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SleepWalkingMan
SleepWalkingManLv54yr
2020-06-07 20:29

Well after reading it idk how this story gets 5* rating but everyone have different opinion . The mc of the story is one the most arrogant mc I have seen and know he doesn't have the strength to be that arrogant. Just because he somehow becomes owner of the bank of universe his ego started to infalte that much that if you don't agree with him or offend him you die . You have two options either do what he says or you die. I just couldn't stand his behavior in the story.

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LightWind
LightWindLv5

To expand on this, MC is needlessly arrogant. I can understand his desire for revenge in the first deal as he had some pent up feelings from being a slave. But he only gained the ownership of an ‘almighty’ (sarcasm) bank, and he pops up to their doorstep without a plan to fall back upon in case sh*t hits the fan, like he expects people who didn’t honour their part of the contract to honour it. Like in the 3rd deal with the sect, the treasure brush he relied on was cut off from him and the chances to get back the brush and complete the contract was close to none as he needed to hide inside the bank which would ruin the authority and imposingness he was trying to exert on the debtors (but he didnt cuz plot armour came at the right time), the contract was only saved by plot armour. You would think that with such a close call MC would grow from it, but nope he lets this sense of invincibility get to his head. My main problem with the MC is his attempts of trying to act cool when he doesn’t have a surefire way to complete the contract and you would also think the spirit of the bank (who is has lived through 8 owners) would be able to help MC plan to complete deals but noooo, shes just a pretty face with extra functions.

BrianG9677
BrianG9677Lv15

Agrred, also it stated clearly previous chapter person who burrowed the brush 10000 years ago died yet here he is If someone can live that long 1 they would realise they would have no means to refuse the contract 2 they would be more mature 3 they would have made preparations beforehand to make it so they are not reliant upon it

Supreme_Devil
Supreme_DevilLv4

Otherwise wtf you were doing with your useless dog life, end your existence, it makes me disgusted and sick.

BrianG9677:Agrred, also it stated clearly previous chapter person who burrowed the brush 10000 years ago died yet here he is If someone can live that long 1 they would realise they would have no means to refuse the contract 2 they would be more mature 3 they would have made preparations beforehand to make it so they are not reliant upon it
BrianG9677
BrianG9677Lv15

What r u on about

Supreme_Devil:Otherwise wtf you were doing with your useless dog life, end your existence, it makes me disgusted and sick.
Art_Romanillos
Art_RomanillosLv2

Haha so your one of those dumbass who likes corney, retarded heroic MC where the side characters always depend on him and they never get to do shyt and dreams of becoming like him but never does. It ain't like one of those MC where he gets fcking ruined and acts all shyty when dealing with girls. He is cold blooded and good in using people or subordinates that actually do stuff!!

God_of_Reading
God_of_ReadingLv3

PREACH BROTHER!!

Art_Romanillos:Haha so your one of those dumbass who likes corney, retarded heroic MC where the side characters always depend on him and they never get to do shyt and dreams of becoming like him but never does. It ain't like one of those MC where he gets fcking ruined and acts all shyty when dealing with girls. He is cold blooded and good in using people or subordinates that actually do stuff!!
Nydre
NydreLv13

You make it sound like being cold-blooded and manipulative is a unique trait to a main character, when it's just as cliche as the heroic one. And you honestly need to read more if those two are the only types of main characters you know of... Reading your comment nearly gave me a seizure, please refrain from replying.

Art_Romanillos:Haha so your one of those dumbass who likes corney, retarded heroic MC where the side characters always depend on him and they never get to do shyt and dreams of becoming like him but never does. It ain't like one of those MC where he gets fcking ruined and acts all shyty when dealing with girls. He is cold blooded and good in using people or subordinates that actually do stuff!!
hung_up_my_coat
hung_up_my_coatLv3

But he isnt cold blooded, if anything he is hot blooded, he does everything without an actual plan, and he doesnt even try to build up the bank's wealth before taking on crazy powerful cultivators. He cant use his subordinates well, since the girl is frikin useless. So what r u talking about?

Art_Romanillos:Haha so your one of those dumbass who likes corney, retarded heroic MC where the side characters always depend on him and they never get to do shyt and dreams of becoming like him but never does. It ain't like one of those MC where he gets fcking ruined and acts all shyty when dealing with girls. He is cold blooded and good in using people or subordinates that actually do stuff!!
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Heretoc
HeretocLv4

I am back. As I promised, a review after reading 200+ chapters. Currently I have read till chapter 400, so I believe I might be able to shed some more light on this story and what you can expect. To began with, I am reading this through raws, so I can't comment on translator quality or stability of update. But, from the already released 60 chapters, the translation quality is readable but not exactly upto the bar. One thing I like about the story is it's simplicity. Until now, author has stayed true to the main theme of the story : collecting debt and bringing back the bank to its former glory. Most CN stories seem to forget why they started the story. Everything just seems to spiral out of control. Every arc will have its own mission. There is no end goal. But here you can see what the story is about. MC doesn't deviates from ut. It does has smaller arcs but they are there to support and fill in the main theme. Another thing which makes me like this story more is short filler arcs. Oh, there are fillers arcs, short side story arcs, supporting chapters and what not. But author clearly recognises on where to stop. You won't find stupid tournament arcs or trasure hunting arcs stretching over several tens of chapters. Coming to the MC. He's OP. Which actually suits the theme of the story. He doesn't acts like your genric OP MC. You won't find him bullying people or slaughtering families. In fact, he rarely leaves the bank. It's mostly his ever increasing group of subordinates who collect debt. Only when they kick a hard stubble will the MC come to deal with it. Now about his personality. Please don't expect proper character building and depth. He's no character from ASOIF or something from the hands of Sanderson, Abercrombie or Butcher. He's quite simple and honestly, one dimensional. One thing in his favour is his modern sensibilities. Atleast until now I haven't seem him having any inclination for harem. Infact he dislikes harem. So harem haters will definitely like this. He's not dense and something is building between him and Seven. It's not romance but there are flirting moments here and there. I won't spoil it further but its pretty good for a non romantic CN novel. And yes he's not stupid. You can see why he's making a deal. He knows when he can rip someone off and when he has to stay neutral. Pretty good imo. One thing which ticks me off, is side charcter development. They are fanatical in belief to the level of zealots. The angels have NO character growth or development. They are like NPCs to help the MC. Only needed when a side quest requires it. Pretty sad. They could have fleshed out the story further. But I can see that author wants to play safe. Dealing with multiple characters is not a simple task. You need to balance the fine line between too less and too much. World development is a bit icky. You have ten mortal world's, nine immortal worlds and one big celestial/divine world. The raw terms are a bit confusing so please forgive me if these do not match the translation. The world is not exactly fleshed out. You know it's there but that's it. It's both good and bad. You don't have long arcs wasted on/in other worlds but at the same time , you don't have much impression of those worlds. I haveany more things to say, but I will story here. I will just summarise the whole review. Pro : 1: Single goal. No nonsense targets or anything. 2: Very less filler. 3: No Harem. 4: MC with modern sensibilities. 5: MC is not stupid Cons : 1: one dimensional character. 2: Zealot subordinates and no development. 3: No world development. Note : 1: OP MC That's it for now. Cya.

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