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Zachary_Parker_155
Zachary_Parker_155Lv144yr
2020-09-23 22:59

Good book, fun to read, and definitely makes you get hyped for the next chapter. Overall probably my favorite book on this app along with I Alone Level Up (Solo Leveling)

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Error_4Lv14

harem include?

Error_4
Error_4Lv14

i hope there'll be a harem in the future for the male lead and not be a bachelor forever just like some dense mc on other novel like library of heaven path lol. i can already imagine how frustrat male reader will be if there's no harem here.. though it's the opposite for the female reader.. lol. I'm hundred percent female reader will hate this novel if there's harem.. but do not worry author. you got us male reader reading your novel also

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Error_4
Error_4Lv14

honestly i don't understand why some male hate harem. are you even a man bruh?

Error_4
Error_4Lv14

i can understand if your health isn't in good condition or if you're a gay is the reason u hate harem. but please u must understand us healthy male reader here will be sad and jealous if there's plenty of female lead but with dense mc. u can imagine how frustrate I'll be

Error_4
Error_4Lv14

and what will happen if the author often makes the reader sad and always got jealous to death because the female lead got snatched by dense mc enemy? -> WE DROP THE NOVEL<- this is what will happen.

Error_4:i can understand if your health isn't in good condition or if you're a gay is the reason u hate harem. but please u must understand us healthy male reader here will be sad and jealous if there's plenty of female lead but with dense mc. u can imagine how frustrate I'll be
Error_4
Error_4Lv14

it's like there's 1 million in front of you(female lead), but you cannot take them away because you're blind(dense), in the end other(mc enemy) got the 1 million(female lead). you can imagine how us male reader(healthy male reader) gotvangry/sad/jealous because of it.

Error_4
Error_4Lv14

this kind of shit always happen on novel w no harem and it always succeed on making me angry which in turn lead to me deleting the novel from my library

Error_4:it's like there's 1 million in front of you(female lead), but you cannot take them away because you're blind(dense), in the end other(mc enemy) got the 1 million(female lead). you can imagine how us male reader(healthy male reader) gotvangry/sad/jealous because of it.
Romeru
RomeruAuthor

Hello, currently, there's no harem. My tags do not include it as well. Is there a possibility that there will be? I was a huge fan of harem when I was in highschool, so there might be, there might not be. Our MC is too young for that for now. There is a kind of "pseudo-harem" going on though, but it's just that for now. As for the MC's psyche, for now, I don't think he is capable yet of truly knowing what love is. There will come a time when he experiences love, but with love also comes the understanding of emotions, which quite honestly, is hard for our young and very unstable MC. Thank you for reading!

Black20Syrano22
Black20Syrano22Lv11

I hope there is more lore

Frizent
FrizentLv1

Yo te responderé (en español, porque me la suda traducir), porque antes me gustaban las novelas harem, pero poco a poco les he agarrado molestia, ¿porqué?, es simple, la mayoría de historias harem no terminan harem o simplemente no hay un desarrollo sustancial para que este suceda, entonces esas novelas harem pierden calidad o se desarrollan con las nalgas, soy hombre y busco una buena historia harem, pero como la mayoría no funciona, prefiero que sea o un romance en pareja o que el MC este soltero, porque así asegura más calidad, por supuesto hay excepciones donde una novela harem es increíble y eh leído unas cuantas, pero hay pocas y ese es el motivo de mi disgusto (esta es mi opinión personal, busco calidad, un increíble desarrollo y sobre todo un buen protagonista).

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Romeru
RomeruAuthor

Hello, struggling author here. I would like to point out the things to expect from this book. But first...After 160 chapters, I will finally leave a word here since the book is gaining more readers than I could have possibly known when I wrote it. So, to all my readers who have made it possible for my book to be here, I owe you everything. Thank you, you guys are the best. To my new readers, here is what to expect when you decide to read this book, The Good: 1. I will do my unyielding best to be an author deserving to be at the top, even though we are currently at the bottom. 2. I am your friend. The Bad: 1. First dozen chapters are incredibly rough. I didn’t think it was going to get traction at all since I was a beginner writer. I won’t edit them for now, in the hopes that you see how I improved throughout the story. 2. Grammar mistakes. Usually mixing up gender pronouns since they don’t exist in my language. 2. Pacing will shift from time to time. Mostly fast, but when it is slow, it is slow. 3. I don't write with an ending, so I am as clueless to the story as you are, we are in this journey, literally together. 4. Plot holes - If we fall in them, we fall together. Always together. 5. Young and Unstable MC - Some of you might not like it. Our MC starts at 5 years old. He will be naïve, clueless, and not to mention, irrational. But he is and foremost, powerful. In short, he’s a time bomb. 6. Character driven – The story will always revolve around the MC. 7. Inconsistencies – I have a very short memory span. Here's what to do before reading this book: 1. Play some music. 2. If you are on the toilet, please wash your butt first. 3. Shut your mind from from the notion of realism. I will try my best to be as realistic as possible, but there's only so much I can do when a baby can literally fly. 4. Please avoid comparing it from other novels, you might end up not enjoying the book :( Got this from Kota btw. Other than that, I hope you enjoy reading :)

Cry_Maker
Cry_MakerLv3

I really love this story, i ve read all the available chapters ( free ones), it made me cry it made me laugh, honestly it is really good, only the first few chapters till the story really starts are, well they re good, just not as good as the later chapters Alright so to the review Writing quality Now, i really love how author wrote his story, a few grammar mistakes here and there (between he and she) but you can understand nonethless if you pay attention, but still 5 stars for the way he wrote it Story development Now in the first chapters till the story starts up, it s well, quite average, but after that i had no words, like i know i sound biased but this is my honest opinion, for the 73 chapters that i read at the end i had no words, it s so good, well beside in the middle of the "earth" part, that was a bit boring to me, but still 5 stars as i loved it Character design Now, i love the main character, the character development of him is done so so good that u don t realise till u read chapter 73,or maybe u do but you don t pay attention, just when u read chapter 73 and be like wow wtf, like srsly I also like his big sister and friends, although not much character development over there, maybe his big sis, but it cannot compare to the main character, at all, at least my opinion, but i didn t read a story that made me like it so much so imma still give it 5 stars Update stability I can t comment on this, because i didn t finish the story as i read only the free chapters, but like, this is a biased vote here, but u can just ignore as it can be as wrong as it can be right, so 5 stars, only because i really love the story overall, World background Now i was really immersed in the story that i didn t really pay that much attention to actually write a review about it like, i know where the story happens, where they are everytime, but i can t write a detail review about it, but yeah as above, i still give 5 stars, honestly the background was enough for me, i understood everything that was going on. I know the review is quite biased as i really loved it, but i know now that not everyone will that s for certain, so if someone reads my review, take that in mind too, always don t have high expectations as u would really enjoy it more, i mean i avoided this novel when i first saw it just because i thought it s some normal cultivation cliche and look at me now

wolf_delta54
wolf_delta54Lv15
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