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Reynerio1996Lv54yr
2020-06-01 23:19

What is the use of giving him powers if he is not going to use it, he could not even beat a team where he is in his initial moments with a champion team, this story had a good rhythm, I will read again when I want to read a mc that does not use its powers and that he's a loser

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peter_spindlerLv13

I mean at least change the rating to a higher mark if you're gonna praise it.

Alex_MasonLv10

Bro you can't just put one star on update stability and writing quality just because you dislike the story. Write a fair review.

Alex_MasonLv10

Bro you can't just put one star on update stability and writing quality just because you dislike the story. Write a fair review.

Denzel_thekingLv6

bro you cant just give 5 star rating when somethings don't deserve it but it seems that doesn't affect you from doing it

Alex_Mason:Bro you can't just put one star on update stability and writing quality just because you dislike the story. Write a fair review.
Om_Patel_4281Lv13

Well I’m guessing he enjoyed it that much to give it a 5 star review,but giving a one star review,when you know some aspects of this novel is amazing,like the stability of updates.

Denzel_theking: bro you cant just give 5 star rating when somethings don't deserve it but it seems that doesn't affect you from doing it
Denzel_thekingLv6

well it seems he hated it so bad that didn't matter

Om_Patel_4281:Well I’m guessing he enjoyed it that much to give it a 5 star review,but giving a one star review,when you know some aspects of this novel is amazing,like the stability of updates.
Alex_MasonLv10

I haven't given this story a review and if I did I wouldn't give this 5 stars. At most 4, but it may be less than that. I like this story, I like the concept, the writing could be better, plot too, but you and a lot of people have been giving one stars when we all know this story deserves better than that. And I get some people leave 5 stars while just writing gibberish and I understand that so I don't comment on all one star reviews and instead turn a blind eye to even out the ratings. But this one explicitly said that he/she is giving a one star review because he didn't like the mc for losing. He did raise some points in the story that were questionable (Author explained why in the discord and I think in the ANs). And I like that, give honest reviews, but also leave an honest rating. Just because others leave 1 star or 5 stars doesn't mean you should too.

Denzel_theking: bro you cant just give 5 star rating when somethings don't deserve it but it seems that doesn't affect you from doing it
Alex_MasonLv10

I haven't given this story a review and if I did I wouldn't give this 5 stars. At most 4, but it may be less than that. I like this story, I like the concept, the writing could be better, plot too, but you and a lot of people have been giving one stars when we all know this story deserves better than that. And I get some people leave 5 stars while just writing gibberish and I understand that so I don't comment on all one star reviews and instead turn a blind eye to even out the ratings. But this one explicitly said that he/she is giving a one star review because he didn't like the mc for losing. He did raise some points in the story that were questionable (Author explained why in the discord and I think in the ANs). And I like that, give honest reviews, but also leave an honest rating. Just because others leave 1 star or 5 stars doesn't mean you should too.

Denzel_theking: bro you cant just give 5 star rating when somethings don't deserve it but it seems that doesn't affect you from doing it
Denzel_thekingLv6

what's wrong with him not liking the mc losing a match he had no reason losing only because of the author whims and now that just killed the story unless he goes to another school he doesn't have a chance of ever winning again cause 1 player cant defeat a team

Alex_Mason:I haven't given this story a review and if I did I wouldn't give this 5 stars. At most 4, but it may be less than that. I like this story, I like the concept, the writing could be better, plot too, but you and a lot of people have been giving one stars when we all know this story deserves better than that. And I get some people leave 5 stars while just writing gibberish and I understand that so I don't comment on all one star reviews and instead turn a blind eye to even out the ratings. But this one explicitly said that he/she is giving a one star review because he didn't like the mc for losing. He did raise some points in the story that were questionable (Author explained why in the discord and I think in the ANs). And I like that, give honest reviews, but also leave an honest rating. Just because others leave 1 star or 5 stars doesn't mean you should too.
Alex_MasonLv10

There's nothing wrong with him not liking the mc but it still doesn't mean you should leave a completely one star review. He should given at least a 4 or 5 star for the update stability since fiction updates almost daily and 3 or 4 star writing quality since there are only a few grammatical errors within the atory

Denzel_theking:what's wrong with him not liking the mc losing a match he had no reason losing only because of the author whims and now that just killed the story unless he goes to another school he doesn't have a chance of ever winning again cause 1 player cant defeat a team
Denzel_thekingLv6

i never said he doesn't like the mc I said he destroyed the story to make the mc lose never said anything about the mc personality also there isn't any problem with him being so disappointed with the story he doesn't bother to give it any 5 star rating for stability of updates because he doesn't think it matters that much and like the other guy said some guys like a story so much they don't care about other things like stability of updates and want to give a 5 star well here who got a guy who hated what the author did so much he got a 1 star rating here this is life

Alex_Mason:There's nothing wrong with him not liking the mc but it still doesn't mean you should leave a completely one star review. He should given at least a 4 or 5 star for the update stability since fiction updates almost daily and 3 or 4 star writing quality since there are only a few grammatical errors within the atory
Alex_MasonLv10

You said "he doesn't like the mc" in your last comment and he clearly said it in his review man. You're the one explaining that you don't like it because the author destroyed the story by making the mc lose. What you said about "hated the story so much that he didn't bother giving a 4 or 5 star for updates because it didn't matter." Well it does matter because it's what's being fair is all about. I've read stories much worse than this with writing so awful it's painful to even read, but I still gave the author what they deserved for making stable updates. He/she at least deserves that for the effort they put in. So I'm going to throw your words right back at you, does this story deserve a 1 star? Do you honestly believe that this story deserves a one star rating? If you don't then I rest my case. If you do, well that's okay too but i'd rather not talk to anyone so petty. Either way this argument is over; it's not like he's going to delete his review, so I won't waste my time for a futile action. I just wanted to give him a piece of my mind.

Denzel_theking:i never said he doesn't like the mc I said he destroyed the story to make the mc lose never said anything about the mc personality also there isn't any problem with him being so disappointed with the story he doesn't bother to give it any 5 star rating for stability of updates because he doesn't think it matters that much and like the other guy said some guys like a story so much they don't care about other things like stability of updates and want to give a 5 star well here who got a guy who hated what the author did so much he got a 1 star rating here this is life
Alex_MasonLv10

You said "he doesn't like the mc" in your last comment and he clearly said it in his review man. You're the one explaining that you don't like it because the author destroyed the story by making the mc lose. What you said about "hated the story so much that he didn't bother giving a 4 or 5 star for updates because it didn't matter." Well it does matter because it's what's being fair is all about. I've read stories much worse than this with writing so awful it's painful to even read, but I still gave the author what they deserved for making stable updates. He/she at least deserves that for the effort they put in. So I'm going to throw your words right back at you, does this story deserve a 1 star? Do you honestly believe that this story deserves a one star rating? If you don't then I rest my case. If you do, well that's okay too but i'd rather not talk to anyone so petty. Either way this argument is over; it's not like he's going to delete his review, so I won't waste my time for a futile action. I just wanted to give him a piece of my mind.

Denzel_theking:i never said he doesn't like the mc I said he destroyed the story to make the mc lose never said anything about the mc personality also there isn't any problem with him being so disappointed with the story he doesn't bother to give it any 5 star rating for stability of updates because he doesn't think it matters that much and like the other guy said some guys like a story so much they don't care about other things like stability of updates and want to give a 5 star well here who got a guy who hated what the author did so much he got a 1 star rating here this is life
Denzel_thekingLv6

i said not liking the mc loseing a match he had no right to I don't know how that could have translated into we hate the mc but I'm bored with you when you grow half a brain come back and talk to me, no what don't because you are a f##king hypocrite and have no right trying and tell anyone anything I'm done with you

Alex_Mason:You said "he doesn't like the mc" in your last comment and he clearly said it in his review man. You're the one explaining that you don't like it because the author destroyed the story by making the mc lose. What you said about "hated the story so much that he didn't bother giving a 4 or 5 star for updates because it didn't matter." Well it does matter because it's what's being fair is all about. I've read stories much worse than this with writing so awful it's painful to even read, but I still gave the author what they deserved for making stable updates. He/she at least deserves that for the effort they put in. So I'm going to throw your words right back at you, does this story deserve a 1 star? Do you honestly believe that this story deserves a one star rating? If you don't then I rest my case. If you do, well that's okay too but i'd rather not talk to anyone so petty. Either way this argument is over; it's not like he's going to delete his review, so I won't waste my time for a futile action. I just wanted to give him a piece of my mind.
JustJackyLv14

I'm here to argue that what the author did was right in making the MC lose the fight against the GOM because I'm gonna guess that he is going to win in the final tournament during middle school because of the training he is currently going through, and also the fact that the team was so useless against GOM makes them train like hell. Bur that's just my guess, I mean it's either that or fresh blood as good as GOM goes to that middle school and the MC finds them and did what he did with the eagle eyes kid.

13thPalaceLv14

It will be a weakened GOM who don't play as a true team anymore. So it doesn't matter, it feels like a consolation win for Shun. Not to mention that I don't care if the author was right in making him lose, if the loss doesn't feel or flow right with what's written before it. When it doesn't flow correctly, it feels like the author bending events to force the plot to flow along his own framework, with no regard to natural progression of events. We did read the same initial chapters in which he makes 3 extremely overpowered wishes at the beginning and all the training he did for years from a little kid right? The first loss was against unawakened inexperienced GOM too. He lost from a lucky three pointer from someone who doesn't shoot three pointers. The second loss, he randomly collapses from exhaustion, but none of the people chasing him around the court collapse from exhaustion, like Aomine. If you can't feel how the author is bruteforcing events in the direction of his plot framework with no regard for how it gets there, then I don't know what to tell you.

JustJacky:I'm here to argue that what the author did was right in making the MC lose the fight against the GOM because I'm gonna guess that he is going to win in the final tournament during middle school because of the training he is currently going through, and also the fact that the team was so useless against GOM makes them train like hell. Bur that's just my guess, I mean it's either that or fresh blood as good as GOM goes to that middle school and the MC finds them and did what he did with the eagle eyes kid.
JustJackyLv14

But wait, it was going with the flow, there were multiple cases of foreshadowing of what was going to happen to him. I will agree with you on that the first tournament lose was dumb because it was "pure luck" but in my mind there could have been excuses for that as well but still not enough to justify that he should have won. Yes we did see him train from basically when he was a kid, but that does not not mean that the people from GOM was also not doing the same. Another argument for the mc fainting due to fatigue he was 1vGOM and they GOM would have taken some stress off of each other. My bad for the structure of this paragraph, if I missed a point please tell me so I can "argue" against you if this is even arguing.

JanuuneLv3

Bro if you read it wholeheartedly you will understand that he is not too OP in the game as he is also a human, have you ever seen a human playing 48 mins straight without stopped as he is mentally and physically drained, surely not. But you have said he isn't using his abilities; He was using it from the beginning sometimes and other times not as it will have more straining on his body understand that he in the 12,13 if you've looked it from that direction you will understand. Another point how come you have given only 1 star in the overall rating Background is good Update is good. Character same World design same Maybe we can have the same idea if its development as I also don't want him to lose. But if you want another one just search for this novel I CAN'T MISS Its also basketball based having unbeatable MC

JanuuneLv3

Bro if you read it wholeheartedly you will understand that he is not too OP in the game as he is also a human, have you ever seen a human playing 48 mins straight without stopped as he is mentally and physically drained, surely not. But you have said he isn't using his abilities; He was using it from the beginning sometimes and other times not as it will have more straining on his body understand that he in the 12,13 if you've looked it from that direction you will understand. Another point how come you have given only 1 star in the overall rating Background is good Update is good. Character same World design same Maybe we can have the same idea if its development as I also don't want him to lose. But if you want another one just search for this novel I CAN'T MISS Its also basketball based having unbeatable MC

JanuuneLv3

Bro if you read it wholeheartedly you will understand that he is not too OP in the game as he is also a human, have you ever seen a human playing 48 mins straight without stopped as he is mentally and physically drained, surely not. But you have said he isn't using his abilities; He was using it from the beginning sometimes and other times not as it will have more straining on his body understand that he in the 12,13 if you've looked it from that direction you will understand. Another point how come you have given only 1 star in the overall rating Background is good Update is good. Character same World design same Maybe we can have the same idea if its development as I also don't want him to lose. But if you want another one just search for this novel I CAN'T MISS Its also basketball based having unbeatable MC

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JasonenrickLv14

Writing Quality- 5-Stars Stability of Updates - 4-Stars Story Development 2-Star Character Design 1-Star World Backgound 2-Star Okay, so I Think the First two are self explaining so I won't explain my why I set 5-and 4-Stars! Story Development is good and was good but there is no Goal for me in the Novel and I don't get why this Novel exists! So he has 3 wishes , is reincarnated in his Favourite Novel and loses against the Mc's of the Story,....would makes Sense!But!But, what will he do now that he lost against them when they were at their weakest! He loses All the matches in the middle school against Teiko ! So he can never say" I Played against the GOM and won" No, he won't ever be able to do that! My dream would be to beat them in a fair and regular match if I were to reincarnate in my Favourite Novel, that would be everyones Dream! Won't be possible now,aye? Bascially there is nothing for the Mc to do in the Novel , for me atleast ! Maybe Romance but that's it ! The Character makes no Sense as well and he is kinda Stupid! He makes no OP wishes so that it won't be easy but a hard! But now what?? He loses and his whole Peropose for being in that World isn't there anymore ! Like I said before, Why do people love hard games...because it taste even better If you win against your enemy Team If they are good and not Bad! Well doesn't Matter anymore now ,aye? Well, I just end it here, I get really frustated writing this because my Auto correction is driving me insan😠😠😠🥴🥴😵😵 [ My Opinion ] I don't get why you write this ....there is no fun in it, no logic and the only way it can get worse If Riko Aida is going to be his girlfriend !

Denis_BarbosaLv1

I probably should put my thoughts on a single comment. 1. Shun team shouldn't be that weak considering that they won the previous championship and have a uncrowned king. So that against the undeveloped Generation of Miracles stomp in the third quarter shouldn't really happen. 2. In the manga, I think their first finals only have a point difference of 30 points but in the third quarter that 4 point lead for Shun's team suddenly became a 26 point difference against his team is a drastic change and a huge especially with the previous noted team. 3. Shun literal lost through a bouncing ball plot. Just what. It's wasn't a special awaken ability from any of the member s. It was just a lucky shot from the guy who's has one of the least amount of experience with a 3 pointer beside Kuroko. I would rather have him lose from non luck special ability awakening than a lucky plot shot. 4. Where's the development?! No special abilities that are unlock or really display of great feats. I thought there would be special awakenings. Like zone or emperor eye or the other abilities that the GOM have from pushing each other and pasting their limits or something but it seems to be just a regular game. 5. I think the comments already said this enough but losing against Teiko now means he can't win for the rest of middle school logically unless you have American team talent next year in Shun's team. This makes it a little infuriating considering the circumstance that is in the game and later down the plot. I know this is your fanfic and I don't know what you plan on doing but I don't think this is a good release.

Apolly0nLv5
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