Review Detail of Darin4 in The Mage of Primordial Chaos

Item: The Mage of Primordial Chaos
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

Darin4Lv133yrDarin4

Honestly, it would be better if the novel was 3rd POV. I'm not saying the 1st POV was bad, it i just that it would feel more comfortable and more enjoyable if it was 3rd POV. Your story is good, i hope you don't stop and keep the good work. Only slight mistakes but the 1st person perspective is really not for me. I don't know, last time, i was fine with it, but now... Nevertheless, i will continue reading your story for the sake of harem and romance and some overpowered shits LOL!

The Mage of Primordial Chaos

Cyclxne

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CyclxneAuthorCyclxne

Personal preference - I just thought 1st POV was better because it could really bring out the characters' emotions and thoughts more, which is an essential part of this novel.

3yr

Darin4Lv13Darin4

Yeah, but it could be better when 3rd POV. well, if you make another story, i think 3rd person would make it more appealing.

Cyclxne:Personal preference - I just thought 1st POV was better because it could really bring out the characters' emotions and thoughts more, which is an essential part of this novel.

3yr

CyclxneAuthorCyclxne

I have one in the planning.

Darin4:Yeah, but it could be better when 3rd POV. well, if you make another story, i think 3rd person would make it more appealing.

3yr