webnovel
wolf_delta54
wolf_delta54Lv153yr
2021-03-28 22:42

I started reading this as a way to pass the time while I waited for other wb's to be updated, however, it quickly became one of my favorites. From the background of the world to the character developement, from the amazing detail of the settings to the amazimg detail of the fights, and even how real the characters felt everything abput this novel was amazing. I started and finished this novel in 3 days and even stayed up for nearly 12 hrs on a benge session. I am sad to see this story end but I am grateful to you, Romeru, for writing and releasing such an amazing story, I am currently reading My Hermes System and am always waiting for the next update. Rest in peice Miss Sofia and live a good life Mister Veil. I will proudly remain a Patron for you Mr. Romeru in hopes of more amazing stories like this one.

Liked by 6 people

LIKE
Replies2
Romeru
RomeruAuthor

Thank you very much for joining this journey! It means a lot that you liked my story and reading more of my works T_T

wolf_delta54
wolf_delta54Lv15

No thank you for writing such amazing stories, I loved this one and I love My Hermes System. They are both some of my favorites on here.

Other Reviews
Romeru
RomeruAuthor

Hello, struggling author here. I would like to point out the things to expect from this book. But first...After 160 chapters, I will finally leave a word here since the book is gaining more readers than I could have possibly known when I wrote it. So, to all my readers who have made it possible for my book to be here, I owe you everything. Thank you, you guys are the best. To my new readers, here is what to expect when you decide to read this book, The Good: 1. I will do my unyielding best to be an author deserving to be at the top, even though we are currently at the bottom. 2. I am your friend. The Bad: 1. First dozen chapters are incredibly rough. I didn’t think it was going to get traction at all since I was a beginner writer. I won’t edit them for now, in the hopes that you see how I improved throughout the story. 2. Grammar mistakes. Usually mixing up gender pronouns since they don’t exist in my language. 2. Pacing will shift from time to time. Mostly fast, but when it is slow, it is slow. 3. I don't write with an ending, so I am as clueless to the story as you are, we are in this journey, literally together. 4. Plot holes - If we fall in them, we fall together. Always together. 5. Young and Unstable MC - Some of you might not like it. Our MC starts at 5 years old. He will be naïve, clueless, and not to mention, irrational. But he is and foremost, powerful. In short, he’s a time bomb. 6. Character driven – The story will always revolve around the MC. 7. Inconsistencies – I have a very short memory span. Here's what to do before reading this book: 1. Play some music. 2. If you are on the toilet, please wash your butt first. 3. Shut your mind from from the notion of realism. I will try my best to be as realistic as possible, but there's only so much I can do when a baby can literally fly. 4. Please avoid comparing it from other novels, you might end up not enjoying the book :( Got this from Kota btw. Other than that, I hope you enjoy reading :)

Cry_Maker
Cry_MakerLv3

I really love this story, i ve read all the available chapters ( free ones), it made me cry it made me laugh, honestly it is really good, only the first few chapters till the story really starts are, well they re good, just not as good as the later chapters Alright so to the review Writing quality Now, i really love how author wrote his story, a few grammar mistakes here and there (between he and she) but you can understand nonethless if you pay attention, but still 5 stars for the way he wrote it Story development Now in the first chapters till the story starts up, it s well, quite average, but after that i had no words, like i know i sound biased but this is my honest opinion, for the 73 chapters that i read at the end i had no words, it s so good, well beside in the middle of the "earth" part, that was a bit boring to me, but still 5 stars as i loved it Character design Now, i love the main character, the character development of him is done so so good that u don t realise till u read chapter 73,or maybe u do but you don t pay attention, just when u read chapter 73 and be like wow wtf, like srsly I also like his big sister and friends, although not much character development over there, maybe his big sis, but it cannot compare to the main character, at all, at least my opinion, but i didn t read a story that made me like it so much so imma still give it 5 stars Update stability I can t comment on this, because i didn t finish the story as i read only the free chapters, but like, this is a biased vote here, but u can just ignore as it can be as wrong as it can be right, so 5 stars, only because i really love the story overall, World background Now i was really immersed in the story that i didn t really pay that much attention to actually write a review about it like, i know where the story happens, where they are everytime, but i can t write a detail review about it, but yeah as above, i still give 5 stars, honestly the background was enough for me, i understood everything that was going on. I know the review is quite biased as i really loved it, but i know now that not everyone will that s for certain, so if someone reads my review, take that in mind too, always don t have high expectations as u would really enjoy it more, i mean i avoided this novel when i first saw it just because i thought it s some normal cultivation cliche and look at me now

Related Stories