Om_Patel_4281

This was a 5 star at first. I know it’s supposed to be comedy but I would like comedy to also have the main plot move forward as well. I feel like I’ve been reading a bunch of filler for the last few chapters and I’m tired of it.

Is this AI

I really loved this fanfic but the current arc has been disappointing. Every chapter in this arc were some of my least favorites. We barley saw any fights until their ending. The last chapter especially, was the worst one the author has made. So many unnecessary deaths, a lot of the story developments in that chapter felt forced. I will see where it goes and if it becomes better I will change my rating.

So you rated this novel so low because of the author’s update schedule and not the actual story. The whole point of reviews are to explain what you think of the story.

Explain

Everything has a 4 or a 5 star from me but story development and charachter design. I love stories that have the mc working through his personal problems, and becoming stronger due to it. However, this story is a continuous story of the mc getting depression, getting help, then something else happens for him to be more depressed. The whole story is just a cycle of depression the mc deals with and it starts to feel boring.

You seem like a person who only likes characters that are emotionless, and have no realistic factors. If you like that, then just read wish fulfillment, and stop wasting time by commenting with your horrible English.

You live in a world where people can be murdered, but until you see it for yourself you do not understand how much danger you can be in. Icarus knew how powerful the gods are but seeing it for himself made him fear it more.

Yeah, I guess he forgot the whole Camelot incident.

If you have no criticism or positivity you sholdn’t review at all.