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ImmortalXuanWu
ImmortalXuanWuLv134yr
2020-06-26 23:48

I read until chapter 12 and I couldn't go over it, the characters are just annoying, like all of them, some of which, if were my irl friends, they would get a punch in the gut, like I can't say too much about it since I didn't even read half of the available chapters, but like with this first impression that I had access to, it's not that good of a read

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Bangtan_Addict
Bangtan_AddictLv10

you should read a bit more into the story! there’s character development that makes the character a bit more like able.

CryptoCat
CryptoCatLv4

Yeah but the fact that it has such a lacklustre beginning makes reading onward feel bitter and strenuous.

Bangtan_Addict:you should read a bit more into the story! there’s character development that makes the character a bit more like able.
deleted_author
deleted_authorLv2

Can you check mine and leave a review, my book is Remnant of God ROG for short... I will appreciate your help please...

Adetokunbo_David
Adetokunbo_DavidLv10

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Arvin0612
Arvin0612Lv4

You should have read a bit more a get more annoyed. Trust me, not worth reading

CryptoCat:Yeah but the fact that it has such a lacklustre beginning makes reading onward feel bitter and strenuous.
Seikatsu
SeikatsuLv5

With such an annoying and ridiculous system it's impossible to read. I highly doubt the system changes

Bangtan_Addict:you should read a bit more into the story! there’s character development that makes the character a bit more like able.
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*coughs confidently* This the original by me : I want to be the very best, Like no one ever was. To tame them is my real test, To train them is my cause! (I will travel across the land, Searching far and wide. Each Astral Beast to understand The power that's inside!) Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! It's you and me, I know it's my destiny! Astral Beast!!! Oh, you're my best friend, In a world we must defend! Astral Beast!! Gotta tame em' all! (A heart so true, Our courage will pull us through!) You teach me and I'll teach you, Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! Gotta tame em' all! Every challenge along the way, With courage I will face! I will battle every day, To claim my rightful place! Come with me, the time is right, There's no better team with a system!! Arm in arm, we'll win the fight, It's always been our dream! Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! It's you and me, I know it's my destiny! Astral Beast!! Oh, you're my best friend, In a world we must defend! Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! (A heart so true, Our courage will pull us through!) You teach me and I'll teach you, Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! Gotta tame em' all! Gotta tame em' all! Gotta tame em' all! Gotta tame em' all! Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! It's you and me, I know it's my destiny! Astral Beast!!! Oh, you're my best friend, In a world we must defend! Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! (A heart so true, Our courage will pull us through!) You teach me and I'll teach you, Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! Gotta tame em' all! ASTRAL BEAST!!! - BY LORD_OF_ORIGIN

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