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Romeru
RomeruAuthor2yr
2022-01-24 06:36

Greetings, this is the author again. This story is actually done, so you will be reading a novel with an actual ending. I did, however, end it in a way that I could continue it if ever I wished to-- just in case enough readers request it. This story is very close to my heart, as it is actually the first ever book that Webnovel took a liking to enough to have it contracted. I was a literal newbie in writing when I wrote this story, but I hope you like it as much as I loved writing it. Thank you!

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AdriftInTheVoid
AdriftInTheVoidLv13

i will give it a try now, these sounds like a very interesting idea, i saw someone award it a magic castle so im sure it will be great

Tzvi_Wasserman
Tzvi_WassermanLv14

I really hope you continue, it's a really good novel, and I love how you always take the story in directions I don't expect

Pandalph
PandalphLv14

Great novel just I have personal problems with it… so it isn’t my forte …

Sweatercat
SweatercatLv15

This is my favorite book and I hope others agree with me that they want more chapters enough for you to actually do it

Archie_Henderson
Archie_HendersonLv4

By "this story is done", do you mean you have planned the ending, or that the ending is already written (and published)?

DaoistbyF2i3
DaoistbyF2i3Lv3

please continue . thank you

itsDanielJohnson
itsDanielJohnsonLv3

Was a masterpiece ngl

Teryusac
TeryusacLv1

Greetings, just to say that I love your novel and would love to see the sequel, have a nice day.

Cyber_Amanita
Cyber_AmanitaLv15

I know its been a year already but I would love this story to continue in some way.

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Romeru
RomeruAuthor

Hello, struggling author here. I would like to point out the things to expect from this book. But first...After 160 chapters, I will finally leave a word here since the book is gaining more readers than I could have possibly known when I wrote it. So, to all my readers who have made it possible for my book to be here, I owe you everything. Thank you, you guys are the best. To my new readers, here is what to expect when you decide to read this book, The Good: 1. I will do my unyielding best to be an author deserving to be at the top, even though we are currently at the bottom. 2. I am your friend. The Bad: 1. First dozen chapters are incredibly rough. I didn’t think it was going to get traction at all since I was a beginner writer. I won’t edit them for now, in the hopes that you see how I improved throughout the story. 2. Grammar mistakes. Usually mixing up gender pronouns since they don’t exist in my language. 2. Pacing will shift from time to time. Mostly fast, but when it is slow, it is slow. 3. I don't write with an ending, so I am as clueless to the story as you are, we are in this journey, literally together. 4. Plot holes - If we fall in them, we fall together. Always together. 5. Young and Unstable MC - Some of you might not like it. Our MC starts at 5 years old. He will be naïve, clueless, and not to mention, irrational. But he is and foremost, powerful. In short, he’s a time bomb. 6. Character driven – The story will always revolve around the MC. 7. Inconsistencies – I have a very short memory span. Here's what to do before reading this book: 1. Play some music. 2. If you are on the toilet, please wash your butt first. 3. Shut your mind from from the notion of realism. I will try my best to be as realistic as possible, but there's only so much I can do when a baby can literally fly. 4. Please avoid comparing it from other novels, you might end up not enjoying the book :( Got this from Kota btw. Other than that, I hope you enjoy reading :)

Cry_Maker
Cry_MakerLv3

I really love this story, i ve read all the available chapters ( free ones), it made me cry it made me laugh, honestly it is really good, only the first few chapters till the story really starts are, well they re good, just not as good as the later chapters Alright so to the review Writing quality Now, i really love how author wrote his story, a few grammar mistakes here and there (between he and she) but you can understand nonethless if you pay attention, but still 5 stars for the way he wrote it Story development Now in the first chapters till the story starts up, it s well, quite average, but after that i had no words, like i know i sound biased but this is my honest opinion, for the 73 chapters that i read at the end i had no words, it s so good, well beside in the middle of the "earth" part, that was a bit boring to me, but still 5 stars as i loved it Character design Now, i love the main character, the character development of him is done so so good that u don t realise till u read chapter 73,or maybe u do but you don t pay attention, just when u read chapter 73 and be like wow wtf, like srsly I also like his big sister and friends, although not much character development over there, maybe his big sis, but it cannot compare to the main character, at all, at least my opinion, but i didn t read a story that made me like it so much so imma still give it 5 stars Update stability I can t comment on this, because i didn t finish the story as i read only the free chapters, but like, this is a biased vote here, but u can just ignore as it can be as wrong as it can be right, so 5 stars, only because i really love the story overall, World background Now i was really immersed in the story that i didn t really pay that much attention to actually write a review about it like, i know where the story happens, where they are everytime, but i can t write a detail review about it, but yeah as above, i still give 5 stars, honestly the background was enough for me, i understood everything that was going on. I know the review is quite biased as i really loved it, but i know now that not everyone will that s for certain, so if someone reads my review, take that in mind too, always don t have high expectations as u would really enjoy it more, i mean i avoided this novel when i first saw it just because i thought it s some normal cultivation cliche and look at me now

wolf_delta54
wolf_delta54Lv15
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