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DarthVegito
DarthVegitoLv104yr
2020-05-22 02:52

MC sucks and the first chapter he makes his wishes but the god didn’t do any of them so the first chapter was pointless and because of that the whole story to me since then just sucked. Should either delete the first chapter and edit the second or just fix the second chapter where he realizes none of his wishes worked except his magic lol awful

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DarthVegito
DarthVegitoLv10

Updated review: NO CHANGE His personality is sh*t, he is sometimes OP and other times just weak it makes no sense. Asta is able to fight him and Luck at the same time, he arrogantly tries to unlock wind magic and gets knocked out by some weakling compared to him. Inconsistent novel and just a major disappointment on a black clover fic... sadly was hoping for more but I gave this a chance

DarthVegito
DarthVegitoLv10

Sadly still no change :/

THE_GOD_OF_CHEESE
THE_GOD_OF_CHEESELv1

my guy is like smooth brain time with all the shit he is talking about

ordinary_Brutus
ordinary_BrutusLv4

You really think it's all about being op. Don't you? Why can't you just try not to see only the negative aspects. Geez why do people trash talk this Novel just because it's not as badass as they think.

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

seeing as u only have 3 comments all related to the same bk, all used to defend it and one reviewing a 5, and to top it off, the account is recently made. seems funny.

ordinary_Brutus:You really think it's all about being op. Don't you? Why can't you just try not to see only the negative aspects. Geez why do people trash talk this Novel just because it's not as badass as they think.
ordinary_Brutus
ordinary_BrutusLv4

Yeah if recently discovered this app and I have read many mangas so I thought of starting to read fanfictions and I must admit there all good. And I really like this one so I defend it. And I now my arguments are shit but why do they hate so much on this fanfictions. I mean if they don't like it then just read something that appeals more to your liking and don't just trash talk it 24/7

amaturewriter:seeing as u only have 3 comments all related to the same bk, all used to defend it and one reviewing a 5, and to top it off, the account is recently made. seems funny.
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

well. I believe its like a deal. the readers gives his time for the writer, and the writer gives content in return. And this is webnovel no? a place for writers to post their shit for other people to see their work, and care for it, otherwise,why post here? plus, if a person read it the bk, like a lot of it, its his right to say what he thinks so obviously one must be willing to accept the critic, hate, etc. plus look at how many people agreed with the review. reviews are usefull in telling others what to expect. its a heads up so that other people that dont like it avoid it. and in return less hate/ negative shit for the author. its a good thing, less shit to deal with. and to be fair, all writers always choose webnovel over other sites cause this site, has more views, its a fact. u post an ff here, it gets more views here than others. believe me, personal experience. only down side is that readers can do this, say what they want about the bk directly. if the writer cant handle dont post here, simple. post in another site, where readers cant directly say shit.

ordinary_Brutus:Yeah if recently discovered this app and I have read many mangas so I thought of starting to read fanfictions and I must admit there all good. And I really like this one so I defend it. And I now my arguments are shit but why do they hate so much on this fanfictions. I mean if they don't like it then just read something that appeals more to your liking and don't just trash talk it 24/7
ordinary_Brutus
ordinary_BrutusLv4

I will try to remember that. Thank you for opening my eyes. I never thought of negative reviews in such a way.

amaturewriter:well. I believe its like a deal. the readers gives his time for the writer, and the writer gives content in return. And this is webnovel no? a place for writers to post their shit for other people to see their work, and care for it, otherwise,why post here? plus, if a person read it the bk, like a lot of it, its his right to say what he thinks so obviously one must be willing to accept the critic, hate, etc. plus look at how many people agreed with the review. reviews are usefull in telling others what to expect. its a heads up so that other people that dont like it avoid it. and in return less hate/ negative shit for the author. its a good thing, less shit to deal with. and to be fair, all writers always choose webnovel over other sites cause this site, has more views, its a fact. u post an ff here, it gets more views here than others. believe me, personal experience. only down side is that readers can do this, say what they want about the bk directly. if the writer cant handle dont post here, simple. post in another site, where readers cant directly say shit.
Iamsunny9
Iamsunny9Lv3

If they won't do it then what does reviews even mean. You must spacial kind of retard.

ordinary_Brutus:Yeah if recently discovered this app and I have read many mangas so I thought of starting to read fanfictions and I must admit there all good. And I really like this one so I defend it. And I now my arguments are shit but why do they hate so much on this fanfictions. I mean if they don't like it then just read something that appeals more to your liking and don't just trash talk it 24/7
ordinary_Brutus
ordinary_BrutusLv4

If you read my latest comment on this fanfic you will find out that I didn't know the importance of negative reviews, but thank you for trying to open my eyes in an insulting way.

Iamsunny9:If they won't do it then what does reviews even mean. You must spacial kind of retard.
Dethpool_Mlg
Dethpool_MlgLv4

ordinary_Brutus:You really think it's all about being op. Don't you? Why can't you just try not to see only the negative aspects. Geez why do people trash talk this Novel just because it's not as badass as they think.
Dethpool_Mlg
Dethpool_MlgLv4

maybe because they've read alot of fanfiction and want the author to fix their mistakes instead of constantly makeing the same ones over and over again?

ordinary_Brutus:Yeah if recently discovered this app and I have read many mangas so I thought of starting to read fanfictions and I must admit there all good. And I really like this one so I defend it. And I now my arguments are shit but why do they hate so much on this fanfictions. I mean if they don't like it then just read something that appeals more to your liking and don't just trash talk it 24/7
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