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archiey_Lv104yr
2020-06-19 15:03

Definitely recommended! I ended up binge read all the available chapter😂 The chapter length is very comfortable along with the plot development. This story will make you hooked up and wanting more especially to know more about the mystery and conspiracy circulating princess nia and the fire mages... Perhaps there's more to it? Obviously, don't forget about the romance between Tilly and Kiho. Their relationship development is fast but at a comfortable paced. Their interactions always keep me smiling the whole time😍 Tilly shamelessness is no joke when it comes to making Winter😂 I wonder what will they be like when Winter is born? Also, can I get a Kiho for myself too, author? I hope more people would discover this story in the future and best regards to you author! Your writing skills is great, I barely noticed a grammar mistake too. As a reader, please continue to write with passion and don't overwork yourself❤️ Great things always took time in my opinion. A big thanks to you author for writing the story🤗❤️Looking forward for your future work too!❤️❤️❤️ Stay safe and healthy everyone!💕

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archiey_
archiey_Lv10

Almost forgot, how many chapter are you planning to write? I really like the story and the character too especially Kiho😭❤️ Thanks again author 😆😆💕

sola_cola
sola_colaAuthor

Thank you for the review! <3 I want a Kiho, too. T_T This is going to be a long journey. >.< I don't think a hundred chapters would be enough. The real story would actually begin once Winter is born. But I don't want to rush it so I'm taking my time in developing Tilly and Kiho's relationship first. >.<

nanchii
nanchiiLv4

Author-nim more power to you..the more i read the deeper i sink with this book..this is a hidden gem and im glad i found it.i really hope many readers will uncover this treasure and i like everything about this novel i dont feel any cliche even though i have read many transmigrated novels and villainess theme books..

Keiys
KeiysLv13

A long journey? Will it reach a thousand chapters? Do you have an estimation in mind author? I need to prepare mentally in case this will be a very long novel. Hehe. And yeah, don’t rush things author. So far your pace is really good. And I’m totally enjoying Tilly and Kiho’s romantic progress.

sola_cola:Thank you for the review! <3 I want a Kiho, too. T_T This is going to be a long journey. >.< I don't think a hundred chapters would be enough. The real story would actually begin once Winter is born. But I don't want to rush it so I'm taking my time in developing Tilly and Kiho's relationship first. >.<
Keiys
KeiysLv13

A hundred percent agree with you!!!!

nanchii:Author-nim more power to you..the more i read the deeper i sink with this book..this is a hidden gem and im glad i found it.i really hope many readers will uncover this treasure and i like everything about this novel i dont feel any cliche even though i have read many transmigrated novels and villainess theme books..
sola_cola
sola_colaAuthor

Hi! Haha no, this won't reach a thousand chapters. Tilly and Kiho's story will end around 200-250 chapters, I guess. Then, the story will focus on Winter... but only if the readers would be interested to read his story. Hehe.

Keiys:A long journey? Will it reach a thousand chapters? Do you have an estimation in mind author? I need to prepare mentally in case this will be a very long novel. Hehe. And yeah, don’t rush things author. So far your pace is really good. And I’m totally enjoying Tilly and Kiho’s romantic progress.
Keiys
KeiysLv13

Oh that’s a relief!! By ‘focus on Winter’, do you mean that the TillyxKiho story/current plot will be wrapped up and moving on to a totally new plot for Winter?

sola_cola:Hi! Haha no, this won't reach a thousand chapters. Tilly and Kiho's story will end around 200-250 chapters, I guess. Then, the story will focus on Winter... but only if the readers would be interested to read his story. Hehe.
sola_cola
sola_colaAuthor

Yep. I've already started the draft for Winter's story. Tilly and Kiho's story is already done in my rough draft. The major events are already established in my notes, but the execution/build up is taking longer than what I initially expected. I didn't want the story to feel like it's being rushed, but I also don't want to drag it. But yeah, I think the current plot will be wrapped around 200-250 chapters, then it will focus on Winter's story. If the plot in my head won't change, Winter's story will only take a hundred chapters.

Keiys:Oh that’s a relief!! By ‘focus on Winter’, do you mean that the TillyxKiho story/current plot will be wrapped up and moving on to a totally new plot for Winter?
Keiys
KeiysLv13

Wow that’s nice!! I’m even more excited now that I know you have the rough draft finished!! All the best author 👍💪.

sola_cola:Yep. I've already started the draft for Winter's story. Tilly and Kiho's story is already done in my rough draft. The major events are already established in my notes, but the execution/build up is taking longer than what I initially expected. I didn't want the story to feel like it's being rushed, but I also don't want to drag it. But yeah, I think the current plot will be wrapped around 200-250 chapters, then it will focus on Winter's story. If the plot in my head won't change, Winter's story will only take a hundred chapters.
Keiys
KeiysLv13

Wow that’s nice!! I’m even more excited now that I know you have the rough draft finished!! All the best author 👍💪.

sola_cola:Yep. I've already started the draft for Winter's story. Tilly and Kiho's story is already done in my rough draft. The major events are already established in my notes, but the execution/build up is taking longer than what I initially expected. I didn't want the story to feel like it's being rushed, but I also don't want to drag it. But yeah, I think the current plot will be wrapped around 200-250 chapters, then it will focus on Winter's story. If the plot in my head won't change, Winter's story will only take a hundred chapters.
Yukiyo_Yuri
Yukiyo_YuriLv3

There is a side story that talks about Keho after meeting Tilly. But I did not find the link😭😭😭😭

Ikhlas_Ben
Ikhlas_BenLv1

Thank you!❤️

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Retrenity
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Let me just start off by with this: this novel never crossed my mind to read it because of the TITLE. It honestly reminds me of many popular translated (I guess not translated as well) Chinese novel titles on here that feel shallow and flat. Though I am up-to-date with the current chapter I’m still not an advocate for the title even now. HOWEVER, let’s just say that in this case the story overpowers my disapprovement of the title that much more. This novel popped up on my recommended novel list for the 7 day reading challenge. With little to nothing I wanted to choose to read from, I decided to give it a shot since who doesn’t like a hot ML who’s a captain?! (plus other reviews who claimed the novel is fluff & candies++👍🏻) Anyways, I’m very impressed that I was hooked onto the story within the first 5 chapters. As mentioned in the synopsis, FL was given another chance to live her first life. She changes for the better and becomes a much more mature and charming person (plus a bit of feistiness to top it off😉). And it’s even better that she and the ML meet near the beginning of the novel🥰 Their love is to die for! They have great trust in one another, good communication to prevent major misunderstandings, and so much fluff and PDA for readers to gladly drown in😂 No shame! AND ML is such a cutie and deserves the world❤️ He is very respectful and always gets the consent of FL before he engages in anything intimate with her. They really are each other’s world🥺 (Heck, where’s my Kiho out there?!😒) The story progression feels very steady despite the two leads jumping into their romance right off the bat. But there is still a good pace that it follows to further heighten and reinforce their relationship. A couple of grammar and spelling errors but it is dismissable and doesn’t hinder the reading progress. Overall, LOVE the story so far. I remember the author mentioning how the story might end between 200-250 chapters, which I think is a wise idea. I can see how this novel could be extended with longer arc lines and more fillers to drag the story out to 300-400 chapters. But I think the value of those -250 chapters will far over weigh that of something more lengthy for the sake of adding more. Lady ‘Crab Goddess’ Tilly X Captain ‘Cinnamon Roll’ Kiho fighting!🥰❤️ And fighting, dear Author! Take care of your health and those around you to give us more lovely content🙈🤗

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