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Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv133yrJasonenrick

Writing Quality- 5-Stars Stability of Updates - 4-Stars Story Development 2-Star Character Design 1-Star World Backgound 2-Star Okay, so I Think the First two are self explaining so I won't explain my why I set 5-and 4-Stars! Story Development is good and was good but there is no Goal for me in the Novel and I don't get why this Novel exists! So he has 3 wishes , is reincarnated in his Favourite Novel and loses against the Mc's of the Story,....would makes Sense!But!But, what will he do now that he lost against them when they were at their weakest! He loses All the matches in the middle school against Teiko ! So he can never say" I Played against the GOM and won" No, he won't ever be able to do that! My dream would be to beat them in a fair and regular match if I were to reincarnate in my Favourite Novel, that would be everyones Dream! Won't be possible now,aye? Bascially there is nothing for the Mc to do in the Novel , for me atleast ! Maybe Romance but that's it ! The Character makes no Sense as well and he is kinda Stupid! He makes no OP wishes so that it won't be easy but a hard! But now what?? He loses and his whole Peropose for being in that World isn't there anymore ! Like I said before, Why do people love hard games...because it taste even better If you win against your enemy Team If they are good and not Bad! Well doesn't Matter anymore now ,aye? Well, I just end it here, I get really frustated writing this because my Auto correction is driving me insanšŸ˜ šŸ˜ šŸ˜ šŸ„“šŸ„“šŸ˜µšŸ˜µ [ My Opinion ] I don't get why you write this ....there is no fun in it, no logic and the only way it can get worse If Riko Aida is going to be his girlfriend !

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Om_Patel_4281
Om_Patel_4281Lv13Om_Patel_4281

So you started to hate this novel,because it didnā€™t go the way you or the others like,thatā€™s f*****g stupid.If you want a story that goes your way make your god damn own.

Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv13Jasonenrick

At First, I didn't hate it, I wrote my honest opinion on this Novel and that's it ! Furthermore you have to say that my words are true because he won't be able to win the next two years, so....what's bis purpose?there is none. He could go to America and and Improve and play against Players like the GOM and with players like the GOM but that isn't the same as THE GOM! And you can say and Think what you want but it is impossible to win against the GOM the next two years and I can already see the Author writing how he wins the next two years because he awakens his Talent or some Bull**** ! But the GOM will too awaken their Talent the next two years and will grow stronger as will he .....so that's a NO GO And now you reck your little mind about the fact that I am speaking the Truth, or accept it !

Om_Patel_4281:So you started to hate this novel,because it didnā€™t go the way you or the others like,thatā€™s f*****g stupid.If you want a story that goes your way make your god damn own.
BleakSky
BleakSkyLv4BleakSky

Lmao you sound so stupid that's the same **** everyone says as a defense you ignore everything wrong and say this **** since you have nothing. It's not that it didn't go ā€ourā€ way it's that its stupid af. I don't know how many times I gotta say this 3 wishes all op, prior knowledge of world, etc, etc made pointless since he either doesn't use them properly or at all. Logic dictates he should have won but instead we get this forced garbage that leads to nothing but continuous losses and frustration on the reader's point of view. So was it worth it to have this forced rubbish just for the sake of plot. No, it wasn't. Unless author can give a spoiler of future plans this is my opinion and it won't change until that happens.

Om_Patel_4281:So you started to hate this novel,because it didnā€™t go the way you or the others like,thatā€™s f*****g stupid.If you want a story that goes your way make your god damn own.
Lize
LizeLv13Lize

He win againt gom tho.. Its 5 v 1.. And mc lost due to "luck".. And its not that KnB seirin canon never lose.. Its better this way.. If mc always win.. The story will become boring.. Try think if ONE person always win in any game he played in suppose to be TEAM game? There will be no story.. Its become boring.. mc will lost his motivation.. his enemy will lost their motivation too.. Its more than when GoM always win in canon.. The other enemy didnt have any will to fight back in canon.. And here mc.. he alone can make GoM fight hard and only win because of "luck".. Imagine if he win this tourney.. then win again for 3 times in a row.. And all of that win is because of him.. Not only that the enemy will lost motivation.. His team too.. Think about that for a sec dude..

Azen
AzenLv5Azen

I agree.

Lize:He win againt gom tho.. Its 5 v 1.. And mc lost due to "luck".. And its not that KnB seirin canon never lose.. Its better this way.. If mc always win.. The story will become boring.. Try think if ONE person always win in any game he played in suppose to be TEAM game? There will be no story.. Its become boring.. mc will lost his motivation.. his enemy will lost their motivation too.. Its more than when GoM always win in canon.. The other enemy didnt have any will to fight back in canon.. And here mc.. he alone can make GoM fight hard and only win because of "luck".. Imagine if he win this tourney.. then win again for 3 times in a row.. And all of that win is because of him.. Not only that the enemy will lost motivation.. His team too.. Think about that for a sec dude..
Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv13Jasonenrick

First of all, could you please make whole sentences? English isn't my mother language either but .....yours isn't really nice to read. Aynways, as I already mentioned ...he won't be able to win the next two years ...so him winning one of those 3 years is accactable ! And what is this Serin doesn't win all games either?? Of course not , they are a very very Bad Team at the beginning. I mean a ****ty Team. Each of the GOM goes to a Elite School with a Elite Team where they have a good Team/Trainer etc etc but Serin isn't a good school ...so of course they lose. They only become good because they have Rika, Kuruko and Kagami and the Team is able to Adept. So.... That's one of the worst Arguments I've ever read!

Lize:He win againt gom tho.. Its 5 v 1.. And mc lost due to "luck".. And its not that KnB seirin canon never lose.. Its better this way.. If mc always win.. The story will become boring.. Try think if ONE person always win in any game he played in suppose to be TEAM game? There will be no story.. Its become boring.. mc will lost his motivation.. his enemy will lost their motivation too.. Its more than when GoM always win in canon.. The other enemy didnt have any will to fight back in canon.. And here mc.. he alone can make GoM fight hard and only win because of "luck".. Imagine if he win this tourney.. then win again for 3 times in a row.. And all of that win is because of him.. Not only that the enemy will lost motivation.. His team too.. Think about that for a sec dude..
Sovereign_of_all
Sovereign_of_allLv14Sovereign_of_all

I think the main reason people are against him losing is because, since he couldn't beat them at their weakest, because of his team. How would he be able to beat them in the next 2 years unless he gets more amazing teammates in the following year.

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Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv13Jasonenrick

And it won't happen šŸ¤·ā€ā™‚ļø You pointed it out in 2-3 Short sentences !

Sovereign_of_all:I think the main reason people are against him losing is because, since he couldn't beat them at their weakest, because of his team. How would he be able to beat them in the next 2 years unless he gets more amazing teammates in the following year.
FilthiestCReader
FilthiestCReaderLv6FilthiestCReader

Wasn't it heavily hinted by the Author with his constant references to Shuns height and physique, his training in the court to improve his base skills, and his taunting of Haizaki that he would be defeating Teiko after they gain their abilities and techniques and also them awakening their skills just makes Shun better as he can perfectly copy them and with his growth from the 2nd year onwards his wish for a strong body will make him able to copy any of their moves. Also the whole story up until this point was the MC developing his own style and training to implement it with his skills which will lead him to on the fly be able to copy and change opponents moves to do what he wants with them. But the way they lost just isn't right but the Author seems to have a direction they want to take the story.

NormalGuy
NormalGuyLv5NormalGuy

A fair review but I'm confused, couldn't he and his team get better and win in the 3rd year of middle school when his team of students in the same year as him get better at team work and his abilities are fully ready to use like the other GoM? Or maybe he wants to fight each one at their strongest so he has 5 or 6 super strong teams to fight against in highschool. But now that you brought it up I'm confused on what the author is gonna do too.

NormalGuy
NormalGuyLv5NormalGuy

A fair review but I'm confused, couldn't he and his team get better and win in the 3rd year of middle school when his team of students in the same year as him get better at team work and his abilities are fully ready to use like the other GoM? Or maybe he wants to fight each one at their strongest so he has 5 or 6 super strong teams to fight against in highschool. But now that you brought it up I'm confused on what the author is gonna do too.

Visrow
VisrowLv14Visrow

You have to realize that shun is at his weakest as well but he still scored 77 point alone against them. Author has even said that in his second year that is when he will get even more op. Plus the main story is set in highschool, that's pretty much what this is building up to. You have to think of his middle school years as a giant training arc with plot building. Don't hate a story because of one small setback for character building. Think of this as the point in a cultivation novel where some rich young master kills mc's whole family, then mc goes out trains to oblivion and back before getting his revenge. Remember revenge is a dish best served cold...

Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv13Jasonenrick

My problem is that he doesn't have OP abilities, so him winning against a full Team with their awakend Abilities is in my honest opinion not possible! And that's exactly my problem that the auhtor will make the Mc win the next year or maybe two and that is if you want to believe it or not , not possible ! And If he doesn't win, yeah well then the whole Story is him losing 3 years in a row and the Story doesn't change because the GOM still exists because they won 3 years in a row ! He had a very good Senior Team this year with a uncrowned King but next year he will have a Junior Team that just have normal players ..... And he can't possible Think that he can win against the whole GOM when they awaken their abities ...... He does have inhuman reaction time and can copy other Player but the whole GOM has nearly inhuman reaction and have a full Team of Ace's ! They can look in the Future.... Can score from every point on the field They can copy other Player styles They have inhuman Passes ...... He wouldn't hav scored that many points without his Team backing him up .

FilthiestCReader:Wasn't it heavily hinted by the Author with his constant references to Shuns height and physique, his training in the court to improve his base skills, and his taunting of Haizaki that he would be defeating Teiko after they gain their abilities and techniques and also them awakening their skills just makes Shun better as he can perfectly copy them and with his growth from the 2nd year onwards his wish for a strong body will make him able to copy any of their moves. Also the whole story up until this point was the MC developing his own style and training to implement it with his skills which will lead him to on the fly be able to copy and change opponents moves to do what he wants with them. But the way they lost just isn't right but the Author seems to have a direction they want to take the story.
Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv13Jasonenrick

Please look into my latest reply (HunterRise) I don't want to repeat everything againšŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜ True Revenge is served Cold but only If you can have your revenge and that's unlikly here . At least not If the Author wants to write a plausible Story(more or less, I mean it is a reincarnated in a Anime Story ;) )

Visrow:You have to realize that shun is at his weakest as well but he still scored 77 point alone against them. Author has even said that in his second year that is when he will get even more op. Plus the main story is set in highschool, that's pretty much what this is building up to. You have to think of his middle school years as a giant training arc with plot building. Don't hate a story because of one small setback for character building. Think of this as the point in a cultivation novel where some rich young master kills mc's whole family, then mc goes out trains to oblivion and back before getting his revenge. Remember revenge is a dish best served cold...
Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv13Jasonenrick

And hey, all in all, the Author is approaching 300 reviewsšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

SushiKat
SushiKatLv4SushiKat

I'm so confused why on all these UTTER NOOBS think he can't win 2nd and 3rd year? who on Teikou Team can stop Shun offensive? HE IS UNSTOPPABLE ON OFFENSE END OF STORY. Teikou can get around him and score with PASSING THE BALL. END OF STORY. DOES NOT MATTER IF HE HAS PERFECT COPY OR GOD-SPEED IMPULSE. THE BALL WILL ALWAYS BE FASTER THAN THE PLAYER. So, shun win offense, Teiko win offense. It a shoot out for who scores more. So to get more points each will spam 3's. DOES NOT MATTER HOW MANY GOM players are on Teiko, they can only score 3 points at a time. Same as Shun. So at the end of the day, the Author decides who wins that 1 point difference games in 2nd and 3rd year. I like how all these trash noobs reviewing badly only cause they didn't like what they saw? Mate Story development has NOTHING TO DO WITH your opinion of whether he shoulda won or not. and you have the guts to try to explain some random nonsense. Character design 1 star? explain, the character has personality, behavior, fits in perfectly. You just SALTY LOSER who can't stand it when MC loses? I know your type your the type of person who likes to read only the following type of novels: 1.mc wins everything ( Chinese novels ) 2.mc gets all the girls (must have harem) 3. everything has to go the way mc wants 4. the world revolves around him or her alone. This isn't a dream where you win everything. So back to your self-illusioned world where you think MC cannot win in the 2nd and 3rd year. I'll tell you right now. I CAN PICK 5 people who have no SPECIAL skill whatsoever but can work together and be the best team in terms of teamwork and they would always win against the GOM-Players. PEOPLE NEED TO UNDERSTAND, DOES NOT MATTER WHO YOU HAVE ON TEAM OR HOW MANY GENIUSES YOU HAVE. AT THE END OF THE DAY THEY CAN SCORE 3 POINTS PER BASKET. Shun cannot be stopped offensively, and his defense might work 1 vs 1 but not if Teiko plays together as a team. So it's just a shoot out for who scores more. The other players on Teiko don't even matter, only Midorima vs Shun are the key players for the 2nd and 3rd year. whoever scores more 3 points win. Plus you seem to forget, it might not be ethically correct, but a broken genius is no genius, Shun can theoretically play like Hanamiya and break them physically. A REF CANT see A REF CANT CALL. SO INCORRECT, it's a 50/50 chance whoever wins in the 2nd and 3rd year. All up to the author on which direction he wants to go. Keep in mind, Middle School means nothing. Just there to help Players get started and BLOOM their talents, High-School is where it matters. Please keep your OBVIOUSLY baised rating to yourself and not try to justify it. I LIKE TO see how you argue against me. I dare you to try to argue this. Whoever scores more 3 points wins, 2nd, and 3rd year. END OF STORY. No one can stop them.

Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv13Jasonenrick

Puhhhh, it is so complicated to argue with such one-sided, simple-minded and unreasonable people like you. First of all, could you please stop writing with Caps, is is like I am arguing with a 5-year old kid in a Video Game! Furthermore ,Noob? Why do you say all those 'UTTER NOOBS'? It doesn't make sense at all. Nobody knows what you mean with those words, could be anybody! Also, are you obssessed with the Sentence... I quote: "THE BALL WILL ALWAYS BE FASTER THAN THE PLAYER" You already said this like...X-Times, please answer with something else. It looks like that's your only Arguement, to me ! In addition, you said that Shun's offense is unstoppable!?? Then here is my question:" Why did he loose then??? Because if his Offense is unstoppable then why did he loose? Why was he in the backlog for a bit of time with 26 points?" Surely, you have noticed you sentences:" The author decides who wins!" That means that there isn't any logic in this Novel at all and his father could possibly be Thanos and his uncle Tony Stark?? Because, the author decides, right??? Then we come to the point that you said:" Story Development has NOTHING TO DO WITH your opinion" Reviews are meant for us, the readers, to leave our opinion on the Novel and not to just place 5-Stars and leave! Besides, what gives u the right to say 1. Who I am 2. What I like 3. My personality etc...etc You don't know me and I don't know if you ever went to school because if, then you would have learnt how to write a Review and a comment. And you don't write about the Person behinde the Review, comment or the Novel/Book...But you write about his arguments and the Novel/Book! Additionaly you said that any average 5 Players could win against the GOM?????Wtf Do you even realize what you write??Please think before you write....! Then you said: I quote again like so often in this comment "A REF CANT see A REF CANT CALL" That means you want him to cheat and play unfair ???? You are definitely a good sports man it seems! *sarcasm* And you see.. I dare to argue against you ... Could you, if you rewrite me please for god sake, write like you want to argue against my arguements and not against me as a Person! Last thing I quote: "Please keep your OBVIOUSLY baised rating to yourself and not try to justify it " I d not know if you realize it or not but it isn't baised on anythig, that's just my honest Opinion on this Novel, never sad that it is bad or bad written ! i gave 5-Star for writing even if it isn't perfect! English isn't my mother language , so please ignore some grammar mistakes!

SushiKat:I'm so confused why on all these UTTER NOOBS think he can't win 2nd and 3rd year? who on Teikou Team can stop Shun offensive? HE IS UNSTOPPABLE ON OFFENSE END OF STORY. Teikou can get around him and score with PASSING THE BALL. END OF STORY. DOES NOT MATTER IF HE HAS PERFECT COPY OR GOD-SPEED IMPULSE. THE BALL WILL ALWAYS BE FASTER THAN THE PLAYER. So, shun win offense, Teiko win offense. It a shoot out for who scores more. So to get more points each will spam 3's. DOES NOT MATTER HOW MANY GOM players are on Teiko, they can only score 3 points at a time. Same as Shun. So at the end of the day, the Author decides who wins that 1 point difference games in 2nd and 3rd year. I like how all these trash noobs reviewing badly only cause they didn't like what they saw? Mate Story development has NOTHING TO DO WITH your opinion of whether he shoulda won or not. and you have the guts to try to explain some random nonsense. Character design 1 star? explain, the character has personality, behavior, fits in perfectly. You just SALTY LOSER who can't stand it when MC loses? I know your type your the type of person who likes to read only the following type of novels: 1.mc wins everything ( Chinese novels ) 2.mc gets all the girls (must have harem) 3. everything has to go the way mc wants 4. the world revolves around him or her alone. This isn't a dream where you win everything. So back to your self-illusioned world where you think MC cannot win in the 2nd and 3rd year. I'll tell you right now. I CAN PICK 5 people who have no SPECIAL skill whatsoever but can work together and be the best team in terms of teamwork and they would always win against the GOM-Players. PEOPLE NEED TO UNDERSTAND, DOES NOT MATTER WHO YOU HAVE ON TEAM OR HOW MANY GENIUSES YOU HAVE. AT THE END OF THE DAY THEY CAN SCORE 3 POINTS PER BASKET. Shun cannot be stopped offensively, and his defense might work 1 vs 1 but not if Teiko plays together as a team. So it's just a shoot out for who scores more. The other players on Teiko don't even matter, only Midorima vs Shun are the key players for the 2nd and 3rd year. whoever scores more 3 points win. Plus you seem to forget, it might not be ethically correct, but a broken genius is no genius, Shun can theoretically play like Hanamiya and break them physically. A REF CANT see A REF CANT CALL. SO INCORRECT, it's a 50/50 chance whoever wins in the 2nd and 3rd year. All up to the author on which direction he wants to go. Keep in mind, Middle School means nothing. Just there to help Players get started and BLOOM their talents, High-School is where it matters. Please keep your OBVIOUSLY baised rating to yourself and not try to justify it. I LIKE TO see how you argue against me. I dare you to try to argue this. Whoever scores more 3 points wins, 2nd, and 3rd year. END OF STORY. No one can stop them.
Pripriri
PripririLv5Pripriri

Fvk you haha

Om_Patel_4281:So you started to hate this novel,because it didnā€™t go the way you or the others like,thatā€™s f*****g stupid.If you want a story that goes your way make your god damn own.
Pripriri
PripririLv5Pripriri

I think it's the author fault

Lize:He win againt gom tho.. Its 5 v 1.. And mc lost due to "luck".. And its not that KnB seirin canon never lose.. Its better this way.. If mc always win.. The story will become boring.. Try think if ONE person always win in any game he played in suppose to be TEAM game? There will be no story.. Its become boring.. mc will lost his motivation.. his enemy will lost their motivation too.. Its more than when GoM always win in canon.. The other enemy didnt have any will to fight back in canon.. And here mc.. he alone can make GoM fight hard and only win because of "luck".. Imagine if he win this tourney.. then win again for 3 times in a row.. And all of that win is because of him.. Not only that the enemy will lost motivation.. His team too.. Think about that for a sec dude..
SushiKat
SushiKatLv4SushiKat

Still didn't actually come up with a reason as to how Shun will lose in 2nd or 3rd year though, you seem to think it matters that Teiko has 5 GOM but it doesn't, not against Shun at least, Only reason they were down 20-some points was Kuroko, but Kuroko can be easily stomped on if you know how, just make it so his presence on the court is increased, make Kuroko "beat" Shun like 3 or 4 times then everyone will notice kuroko, and he is screwed. You said my only argument was "Ball is faster than player" well it true 100% accurate and a FACT. What can Shun do, if he is on left side of the court and Akashi passes to someone on the right side of the court, "Shun can magically teleport and stop" get real baka. And Yea 5 average players that are PERFECT team play and teamwork can beat GOM, so what if they don't have fancy skills? I don't think you understand Passing is used to get around people and score. When I say this I mean like PERFECT, Perfect teamwork can beat Gom. Don't see why not? Gom scores 3 or 2 points per basket. So does the other team, how can you stop them? if they pass constantly to get around? But this only works in a theoretical world. I'll admit a team like this won't exist but it's just a way for me to say it doesn't matter how much of a genius each of them are individually, they can ONLY SCORE 3 POINTS AT A TIME. Shun only down 20-some points because of Kuroko, all Tokiwadai needs is someone else with the capabilities to stop shun, there is Takou, Izuki can also use his court-vision eagle eye to know where Kuroko is. Kuroko merely directs your vision elsewhere and using that time to "disappear". If you train someone to focus and ONLY focus kuroko regardless of what is hapening on the court, bam its over kuroko can't do ****. So yea, once again please give me a scenario in how Teiko can Stop Shun offensively in 2nd and 3rd year. I just gave you a way to Stop Kuroko ( only reason they lost ). And when I said Author decides I mean in the Shoot out of who scores more points. Does someone lose their stamina? Does accuracy drop for some shots? Blocks? Pressure affecting their shooting? 1 point difference, does that final shot go in or not? The author decides that. All I am saying is Stop Kuroko, stop Teiko, their talents can't stop him offensively. He can shut down 1 of them defensively depending on who he focuses, but the remaining 4 on Teiko team can pass around and score they are 4 gom level, but at the same time even if they are 4 gom level THEY CAN ONLY SCORE 2 or 3 points every time. Same as Shun on offense. So once again, offensive shoot out. You cannot use the excuse of they are 5 GOM shun can't win, there not logic to back that up. I PROVIDED YOU IN-GAME accurate scenario. God-speed impulse reflex to dodge and escape anyone on Teiko defense and score. But he can't use GSI on Teiko defensively as there are 5 PEOPLE not 1. THAT IS GSI WEAKNESS. IT CAN ONLY TARGET 1 person. At the end of the day you're just salty he lost cause of kuroko, and calling it a BS win. Which it was, the last shot could have gone in or not, AUTHOR CHOSE it to go in, but you have to understand in that game it was luck-based. So, I'll ask you please provide me a scenario in how Shun could lose 100%. With detail. I gave you a reason why he can't be stopped on Offensive and how he can win in 2nd and 3rd year. My statement is: Either team can win, we will just have to wait and see, its 50/50 from my neutral point of view.

Jasonenrick:Puhhhh, it is so complicated to argue with such one-sided, simple-minded and unreasonable people like you. First of all, could you please stop writing with Caps, is is like I am arguing with a 5-year old kid in a Video Game! Furthermore ,Noob? Why do you say all those 'UTTER NOOBS'? It doesn't make sense at all. Nobody knows what you mean with those words, could be anybody! Also, are you obssessed with the Sentence... I quote: "THE BALL WILL ALWAYS BE FASTER THAN THE PLAYER" You already said this like...X-Times, please answer with something else. It looks like that's your only Arguement, to me ! In addition, you said that Shun's offense is unstoppable!?? Then here is my question:" Why did he loose then??? Because if his Offense is unstoppable then why did he loose? Why was he in the backlog for a bit of time with 26 points?" Surely, you have noticed you sentences:" The author decides who wins!" That means that there isn't any logic in this Novel at all and his father could possibly be Thanos and his uncle Tony Stark?? Because, the author decides, right??? Then we come to the point that you said:" Story Development has NOTHING TO DO WITH your opinion" Reviews are meant for us, the readers, to leave our opinion on the Novel and not to just place 5-Stars and leave! Besides, what gives u the right to say 1. Who I am 2. What I like 3. My personality etc...etc You don't know me and I don't know if you ever went to school because if, then you would have learnt how to write a Review and a comment. And you don't write about the Person behinde the Review, comment or the Novel/Book...But you write about his arguments and the Novel/Book! Additionaly you said that any average 5 Players could win against the GOM?????Wtf Do you even realize what you write??Please think before you write....! Then you said: I quote again like so often in this comment "A REF CANT see A REF CANT CALL" That means you want him to cheat and play unfair ???? You are definitely a good sports man it seems! *sarcasm* And you see.. I dare to argue against you ... Could you, if you rewrite me please for god sake, write like you want to argue against my arguements and not against me as a Person! Last thing I quote: "Please keep your OBVIOUSLY baised rating to yourself and not try to justify it " I d not know if you realize it or not but it isn't baised on anythig, that's just my honest Opinion on this Novel, never sad that it is bad or bad written ! i gave 5-Star for writing even if it isn't perfect! English isn't my mother language , so please ignore some grammar mistakes!