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Eddicted
EddictedLv54yr
2020-06-29 15:09

This novel is acceptable till 100 chapters. After that the charecters become more dumb, foolish and brainless. They cant even see the very obvious things. Those are just one dimensional charects created to cover up the fact that the story is very lacking in the aspects of creativity and good plot. The MC becomes a very lazy idiot - here this author tried to imitate the "monster pet evolution" book but ended up creating a useless low IQ trash MC. If you want to read it because you like the first 80-90 chapter, i suggest you dont but You will be very dissapointed if you keep reading. I am saying it out of personal experience (i read the remaining chapters in raw)

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Seikatsu
SeikatsuLv5

I don't even know how you made it that far. System is trash and annoying af.

Felthat
FelthatLv15

I pushed through to over 100. it just gets worse and worse. I just want to take a baseball bat to the MCs head..repeatedly. the side characters improve a bit..as in..they get more polite..not more intelligent. I finally dropped it today due to sheer frustration and disgust with the personality of the MC and lack of story progress.

Charizma
CharizmaLv6

No, but he starts spoiling his tsundere sister (who tortured her original brother/body's og owner to death). To the point of pushing her forward beyond all actual genius' and not making any sense.

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Lord_Eggie
Lord_EggieLv1

yea that's the urban dictionary definition of simp

Charizma:No, but he starts spoiling his tsundere sister (who tortured her original brother/body's og owner to death). To the point of pushing her forward beyond all actual genius' and not making any sense.
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