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Om_Patel_4281

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  • Om_Patel_4281
    Om_Patel_42811yr
    Posted

    Everything has a 4 or a 5 star from me but story development and charachter design. I love stories that have the mc working through his personal problems, and becoming stronger due to it. However, this story is a continuous story of the mc getting depression, getting help, then something else happens for him to be more depressed. The whole story is just a cycle of depression the mc deals with and it starts to feel boring.

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    DC: DON'T UTTER A WORD
    Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
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  • Om_Patel_4281
    Om_Patel_42811yr
    Replied to Spabsta

    You seem like a person who only likes characters that are emotionless, and have no realistic factors. If you like that, then just read wish fulfillment, and stop wasting time by commenting with your horrible English.

    But, Icarus wasn't one to just wait for death with a resigned acceptance, he would rather fight it with every ounce of his being—even if he had to live the life of a paranoid wreck.
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    Fate/Defiance
    Anime & Comics · theMadLad
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  • Om_Patel_4281
    Om_Patel_42811yr
    Replied to Spabsta

    You live in a world where people can be murdered, but until you see it for yourself you do not understand how much danger you can be in. Icarus knew how powerful the gods are but seeing it for himself made him fear it more.

    That pain was only overwhelmed by the sheer weight of fear he felt when he witnessed Athena's actions. Watching his cousin be turned into a bird was something that changed the way he viewed the world, he finally truly understood how dangerous it was.
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    Fate/Defiance
    Anime & Comics · theMadLad
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  • Om_Patel_4281
    Om_Patel_42811yr
    Commented

    Yeah, I guess he forgot the whole Camelot incident.

    Pluto sighed. "I'm not that petty Miss Hansen, all I need is loyalty to the company."
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    Marvel: Breezing Through History as an Eternal
    Movies · mark_kiple
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  • Om_Patel_4281
    Om_Patel_42811yr
    Replied to Bob_Uchiha_XD

    If you have no criticism or positivity you sholdn’t review at all.

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    Marvel: Breezing Through History as an Eternal
    Movies · mark_kiple
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  • Om_Patel_4281
    Om_Patel_42811yr
    Posted

    I love this fanfic. I binged the whole story after reading the first chapter.

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    Marvel: Breezing Through History as an Eternal
    Movies · mark_kiple
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  • Om_Patel_4281
    Om_Patel_42811yr
    Replied to Juice_9768

    Maybe it’s the author’s first piece of literature. Most authors aren’t that great at writing when they start off.

    Ch 3 Analyzing the Benefits
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    Overlord: Ghosthood
    Anime & Comics · Month
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  • Om_Patel_4281
    Om_Patel_42811yr
    Replied to ProfessorofCulture

    A year is a long time.

    In these years, I'm starting to lose my sense of humanity. I'm starting to accept that I'm an eternal, not a human, and these humans are smaller and weaker than me, which is odd… considering I was once a human.
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    Marvel: Breezing Through History as an Eternal
    Movies · mark_kiple
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  • Om_Patel_4281
    Om_Patel_42811yr
    Posted

    This is stolen work. The original is from Paradox.

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    One piece : path to power
    Anime & Comics · DaoOfEternity
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  • Om_Patel_4281
    Om_Patel_42811yr
    Posted

    This is stolen work.

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    One piece : path to power
    Anime & Comics · DaoOfEternity
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  • Om_Patel_4281
    Om_Patel_42811yr
    Posted

    This stolen do not support It.

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    One piece : path to power
    Anime & Comics · DaoOfEternity
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  • Om_Patel_4281
    Om_Patel_42811yr
    Replied to ChadZoro99

    The original author is rewriting it.

    My Mom is Badass!
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    One piece : path to power
    Anime & Comics · DaoOfEternity
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  • Om_Patel_4281
    Om_Patel_42811yr
    Posted

    This is stolen work. Do not support it.

    altalt
    One piece : path to power
    Anime & Comics · DaoOfEternity
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  • Om_Patel_4281
    Om_Patel_42811yr
    Posted

    This is a great fanfic and it sucks that it is being stolen.

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    One Piece: Path to Power
    Anime & Comics · Paradox_
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  • Om_Patel_4281
    Om_Patel_42811yr
    Replied to Mesur

    This is stolen work. Please do not support this man.

    altalt
    One piece : path to power
    Anime & Comics · DaoOfEternity
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  • Om_Patel_4281
    Om_Patel_42811yr
    Posted

    Stolen.

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    One Piece: Path To Power
    Anime & Comics · LMAO99
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  • Om_Patel_4281
    Om_Patel_42811yr
    Posted

    Do not read this. This is a stolen story.

    altalt
    One piece : path to power
    Anime & Comics · DaoOfEternity
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  • Om_Patel_4281
    Om_Patel_42811yr
    Replied to KayNine

    This isn’t paradox. This is a dumbass whi stole his work.

    altalt
    One piece : path to power
    Anime & Comics · DaoOfEternity
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  • Om_Patel_4281
    Om_Patel_42811yr
    Commented

    Guys post 1 star reviews on the copies.

    This chapter has been deleted.
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    One Piece: Path to Power
    Anime & Comics · Paradox_
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  • Om_Patel_4281
    Om_Patel_42811yr
    Posted

    This is stolen work, as is DaoOfEternities.

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    One Piece: Path To Power
    Anime & Comics · LMAO99
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