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Bro nuwa has apologized like 3 times already in the story about not telling something that is both vital and life saving for him. She is acc useless except for being a guide. Just tell him whatever he needs to survive, be it now or in the future, cuz sheâs lucky he ainât angry she ALMOST KILLED HIM:D
What level was the grand general at again? I think it stated it somewhere in chapter 1
This...this is about to be...EPIC!!!
No, i believe that his illusion is still working as it would take some time to wear off. Plus not even his dad knows he is a boundless, and if he wouldâve told someone such as his recently aquired master, rather than his father first, it would kind of be illogical. Thier isnt that level of trust yet between them, and we barely know his masters opinions on things suck as the boundless, the kingdoms/generals, and his story. As the story progresses, I believe heâll find out, and i also believe that the emotional consequences and/or lack thereof still need to be shown, as only that will make the reader hooked to both thier stories.
This seems very, very specialized to his journey and what he has gained so far. Everyone probably has different requiremnents then for tiering up, as Im pretty sure a pure elemental weilder would not want to earn tier 3 blade masteriesđ Still, if this is the case can we say some requirements are more easier or harder than others, or are the requirements weighted equally to thier skill levels and how the system pervieves thier current and future achievements? Very curious
Great piece of work from the author. As long as he/she keeps chapters consistent, high quality, and bring more of himself and his character/views on this book, not only will those with provilage stay, but both the readers and the authour will never have a day when the book isnt good.đ
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Too much transmigration or typical xiania influence my guy or girl. It seems very blatant as the style continues, and you should continue the way you were writing before as it doesnt fit in to a marvel storyline, even more so in a modern day suoerhero fanfiction. Kill him? Sorry but this is not the cultivation world with bo morals or rules. Why would SHEILD willingly let thier agnets die, as even the lowest level ones are usefull? One other thing that strikes out is the way they are talking. Way too formal, and not fitting with the scenes of comics and movies. It just sounds weird if read out load. Also, one final thing. Promise to remember not to turn this into some type of CEO of money, and super in depth finacial story. In the end, others came her for the action, excitement, mystery, and noglastia of Marvel and its heroes/villians, not some suoer intricate company boss who would get thier buildings and corporations blown up by every other event in this world, as remember, it is not modern, rather dangerous and unique in its own way. This is a rant, and i truly hope you can take some pointers from me to obvioudly improve the story, and attract more Marvel or superhero lovers like me. Thanks
Widom over speed. Speed can be gained easily, but ultimately wisdom is more usefull foe an agent in his circumstanses, to not make foolish mistakes. For example, assuming Clint didnt have a way to find if he was taking advantage of him through his weird behaviour or even facial expressions.