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Daoist_Rahul
Daoist_RahulLv34yr
2020-07-04 22:31

First Of all I would like to say I'd you are here to decide whether to read it or not yes give it a try Author has done a great job in writing quality as a starter and grammars are decent paragraphs are well written and dialogue is very sensible not to shabby world building is decent as well Now the good side is done there is some mistakes like some times it's hard to understand why health upgrades and why decrease it's confusing and how the system works is confusing too . As a Seasoned reader I consider myself hehe I have strict requirements but I loved this book continue your work :)

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Aviella_Martinez
Aviella_MartinezLv2

I agree

Lastear
LastearLv15

I really want to edit the grammar in this comment. *cringe

Milk_Dewd
Milk_DewdLv2

bruh how can I judge grammar when yours is this bad...

Jefferson_Alamen
Jefferson_AlamenLv3

mmmmmm

Milk_Dewd:bruh how can I judge grammar when yours is this bad...
Jefferson_Alamen
Jefferson_AlamenLv3

mmmmm

Daoist_Paradox
Daoist_ParadoxLv4

Hello Daoist_Rahul! I'm Daoist Paradox!

Rabiddoughnuts
RabiddoughnutsLv15

it's really not confusing at all, it says exactly which body of his it's talking about right before the health, only way it's confusing is if you just ignore entire sections of his stat page.

Dayside
DaysideLv12

then why tf did you give it 5 stars? Why not 4 or 3

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JPNovelFan
JPNovelFanLv15

AVOID THIS NOVEL IF YOU HATE IT WHEN AN AUTHOR NERFS THE MC BACK TO LEVEL 1 AT THE START OF EVERY ARC AND CHANGES EVERYTHING YOU LIKED ABOUT THEIR FIRST ITERATION. ALSO TAKING AWAY BASICALLY ALL OF THEIR SKILLS AND ABILITIES THEY WORKED FOR. ALL GONE. EVERY. VOLUME. Overall the author probably did a good job as I was engaged for all of volume one. Then the author decided to hit the reset button and change the character’s stats and everything back to the starting position and even changed the character from a skeleton into an orc. He’s in a different dungeon too I think, but I dropped the novel since I don’t like this kind of story telling. I become invested in the characters that I read and just completely nerfing them back to the beginning is terrible story telling and is basically a slap in the face for the reader. You’re it basically says that I should never become invested in any of the skills or powers or any aspect of the MC that makes them strong and defines them because at the end of every volume you write you are going to slap the MC back down to the beginning. This just proves that I should never become invested and that is the antithesis of why I real novels. I WANT to care about the main character and watch their systematic growth through the length of the novel. Nerfing them back down to level 1 every volume is just so terrible of an idea. Good luck with your novel but it’s not for me and I wish it was more clear in the synopsis that the author did this style of writing. I would’ve avoided the story like the plague instead of wasting my time and just being slapped in the face by the author.

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