Darin4
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please make Tsunade a virgin author. She's a virgin in the original ,right? an old virgin lol but it's up to you, just a suggestion.
the romance is LIT!
knowing will's gf will most likely have a role that will require to kiss someone that is not will, Imma go. I believe that when you're in love with someone, no matter what, you cannot have an intimate moments with another man. that's how I was taught by my parents. sorry, I know some people are open with it but I'm not so I guess goodluck! also, don't comment on this to try and argue with me because we all know we all have different opinions from each other.
harness culti
no it is not. some countries don't bother to learn English at all. go to Japan or china and you'll see that most ppl there only speaks their native language.
author's other novel is pure Chad tho🤣
haven't read it yet but the grammar is not good. I understand that author is improving that's why I suggest u find a willing editor so that this masterpiece become more famous. I think I will comeback once the early chapters are fixed because I can't really read with so many grammatical errors. just keep doing your best and hope u find an editor!
this can be real. just look at the poorest countries and you will see a child at this age working his ass of to live.
remember, this is not a realistic fiction. so I should not use ur common sense here.