I guess not translated as well) Chinese novel titles on here that feel shallow and flat. Though I am up-to-date with the current chapter I’m still not an advocate for the title even now. HOWEVER, let’s just say that in this case the story overpowers my disapprovement of the title that much more. This novel popped up on my recommended novel list for the 7 day reading challenge. With little to nothing I wanted to choose to read from, I decided to give it a shot since who doesn’t like a hot ML who’s a captain?! (plus other reviews who claimed the novel is fluff & candies++👍🏻) Anyways, I’m very impressed that I was hooked onto the story within the first 5 chapters. As mentioned in the synopsis, FL was given another chance to live her first life. She changes for the better and becomes a much more mature and charming person (plus a bit of feistiness to top it off😉). And it’s even better that she and the ML meet near the beginning of the novel🥰 Their love is to die for! They have great trust in one another, good communication to prevent major misunderstandings, and so much fluff and PDA for readers to gladly drown in😂 No shame! AND ML is such a cutie and deserves the world❤️ He is very respectful and always gets the consent of FL before he engages in anything intimate with her. They really are each other’s world🥺 (Heck, where’s my Kiho out there?!😒) The story progression feels very steady despite the two leads jumping into their romance right off the bat. But there is still a good pace that it follows to further heighten and reinforce their relationship. A couple of grammar and spelling errors but it is dismissable and doesn’t hinder the reading progress. Overall, LOVE the story so far. I remember the author mentioning how the story might end between 200-250 chapters, which I think is a wise idea. I can see how this novel could be extended with longer arc lines and more fillers to drag the story out to 300-400 chapters. But I think the value of those -250 chapters will far over weigh that of something more lengthy for the sake of adding more. Lady ‘Crab Goddess’ Tilly X Captain ‘Cinnamon Roll’ Kiho fighting!🥰❤️ And fighting, dear Author! Take care of your health and those around you to give us more lovely content🙈🤗

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