pros of this novel 1. demon slayer magic 2. an mc who's not stronger then everyone since birth 3. it's not a skirt chasing mc who trys to **** every girl as soon as they meet cons of this novel 1. the introduction, youd have much better reviews and less critisim if you removed chapter 1 and just reword chapter 2 as the intro 2. it follows the main storyline to much without any interesting twists (in my opinion the twist that are added are super predictable) 3. astas way to op in this novel 4. the mc's mentality is a flip flop, sometimes he's an alpha crushing his enemy's and others he's a beta submitting to the wills of those around him and his intelligence fluctuates based on the situation all in all it's not a good fanfic nor a bad one it's just meh? if author reworked the character design and did something more unique with the storyline I would have liked it much better... but seriously author change that backstory cause it doesn't make any sense and you litterally make it absolutely useless THE next chapter
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