well from what I have read so far, the author will make the power of the MC grow together with that of Asta, because he must like this "irritating" boy. That would be good, if he didn't run away from the character that, at least in my view, he changed. And the second and definitive reason why I am not going to continue reading, I am not a masochist, nor do I like a character who is pushed to one side and the other for the sake of the "Plot". I should have left in chapter 1, because in addition to MC's being the pussy of the gods, being ****ed from one world to the next, not even on '' holidays '' (I doubt that), he has peace, being ****ed again. new. If you're a masochist, like a good narrative and don't care about the MC being other people's pussy, read this.
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LIKETrust me, this is considered not "harsh" I've seen worse reviews on other Fanfics. Plus the person continously say "I" which means this is his own opinion only plus he actually points out on what he thinks about the personality of the MC. This is just his reason of why he is putting that rating. Actually, this is better than those reviews where they just put 1 star review or 5 star review and proceed to put some random things.
THE_GOD_OF_CHEESE:man u didnt have to say this harsh stuff. this person who put time of their life made this and it is free u should at least respect the person who made this to try to entertain people
Not protecting him or anything, but just want to say that there will be people who appreciate the author’s work. However, I feel that it is totally a free game to give your opinions in the reviews, as it’s there for a reason. The author can take the opinion as a grain of salt or use it.
THE_GOD_OF_CHEESE:man u didnt have to say this harsh stuff. this person who put time of their life made this and it is free u should at least respect the person who made this to try to entertain people