Review Detail of Syphiinz in Fate's Reversal: The Divines Return
Review detail
Alright, so I guess this is the obligatory norm in this situation? But this is the 10th review. So I shall, ahem...shamelessly give myself 5 stars. As well as offer my own personal critique of my novel. I will avoid spoilers and only give what I think needs to be said. **Take this with a grain of salt as I am a completely new author striving to hone my skills. For starters, as this is made there are slightly over 60 chapters to the serialization. Much of the world has yet to be explored on both front; however, this wasn't the purpose of Volume 1. The background of the game world has been given but the complete state of both the real and game world hasn't. This will serve the purpose of generating flow in the next volume. I will try to intricately formulate scenarios that express the world's state without providing humongous lore dumps. As for character molds, I tried to veer away from the scripted and make their reactions fleshly and oftentimes comical depending on the situations. Characters with backstories, however, will have more distinct personality scenes as showed a few chapters already. Some might think the pacing for the level up and character gains are too swift, BUT, I try to this to the idea of low levels usually passing by quickly as with a real game. However, the novel will be incorporating many different paces to add diversity. So sit tight on that. Moreover, the common tropes found in these novels—I try to develop mine further. For example, the random reincarnation is not so random and instead facilitated by a being. Secondly, the random teacher making the MC OP ties into a deeper purpose; the power creep isn't easily gained. All in all, I've put a fair amount of effort that continuously accumulates into this novel. As a result, I hope you enjoy this novel as much as possible if you do give it a read. Thank you~
Fate's Reversal: The Divines Return
Syphiinz
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This novel is so beautiful. Words can hardly describe the amount of word play and story building expert ace needed to make such a solid and interesting story. Plot continues to suprise me, and although it is lacking in the beginning, the way the story and plot evolves smoothly , with the foreshadowing toward the future events, and the diction overall helps support the idea that this novel is without a doubt a underdog in the scene, and should be rated way, way higher than some other novels in the similar genre. It It is both unique and addicting to read. I appreciate the work you are doing, and hope more people get to see your novel and writing. Good luck!
ProfessorofCulture:So is this a novel purely in-game powerups or he gets stronger in real life too?
Neigh0:Is this a True Harem (As on More than 1 Lover/Polygamy) or is this a Harem where he only Loves 1 Girl and only her (Sword Art Online Harem?).
Good to know, a Harem Novel where MC ends up with 1 Wife and other Women are simple left out feels wrong.
Syphiinz:The former I guess. Never really got into SAO.
Does the game world become the real world as in so many other VRMMO novels? Are there "NPC's" In the harem? Is the Kingdom Building tag real?
Syphiinz:The former I guess. Never really got into SAO.
Not gonna say that is how it happens but the game world itself is a world. As for it turning into "THE" real, do you mean it become the world they solely live on?
BreezyNovels:Does the game world become the real world as in so many other VRMMO novels? Are there "NPC's" In the harem? Is the Kingdom Building tag real?
Yeah. Also, what is the harem member limit? And is the Guild MC makes the foundation for Kingdom Building?
Syphiinz:Not gonna say that is how it happens but the game world itself is a world. As for it turning into "THE" real, do you mean it become the world they solely live on?
Part of it and based on my plans, it shouldn't leave single digits. However, all this will be fleshed out properly.
BreezyNovels:Yeah. Also, what is the harem member limit? And is the Guild MC makes the foundation for Kingdom Building?
Is this purely a game novel or does he gain superpowers in real life like does his strength in the game transfer to real life(I dislike purely game novels)
Syphiinz:Both.
