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Review Detail of Chalky in Pioneer of Ascension

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Chalky
ChalkyAuthor4yrChalky

Shameless review by the author as is apparently customary. This is my first work but I've been reading cultivation and fantasy novels on sites like this for 4-5 years now and have long outgrown the usual tropes and such, so this is my attempt to write a new story I myself would find refreshing. If you have any constructive feedback as you read, please let me know in the chapter comments so I can take it on board and adjust as I see fit. Thanks, and I hope you all enjoy!

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Pioneer of Ascension

Chalky

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Chalky
ChalkyAuthorChalky

Welcome to the site! You can also use fast passes to unlock chapters, you get those for free by collecting your daily login reward. And I'm 95% sure they stay locked forever.

Kunal_Singh_2575:By the way I am new to the site. So are only the latest 3 chapters locked or will chapters after 115 be locked for all eternity unless we use stones. Can I only use money or can I wait for them to unlock?
DeVoided
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Harem or OTP?

Chalky
ChalkyAuthorChalky

No harem

DeVoided:Harem or OTP?
Rayama
RayamaLv4Rayama

No harem? say no more heres 5 stars

Chalky:No harem
Worn_out_by
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How old are they after the 3 year skip at around CH30 and CH34?

Chalky:No harem
knytfury
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Out of all the novels that you have read till now, which novels would you personally recommend or consider your all-time favourite? And are you still keeping track of certain novels while writing your own novel? Webnovels are long (700-3000 chapters). It's kind of hard to remember the details of most of the novels that you have read.

Chalky
ChalkyAuthorChalky

Strangely enough the first two favorites that come to mind aren't actually cultivation novels. Those are Kingdoms Bloodline and Lord of Mysteries, neither of which I've been able to keep up to date with unfortunately. With work and writing I don't have much time for reading, so it's been mostly audio books lately.

knytfury:Out of all the novels that you have read till now, which novels would you personally recommend or consider your all-time favourite? And are you still keeping track of certain novels while writing your own novel? Webnovels are long (700-3000 chapters). It's kind of hard to remember the details of most of the novels that you have read.
knytfury
knytfuryLv4knytfury

yeah, those two novels are great. But kingdom's bloodline has way too much talking and very less action (I was in the arc where mc is going back to his kingdom, before I stopped reading it). Lord of mysteries is also one of my favourite novel, the author has made well thought out plot, characters and power-up system. I am currently waiting for the story to progress so that I can binge read it. I am currently busy preparing for my final semester exams at the end of this month. For some reason the authorities thought it was a good idea to conduct exams offline back-to-back without any gaps. I will definitely read and support your novel once I am done with my exams. I always try to appreciate and support creators who try something new/different. So, please don't be afraid to try something new or different. Most of the time people don't try because they are afraid of the result before it even actually happened. And later when they see the results aren't actually that bad, they regret that they hadn't done it sooner otherwise the result would have been better. I am one of those people actually 😅.

Chalky:Strangely enough the first two favorites that come to mind aren't actually cultivation novels. Those are Kingdoms Bloodline and Lord of Mysteries, neither of which I've been able to keep up to date with unfortunately. With work and writing I don't have much time for reading, so it's been mostly audio books lately.
fauxis
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No harem and that tag character development interested me. But I'm hesitant in case you'll ever stop writing this (not that many chaps)

fauxis
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No harem and that tag character development interested me. But I'm hesitant in case you'll ever stop writing this (not that many chaps)

Chalky
ChalkyAuthorChalky

Pretty sure I'm contractually obligated to finish so no worries on that end ;)

fauxis:No harem and that tag character development interested me. But I'm hesitant in case you'll ever stop writing this (not that many chaps)
Kunal_Singh_2575
Kunal_Singh_2575Lv1Kunal_Singh_2575

By the way I am new to the site. So are only the latest 3 chapters locked or will chapters after 115 be locked for all eternity unless we use stones. Can I only use money or can I wait for them to unlock?

Chalky:Pretty sure I'm contractually obligated to finish so no worries on that end ;)
Axes
AxesLv5Axes

Can i get a quick rundown on the cultivation stages and methods or at least what chapter it starts on if you know it?

Chalky
ChalkyAuthorChalky

There is an auxiliary chapter with cultivation breakdowns, it may be a little outdated to the current chapters but I'll update it soon.

Axes:Can i get a quick rundown on the cultivation stages and methods or at least what chapter it starts on if you know it?
Axes
AxesLv5Axes

Thanks

Chalky:There is an auxiliary chapter with cultivation breakdowns, it may be a little outdated to the current chapters but I'll update it soon.
knytfury
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hey author, I was just going through the latest reviews of book. I am really happy to know that so many people like your work😊. Keep up the good work and I hope your novel gets featured more and more people get to enjoy your work. Cheers 🍻

Chalky:There is an auxiliary chapter with cultivation breakdowns, it may be a little outdated to the current chapters but I'll update it soon.
Chalky
ChalkyAuthorChalky

Thanks :D

knytfury:hey author, I was just going through the latest reviews of book. I am really happy to know that so many people like your work😊. Keep up the good work and I hope your novel gets featured more and more people get to enjoy your work. Cheers 🍻
PhilVictorovich
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Breaking records with this description, it actually tells the reader something about the MC! I bookmarked this 3 months ago just for that haha. I will most likely stockpile a bit more, but do you mind describing the MC's personality briefly? Good, Neutral, Anti-Hero, Evil? Thank you in advance, and good luck with your book.

Chalky:Thanks :D
Chalky
ChalkyAuthorChalky

Hmmm... that's a tricky one to answer as the story is sort of about the mc figuring out the type of person he is and who he'd like to be. A trained killer. A loyal soldier. A sentimental person. A man with a sense of duty. A man that struggles to find his own moral boundaries and constantly weighs those with his ambition and obligation. I don't know if it that all comes through in reality, I'm biased to say so, but that's what I am for when writing, and something I'd say I've gotten better at the longer I've been writing PoA.

PhilVictorovich:Breaking records with this description, it actually tells the reader something about the MC! I bookmarked this 3 months ago just for that haha. I will most likely stockpile a bit more, but do you mind describing the MC's personality briefly? Good, Neutral, Anti-Hero, Evil? Thank you in advance, and good luck with your book.
X_Wheel_Will
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Chalky:No harem