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KoryuHotshot
KoryuHotshotLv54yr
2020-05-26 08:13

it is almost the same as Traversing the Anime Multiverse with a System Here the name is Ren and at the other one SoRen..... .... .... ....πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘

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SomeSpookyGuy
SomeSpookyGuyAuthor

Have you read the latest chapters?

DarkCrown
DarkCrownLv13

No need to be a dumbass and spam every fucking chapter

IPreferLonerMc
IPreferLonerMcLv5

How’s that’s being a dumbass? Let a dude do what he wants, smh

DarkCrown:No need to be a dumbass and spam every fucking chapter
Cookiecutter56
Cookiecutter56Lv4

It's like they used all there creativity on the ****ty novel, and none is left when they have to choose a name

IPreferLonerMc:How’s that’s being a dumbass? Let a dude do what he wants, smh
IPreferLonerMc
IPreferLonerMcLv5

?

Cookiecutter56:It's like they used all there creativity on the ****ty novel, and none is left when they have to choose a name
Cookiecutter56
Cookiecutter56Lv4

Sorry commented on the wrong post

IPreferLonerMc:?
Xavier_Fernandez
Xavier_FernandezLv4

The part pf HxH is the same

SINU
SINULv11

TMS is more interesting with soren(mc), then this novel Ren(mc) These is a good story for beginner FanFiction readers

SINU
SINULv11

this is a good story for beginner FanFiction readers

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Koob
KoobLv12

This story is a mess. 1/3 of the story is the MC reviewing his stats. 1/3 of the story is the MC training on his own and talking to his system. 1/3 of the story is actual plot. The grammar is not great but the writing style of the author can get annoying. Sometimes its written in the style of a script sometimes its proper English. Every time a β€œwish” comes up, please pay no attention to the amount of wishes. 1 wish can easily turn into 3 on a whim with random extras thrown in. Time skips. They are pretty random. Some time skips are for power ups, some are to skip until interesting plot points and some I feel is just because the author loses interest at the current plot point and skips the events. The OP MC is somehow no OP. Even after getting tons of god like powers for other universes, his in system ranking system doesn’t put him at the top. The MC has beyond Super Saiyan Blue form which would put anyone at the top of 99% of the universes out there but for some reason he’s not and there’s no explanation. The system, oh god the system. It seems to change every few chapters. The author could get away with this if there was some kind of unlocking function but there’s not. Different functions just gets added in at random times like the ability to merge skills/bloodlines/powers and a skill point system after 20 chapters while the MC was rearranging his stats screen. As a summary, if you are still interested then go ahead and read this story. Note: review at chapter 58

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0pium_Lv13
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