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ToraforLv44yr
2020-06-02 15:54

He want to REINCARNATED in the KNB makes OP WISHES like GOD IMPULSE that like reacts super fast that even 1 sec is not the limit and a PERFECT COPY LIKE KISE THEN "TRAINS" TO ANAYLSE,RESTRUCTURE ETC. SO HE CAN USE IT BUT AUTHOR RESTRICTS OR NERFED PERFECT COPY SO FCK THE SO CALLED "LOGIC" LOL A GOD,REINCARNATION,FANFIC etc. YOU WANT LOGIC LOL! BUT THE OTHER PROBLEM IS THE BODY BUT HE GOT THE 3RD WISH THE BODY TALENT (HE MODIFIED IT SO HOW CAN HE NOT USE IT FULLY LMAO) SO HOW CAN HE NOT USE ITS SO BAD SO FORCED so HELLO AUTHOR DID YOU FORGOT IT YOU EVEN SAID AND WRITE IT YOURSELF SO DON'T DENY IT AND PASSION HE HAD IT HE COULD'VE UNLOCKED ZONE IN THE LAST MOMENT BECAUSE OF PRESSURE, USING HIS FULL POWER AND POTENTIAL TO WHAT HE CAN BECAUSE HE GO OFFENSE AND DEFENSE AT THE SAME TIME AND NERFING THE TEAM THAT THE MC ONLY NEED TO GO OFFENSE LIKE HELLO UNCROWNED KING WITH A SPECIAL ABILITY UNLOCKED CAN'T EVEN SCORE LMAO! WHY CAPS BECAUSE YOU IDIOTS CAN'T SEE THE REASON WHY AUTHOR USES LOGIC BUT USES LUCK LOL! FCK OFF BOOTLICKERS.

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ToraforLv4

AUTHOR EVEN EXPLAINED HAHAHA! SO MUCH FOR EXPLANATION AND MC HAS FUTURE KNOWLEDGE HE FULLY KNOWS GOM BECAUSE ITS THE BEST OF THE BEST, PRODIGIES, GENERATION OF MIRACLES etc. CAN'T EVEN TAKE ADVANTAGE OF THAT LIKE THE MC SAYS TO THE TEAM LIKE WHAT THEIR ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES THEY HAVE SO MUCH POTENTIAL BUT SO FORCED THAT I CAN'T EVEN FATHOM HOW AUTHOR BRAIN WORKS WITH ALL THE WISHES, KNOWLEDGE OF THE MC CAN'T WIN IN THE GOM WITH A GOOD TEAM HAHAHA! HERE LOGIC AUTHOR AND BOOTLICKERS.

FictionOnlyReaderAuthor

Oh man, you are one of my oldest readers. Well, I can't do anything if you didn't like it. I just hope you will keep reading it.

ToraforLv4

I like the story but that "GAME" is not good so forced but I like overall I just don't GET the game where he and the team can't win like HOW MY DUDE JUST HOWWW all the factors and REQUIREMENTS he has he can achieve it and win against them? so bro HOW***!!!!

FictionOnlyReader:Oh man, you are one of my oldest readers. Well, I can't do anything if you didn't like it. I just hope you will keep reading it.
ToraforLv4

Well its all REASONED if you read my review since its all there the ones you mentioned and the MAJOR ones that mc and his team HOW can't win against gom like author how? I just don't get it < Past Reply Comment | Well its all REASONED if you read my review since its all there the ones you mentioned and the MAJOR ones that mc and his team HOW they WOULD win. Can't win against gom like author how? I just don't get it! < Present Reply Comment

FictionOnlyReader:Oh man, you are one of my oldest readers. Well, I can't do anything if you didn't like it. I just hope you will keep reading it.
ToraforLv4

And if you give me and readers a good reason and factors how gom can win against the mc's team MAYBE the other readers(except bootlickers lol) and me might know HOW they won LOGICALLY OR UNLOGICALLY and give some support it(I'll still support it though IDK about the others) LOL.

FictionOnlyReader:Oh man, you are one of my oldest readers. Well, I can't do anything if you didn't like it. I just hope you will keep reading it.
kwertyuLv3

you're obviously a shounen fan pathetic *****

FictionOnlyReader:Oh man, you are one of my oldest readers. Well, I can't do anything if you didn't like it. I just hope you will keep reading it.
Bob_The_DestroyerLv12

Suck it up man. This is the Authors story not yours

Torafor:AUTHOR EVEN EXPLAINED HAHAHA! SO MUCH FOR EXPLANATION AND MC HAS FUTURE KNOWLEDGE HE FULLY KNOWS GOM BECAUSE ITS THE BEST OF THE BEST, PRODIGIES, GENERATION OF MIRACLES etc. CAN'T EVEN TAKE ADVANTAGE OF THAT LIKE THE MC SAYS TO THE TEAM LIKE WHAT THEIR ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES THEY HAVE SO MUCH POTENTIAL BUT SO FORCED THAT I CAN'T EVEN FATHOM HOW AUTHOR BRAIN WORKS WITH ALL THE WISHES, KNOWLEDGE OF THE MC CAN'T WIN IN THE GOM WITH A GOOD TEAM HAHAHA! HERE LOGIC AUTHOR AND BOOTLICKERS.
Bob_The_DestroyerLv12

Dear Author, Good job and keep doing the great work. Though I might suggest some more development in Shun with his other abilities so hey work more properly to the name they were given. But not like properly more like better or more advances or useful in tight situations when the GOMs unlock that door for prodigies

FictionOnlyReader:Oh man, you are one of my oldest readers. Well, I can't do anything if you didn't like it. I just hope you will keep reading it.
Venom_GodLv12

🤔ur very smart fanboy, I guess no one thought about that🤣🤣

Bob_The_Destroyer:Suck it up man. This is the Authors story not yours
Phe0nix_fir3Lv2

wow guess i have to suck up trash since it is the authors story

Bob_The_Destroyer:Suck it up man. This is the Authors story not yours
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JasonenrickLv14

Writing Quality- 5-Stars Stability of Updates - 4-Stars Story Development 2-Star Character Design 1-Star World Backgound 2-Star Okay, so I Think the First two are self explaining so I won't explain my why I set 5-and 4-Stars! Story Development is good and was good but there is no Goal for me in the Novel and I don't get why this Novel exists! So he has 3 wishes , is reincarnated in his Favourite Novel and loses against the Mc's of the Story,....would makes Sense!But!But, what will he do now that he lost against them when they were at their weakest! He loses All the matches in the middle school against Teiko ! So he can never say" I Played against the GOM and won" No, he won't ever be able to do that! My dream would be to beat them in a fair and regular match if I were to reincarnate in my Favourite Novel, that would be everyones Dream! Won't be possible now,aye? Bascially there is nothing for the Mc to do in the Novel , for me atleast ! Maybe Romance but that's it ! The Character makes no Sense as well and he is kinda Stupid! He makes no OP wishes so that it won't be easy but a hard! But now what?? He loses and his whole Peropose for being in that World isn't there anymore ! Like I said before, Why do people love hard games...because it taste even better If you win against your enemy Team If they are good and not Bad! Well doesn't Matter anymore now ,aye? Well, I just end it here, I get really frustated writing this because my Auto correction is driving me insan😠😠😠🥴🥴😵😵 [ My Opinion ] I don't get why you write this ....there is no fun in it, no logic and the only way it can get worse If Riko Aida is going to be his girlfriend !

Denis_BarbosaLv1

I probably should put my thoughts on a single comment. 1. Shun team shouldn't be that weak considering that they won the previous championship and have a uncrowned king. So that against the undeveloped Generation of Miracles stomp in the third quarter shouldn't really happen. 2. In the manga, I think their first finals only have a point difference of 30 points but in the third quarter that 4 point lead for Shun's team suddenly became a 26 point difference against his team is a drastic change and a huge especially with the previous noted team. 3. Shun literal lost through a bouncing ball plot. Just what. It's wasn't a special awaken ability from any of the member s. It was just a lucky shot from the guy who's has one of the least amount of experience with a 3 pointer beside Kuroko. I would rather have him lose from non luck special ability awakening than a lucky plot shot. 4. Where's the development?! No special abilities that are unlock or really display of great feats. I thought there would be special awakenings. Like zone or emperor eye or the other abilities that the GOM have from pushing each other and pasting their limits or something but it seems to be just a regular game. 5. I think the comments already said this enough but losing against Teiko now means he can't win for the rest of middle school logically unless you have American team talent next year in Shun's team. This makes it a little infuriating considering the circumstance that is in the game and later down the plot. I know this is your fanfic and I don't know what you plan on doing but I don't think this is a good release.

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