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kwertyu
kwertyuLv34yr
2020-06-02 10:02

the mc fucking suck can't even win against GOM in their middle school what's the point for all of those cheats he got if he can't even use it DONT READ THIS PIECE OF SHIT

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Domn
DomnLv13

Ok i wanna ask you a question. If mc's purpose is to be a one man team player that can defeat the other team only by him self then yes by using 3 wishes this is so easy but he love the competitive basketball. He wanna to enjoy it...... He is using his wishes( although he is not using them with their full power but still using it). Pls calm down and continue to read the novel.... Maybe it will get better and will be as you like?

Skorzeur
SkorzeurLv3

If he enjoy playing then he shouldn't have said that he 'wants to cry'.

Domn:Ok i wanna ask you a question. If mc's purpose is to be a one man team player that can defeat the other team only by him self then yes by using 3 wishes this is so easy but he love the competitive basketball. He wanna to enjoy it...... He is using his wishes( although he is not using them with their full power but still using it). Pls calm down and continue to read the novel.... Maybe it will get better and will be as you like?
Domn
DomnLv13

What do you mean ? If he cried he didn't enjoy it? No

Skorzeur:If he enjoy playing then he shouldn't have said that he 'wants to cry'.
SupremeKaz
SupremeKazLv4

So losing is enjoying ha😁

Domn:What do you mean ? If he cried he didn't enjoy it? No
BleakSky
BleakSkyLv4

Okay, I don't understand he obviously didn't enjoy losing and he's not someone where he's too strong so he should train to the fullest which he did but never utilizing his powers to there utmost potential is it arrogance? Or he just an idiot? Or maybe his brain stopped working. So which is it?

Domn:Ok i wanna ask you a question. If mc's purpose is to be a one man team player that can defeat the other team only by him self then yes by using 3 wishes this is so easy but he love the competitive basketball. He wanna to enjoy it...... He is using his wishes( although he is not using them with their full power but still using it). Pls calm down and continue to read the novel.... Maybe it will get better and will be as you like?
BleakSky
BleakSkyLv4

Okay, I don't understand he obviously didn't enjoy losing and he's not someone where he's too strong so he should train to the fullest which he did but never utilizing his powers to there utmost potential is it arrogance? Or he just an idiot? Or maybe his brain stopped working. So which is it?

Domn:Ok i wanna ask you a question. If mc's purpose is to be a one man team player that can defeat the other team only by him self then yes by using 3 wishes this is so easy but he love the competitive basketball. He wanna to enjoy it...... He is using his wishes( although he is not using them with their full power but still using it). Pls calm down and continue to read the novel.... Maybe it will get better and will be as you like?
BleakSky
BleakSkyLv4

Lol autocorrect aomine* were*

BleakSky:Okay, I don't understand he obviously didn't enjoy losing and he's not someone where he's too strong so he should train to the fullest which he did but never utilizing his powers to there utmost potential is it arrogance? Or he just an idiot? Or maybe his brain stopped working. So which is it?
Domn
DomnLv13

Who said he didn't use all his power? Don't forget he still 12 years old kid..... Also HE IS PLAYING AGAINST A TEAM THAT IS FULL OF MONSTERS.

BleakSky:Okay, I don't understand he obviously didn't enjoy losing and he's not someone where he's too strong so he should train to the fullest which he did but never utilizing his powers to there utmost potential is it arrogance? Or he just an idiot? Or maybe his brain stopped working. So which is it?
BleakSky
BleakSkyLv4

*Shaking my head* I said he didn't use his powers to there full potential what you said is full power which is a different matter and at this point of the story they aren't much at least till there 2nd and 3rd year. His age is irrelevant aomine at the age of let's say 9 could beat grown adults. In this story, he should be a much bigger MONSTER then there whole team combined during the first year of middle school.

Domn:Who said he didn't use all his power? Don't forget he still 12 years old kid..... Also HE IS PLAYING AGAINST A TEAM THAT IS FULL OF MONSTERS.
BleakSky
BleakSkyLv4

*Shaking my head* I said he didn't use his powers to there full potential what you said is full power which is a different matter and at this point of the story they aren't much at least till there 2nd and 3rd year. His age is irrelevant aomine at the age of let's say 9 could beat grown adults. In this story, he should be a much bigger MONSTER then there whole team combined during the first year of middle school.

Domn:Who said he didn't use all his power? Don't forget he still 12 years old kid..... Also HE IS PLAYING AGAINST A TEAM THAT IS FULL OF MONSTERS.
Domn
DomnLv13

Again why? I feel that you are affected by the animes and novels where mc can defeat a full team on his on?. For me his wishes are not that strong( perfect copy at least).(idk about the god speed thingy) Any way don't be so harsh with the author..... Like rating the novel with 1 star only bcz this? There are releasing ratio, writing skills, story building and so. Also the game was so entertaining. Be honest putting the result aside the match was awesome right?.

BleakSky:*Shaking my head* I said he didn't use his powers to there full potential what you said is full power which is a different matter and at this point of the story they aren't much at least till there 2nd and 3rd year. His age is irrelevant aomine at the age of let's say 9 could beat grown adults. In this story, he should be a much bigger MONSTER then there whole team combined during the first year of middle school.
Domn
DomnLv13

Sorry for my missanderstood english is not my first language so i miss understand things sometimes

BleakSky:*Shaking my head* I said he didn't use his powers to there full potential what you said is full power which is a different matter and at this point of the story they aren't much at least till there 2nd and 3rd year. His age is irrelevant aomine at the age of let's say 9 could beat grown adults. In this story, he should be a much bigger MONSTER then there whole team combined during the first year of middle school.
BleakSky
BleakSkyLv4

I’d never do that nor have I ever ill hate but never 1 star if it doesn't deserve it. It was good. But perfect copy is OP btw have you not seen kise? He could dominate the whole gom with it and nash’s team if you’ve watched the movie.

Domn:Again why? I feel that you are affected by the animes and novels where mc can defeat a full team on his on?. For me his wishes are not that strong( perfect copy at least).(idk about the god speed thingy) Any way don't be so harsh with the author..... Like rating the novel with 1 star only bcz this? There are releasing ratio, writing skills, story building and so. Also the game was so entertaining. Be honest putting the result aside the match was awesome right?.
BleakSky
BleakSkyLv4

I’d never do that nor have I ever ill hate but never 1 star if it doesn't deserve it. It was good. But perfect copy is OP btw have you not seen kise? He could dominate the whole gom with it and nash’s team if you’ve watched the movie.

Domn:Again why? I feel that you are affected by the animes and novels where mc can defeat a full team on his on?. For me his wishes are not that strong( perfect copy at least).(idk about the god speed thingy) Any way don't be so harsh with the author..... Like rating the novel with 1 star only bcz this? There are releasing ratio, writing skills, story building and so. Also the game was so entertaining. Be honest putting the result aside the match was awesome right?.
Domn
DomnLv13

Yes but only for a few minutes also kise wasn't able to do that before(this was possible only when he've got into high school)

BleakSky:I’d never do that nor have I ever ill hate but never 1 star if it doesn't deserve it. It was good. But perfect copy is OP btw have you not seen kise? He could dominate the whole gom with it and nash’s team if you’ve watched the movie.
BleakSky
BleakSkyLv4

Grammar, release rate is good but the games are sorta bland the way it's portrayed in my biased opinion but that's probs because of the moves used by mc is basic and nothing special so it doesn't leave a deep enough impression ya know? Maybe that's only me. But it's overall a good book besides how this tragedy of a chapter ended.

Domn:Again why? I feel that you are affected by the animes and novels where mc can defeat a full team on his on?. For me his wishes are not that strong( perfect copy at least).(idk about the god speed thingy) Any way don't be so harsh with the author..... Like rating the novel with 1 star only bcz this? There are releasing ratio, writing skills, story building and so. Also the game was so entertaining. Be honest putting the result aside the match was awesome right?.
BleakSky
BleakSkyLv4

Grammar, release rate is good but the games are sorta bland the way it's portrayed in my biased opinion but that's probs because of the moves used by mc is basic and nothing special so it doesn't leave a deep enough impression ya know? Maybe that's only me. But it's overall a good book besides how this tragedy of a chapter ended.

Domn:Again why? I feel that you are affected by the animes and novels where mc can defeat a full team on his on?. For me his wishes are not that strong( perfect copy at least).(idk about the god speed thingy) Any way don't be so harsh with the author..... Like rating the novel with 1 star only bcz this? There are releasing ratio, writing skills, story building and so. Also the game was so entertaining. Be honest putting the result aside the match was awesome right?.
BleakSky
BleakSkyLv4

Yes but that's cause he was modeling and lazed around during middle school going through sports like candy so his foundations weren't solidified as we're our mc used third wish to modify body to be able to handle such drawbacks to the minimum tagged along with his training from the age of 4 up till now.

Domn:Yes but only for a few minutes also kise wasn't able to do that before(this was possible only when he've got into high school)
Domn
DomnLv13

He is still aren't old enough...... I think the modifications are for the growth right? I don't remember

BleakSky:Yes but that's cause he was modeling and lazed around during middle school going through sports like candy so his foundations weren't solidified as we're our mc used third wish to modify body to be able to handle such drawbacks to the minimum tagged along with his training from the age of 4 up till now.
BleakSky
BleakSkyLv4

Maximum lol

BleakSky:Yes but that's cause he was modeling and lazed around during middle school going through sports like candy so his foundations weren't solidified as we're our mc used third wish to modify body to be able to handle such drawbacks to the minimum tagged along with his training from the age of 4 up till now.
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Denis_Barbosa
Denis_BarbosaLv1

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