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Adrian_williamsLv34yr
2020-06-15 08:32

I tried reading but I'm sorry I just quit for a while I came back to see more development but it just got worse it started and but somehow degraded by chapter this is my personal opinion it has so many plot holes and parts that make no sense I'm sorry if this hurts you but it's the honest truth I hope your writing style can improve I'm sorry but I can't be bothered to care for or read this anymore now good day

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Koob
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This story is a mess. 1/3 of the story is the MC reviewing his stats. 1/3 of the story is the MC training on his own and talking to his system. 1/3 of the story is actual plot. The grammar is not great but the writing style of the author can get annoying. Sometimes its written in the style of a script sometimes its proper English. Every time a โ€œwishโ€ comes up, please pay no attention to the amount of wishes. 1 wish can easily turn into 3 on a whim with random extras thrown in. Time skips. They are pretty random. Some time skips are for power ups, some are to skip until interesting plot points and some I feel is just because the author loses interest at the current plot point and skips the events. The OP MC is somehow no OP. Even after getting tons of god like powers for other universes, his in system ranking system doesnโ€™t put him at the top. The MC has beyond Super Saiyan Blue form which would put anyone at the top of 99% of the universes out there but for some reason heโ€™s not and thereโ€™s no explanation. The system, oh god the system. It seems to change every few chapters. The author could get away with this if there was some kind of unlocking function but thereโ€™s not. Different functions just gets added in at random times like the ability to merge skills/bloodlines/powers and a skill point system after 20 chapters while the MC was rearranging his stats screen. As a summary, if you are still interested then go ahead and read this story. Note: review at chapter 58

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