Err... this is awkward. I do like the story, but after around 200 chapter the quality keep dropping. The scenes are not concise. New information, most times useless keep popping up or contradicting something previous said. Lots of stuff repeated or explained without necessity as if to just make the word count bigger. Author seemed in doubt about the genre of the book and it took some weird turns too many times. The recurring "wont hear others and assume things" is too much and annoying... The only reason I'm not dropping this is because I... had mistakenly bought the entire book, enticed by the fist 100 chapter that i got free reading. Quick resume of the grades; Writing quality: lack of consistence and flow, had to re-read a lot. Story development: Maybe this deserve a slightly better grade, but the pacing is horrible, the good plot is heavily injuried by weird turn of events revelations, a completely new "important point never before mentioned but must be aware"... it lacks polishing. Character Design: Personally wise is pretty good, nice variety though cliche leads. Too many lovestruck woman, but different aproaches... but their description is all over the place. I've lil idea of how they look besides a weird poem. Some characteristics seems to be added just to try to make a scene more "tasty". Updating stability: Don't know, got the completed version. But so much seems badly done as if rushed that will be kept at 3, also for grade consistency. World Background: It honestly seems like a fanfic of Zombie Sister System, with other characters, the world is basically a copy, but with so lil details told that its sad.
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