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WhoSaidImNotanMC
WhoSaidImNotanMCLv24yr
2020-07-29 02:30

Brain Dead Mc to protect plot Check Stupid Coincidences to protect plot Check Plot Armor Check To protect the stupidly designed plot, the author makes MC takes the most stupid decisions. It is one of the worst Chinese Web novels I have ever read. The "Original" structure is somehow interesting, other than that it is rubbish. I read 600 some chapters and I regret terribly. Author forgots what had he wrote in one chapter before, no flow, no cohesion. Fence Sitters are brain deader than the Mc. They talk rubbish to show Mc strong, cool and intersting, but in reality Mc is just that. Read with caution.

Astral Pet Store

Ancient Xi
4.3
1581 Chs

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LORD_OF_ORIGIN
LORD_OF_ORIGINLv4

*coughs confidently* This the original by me : I want to be the very best, Like no one ever was. To tame them is my real test, To train them is my cause! (I will travel across the land, Searching far and wide. Each Astral Beast to understand The power that's inside!) Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! It's you and me, I know it's my destiny! Astral Beast!!! Oh, you're my best friend, In a world we must defend! Astral Beast!! Gotta tame em' all! (A heart so true, Our courage will pull us through!) You teach me and I'll teach you, Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! Gotta tame em' all! Every challenge along the way, With courage I will face! I will battle every day, To claim my rightful place! Come with me, the time is right, There's no better team with a system!! Arm in arm, we'll win the fight, It's always been our dream! Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! It's you and me, I know it's my destiny! Astral Beast!! Oh, you're my best friend, In a world we must defend! Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! (A heart so true, Our courage will pull us through!) You teach me and I'll teach you, Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! Gotta tame em' all! Gotta tame em' all! Gotta tame em' all! Gotta tame em' all! Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! It's you and me, I know it's my destiny! Astral Beast!!! Oh, you're my best friend, In a world we must defend! Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! (A heart so true, Our courage will pull us through!) You teach me and I'll teach you, Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! Gotta tame em' all! ASTRAL BEAST!!! - BY LORD_OF_ORIGIN

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Roon_Toon1
Roon_Toon1Lv14

I read it and it is actually pretty good the main character's personality is a little shameless with him stealing from other powerful beings with his system and you can find Pikachu in the novel.

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nuticracker
nuticrackerLv3

Great story and RAW LINKS here https://m.biquge.com.cn/book/42227/ thnx me in prayers ........................,.......................................................... . . . . . . . .

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Lazy_Prince
Lazy_PrinceLv6

Let’s be honest, this novel is a unique novel but not the rare one. I like this kind of pet-shop-cultivation-novel but later I had gradually became so disappointed when I read the raw. The tittle novel is “Astral Pet Shop” but this novel hardly mentioned the development of the shop, they didn’t even sell the astral pet but only selling food pet and training customer’s astral pet. That’s all. What’s about the mc? Geeeh, mc is arrogant and a bit madman. Instead how to develop his own shop, mc is rather provoked every big families. He is smart but no wise. He chose to enter the outside secret realm with the risk of one time death when the system already provides him with many secret realms with endless death. The only thing he need is a little bit time, he just need to wait patiently and accumulation of money from shop but he ends up running into the greater risk and provoked some big figures. Seriously, the more i read the more disappointed i became and gradually i lose interest then I drop it. The concept itself was very good and unique but author made this novel to became so cliche. The side characters were even more worst then the mc’s. Overall rate: 5/10

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SirLobo93
SirLobo93Lv13

Me seeing book centered on pets: 😳😁 Me realizing book is by the author of Dark King 😥 Me reading story description: 😧 My expectations for the novel: 😅

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louisjacq
louisjacqLv15

The same story that you can read on a large number of Chinese novel. I honestly don't like the author's writing's style. Not worth reading...

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torrelsav1
torrelsav1Lv15

im reading this book and I feel like the reviews aren't accurate this book is very cliché mc seems to be a masochist also might be retarded I was really hoping for it to be good since love monster taming novels but this is bad tbh its not interesting feels like a cultivation novel without the excitement and a lot of retards including mc

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ThatGrassIsGreener
ThatGrassIsGreenerLv14

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Eddicted
EddictedLv5

This novel is acceptable till 100 chapters. After that the charecters become more dumb, foolish and brainless. They cant even see the very obvious things. Those are just one dimensional charects created to cover up the fact that the story is very lacking in the aspects of creativity and good plot. The MC becomes a very lazy idiot - here this author tried to imitate the "monster pet evolution" book but ended up creating a useless low IQ trash MC. If you want to read it because you like the first 80-90 chapter, i suggest you dont but You will be very dissapointed if you keep reading. I am saying it out of personal experience (i read the remaining chapters in raw)

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