Sunny has become too much of an sacrificial hero. I didn't mind it until now but this is too much. I hope there is a good plan or else I will quit this novel because of how ridiculous plot rumour is despite the existence of Fated Attribute.

I remembered after reading more chapters. It would have been great if there was some kind of foreshadowing as to how he ended up in this kind of mindset. I wouldn't be surprised if people quit reading the novel because of his kindness unless there was some kidn of foreshadowing for them to convince themselves to read more since they are unlikely to connect his trauma since it's something that happened quite a few chapters back. I myself only continued reading because it's enjoyable and because of tarot club.

I am curious as to how the church of fool mananged to built it's own churches in some regions of southern continent.

I just don't understand as to why he is avenging a stranger? Is it because of his past of being adopted by Aurore. This is just too much recklesness. Did he completely forget about saving Aurore? Can anyone bother to explain?

Main lead is too considerate and suicidal. I hate reading novels with such a main lead. I would've already quit reading if not for the fact that I loved book 1 a bit too much.

Enjoyed it!

No Romance. Maybe much much time later. I hadn't included romance when I had outlined the plot because Romance would just divert my focus.

Hi, I am the author of this novel. I am giving a selfish 5 rating to my own novel. I started this novel in Royal Road and continue to create chapters in that site since I liked the typing interface a lot... Just giving an alert.

I don't like Martha. She didn't impress me like what June had done.

Better than Noah but the woman doesn't impress me as much as what June had done.

I understand. I just felt that I should atleast respond since I started to continue releasing chapters.

No, friend. As of now, I don't plan to do so but it might change later on. Life is always unpredictable. This wasn't done to earn money, I just started to avoid distractions in real life.

I might be saying this to read more chapters but isn't 15 privilege chapters just too much? Other popular novels I have read doesn't have more than 10(usually it's 6 or 3 but let's ignore that since this novel is popular) chapters, I'm sure about that.

I see. I think you should type it down as a note at the end of a chapter.

When did the slime level up? Back when mc battled Sphinx army? I hope there's a good answer. The story's good other than many plot holes.

I think author needs to re-edit the levels mentioned in early chapters. This is a huge plothole considering how fast everyone is leveling up

One year dude. It took the top player one year to reach level 107. First 20 levels are easy. I hope there is an explanation for this.

I think you're focusing too much on characters. Doing it now and then is okay but if you do it repeatedly, it won't be good pacing. Also the characteristics of these characters, you just bring them out without an proper explanation. It's more like slowly building up those characteristics so that readers won't be surprised when you bring stuff like Alice can beat up whoever she wants. The writing is chaotic os because of this. The reason I'm stating this is because you aren't slowing down your pace.

Very Interesting.

New Review From The Author I don't know how many might read this, anyway this review is basically going to tell you about what the novel is truly about as I've finally found my right direction in writing this story as a newbie. The novel depicts main character's interesting journey mixed with pyschological elements of how MC is developing. The story isn't repetitive, I always try to not make the story repetitive. There are grammar mistakes for sure. This is a novel I just had an idea about and wanted to write. I never thought from reader's perspective, so you know. Story's release is slow(minimum, one chapter per week), this is done to just pass my time, that's why. I already have various idea of where to stop this novel. For now, it's probably after war arc. I believe by then, I had enough experience writing this story.