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Qvoth
QvothLv34yr
2020-05-22 07:31

useless weak protagonist, lived 13 lives as the supposed supreme of those lives, but in the 9th ep a mere captain takes him by the neck and tells him which library is his, the protagonist does nothing and is still afraid, apart from the wishes he asked for in the beginning God didn't answer, horrible story

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PinguGod_
PinguGod_Lv5

What happens when Donald Trump and Hillary Clinton get a child? You happen.

Primordial_Phoenix
Primordial_PhoenixLv10

You're an idiot

PinguGod_:What happens when Donald Trump and Hillary Clinton get a child? You happen.
Ryuu_Gei
Ryuu_GeiLv4

i like how you diss the story but you do realize he has experience of writing a good story, and it just proves that you base your judgement on what is shown in front of you, instead of thinking countless other possibilities. cuz, you are below than a mere retard. just plain stupidity

IPreferLonerMc
IPreferLonerMcLv5

Yeah, cause he’s gonna fucking predict everything happening, and how would someone know if they have experience? And writing a good story? That’s arguable, just **** up bro

Ryuu_Gei:i like how you diss the story but you do realize he has experience of writing a good story, and it just proves that you base your judgement on what is shown in front of you, instead of thinking countless other possibilities. cuz, you are below than a mere retard. just plain stupidity
Ryuu_Gei
Ryuu_GeiLv4

if you have the fucking intelligence to read the whole story carefully, HE CAN'T REMEMBER HIS PAST LIVES BUT HE KNOWS HE HAS THEM. he only has fragmented memories of his modern era life, and even then. it still limited. And based on the fucking encounter with the fucking god he was talking to. You can tell it was a norm for the god to **** him around.. READ THE DAMN STORY CAREFULLY.

IPreferLonerMc:Yeah, cause he’s gonna fucking predict everything happening, and how would someone know if they have experience? And writing a good story? That’s arguable, just **** up bro
Ryuu_Gei
Ryuu_GeiLv4

cant you scroll down from the book's menu, there's stories. one of which was the MHA killer quirk which is on the top list on the fanfic power stone standings, instead of just criticizing every goddamn thing quickly you should be fucking rational for once. It's like after a thousand books you read, you still cant even use that brain of yours.

IPreferLonerMc:Yeah, cause he’s gonna fucking predict everything happening, and how would someone know if they have experience? And writing a good story? That’s arguable, just **** up bro
FBI_B1TCH
FBI_B1TCHLv14

This has got to be one of the most retarded replies I've ever seen. "This just proves that you base your judgement on what is shown in front of you" Yeah, no shıt cupcake. What else is he supposed to base his judgement on? Is he a telepath that can read the author's mind? Is he a psychic that can see the future? And what the hell does it matter that one of his other novels used to be high in the rankings? Why should a completely separate novel affect his judgement for this one? Bruh 🗿

Ryuu_Gei:i like how you diss the story but you do realize he has experience of writing a good story, and it just proves that you base your judgement on what is shown in front of you, instead of thinking countless other possibilities. cuz, you are below than a mere retard. just plain stupidity
IPreferLonerMc
IPreferLonerMcLv5

So they write one good book and all of them turn out good? This has a 3.7 review outa 5, so something is clearly wrong if he’s so good and his other books got 4 or whatever stars. And wtf am I critiquing?

Ryuu_Gei:cant you scroll down from the book's menu, there's stories. one of which was the MHA killer quirk which is on the top list on the fanfic power stone standings, instead of just criticizing every goddamn thing quickly you should be fucking rational for once. It's like after a thousand books you read, you still cant even use that brain of yours.
IPreferLonerMc
IPreferLonerMcLv5

If you have the fucking intelligence to know not everyone reads the story. Fuck, I’m here checking the reviews to see if I should read it but when there’s bitches like you reading this then I’d rather not

Ryuu_Gei:if you have the fucking intelligence to read the whole story carefully, HE CAN'T REMEMBER HIS PAST LIVES BUT HE KNOWS HE HAS THEM. he only has fragmented memories of his modern era life, and even then. it still limited. And based on the fucking encounter with the fucking god he was talking to. You can tell it was a norm for the god to **** him around.. READ THE DAMN STORY CAREFULLY.
The_Sloth
The_SlothLv3

I fully agreed with your assessment on this sistuation my dude.

FBI_B1TCH:This has got to be one of the most retarded replies I've ever seen. "This just proves that you base your judgement on what is shown in front of you" Yeah, no shıt cupcake. What else is he supposed to base his judgement on? Is he a telepath that can read the author's mind? Is he a psychic that can see the future? And what the hell does it matter that one of his other novels used to be high in the rankings? Why should a completely separate novel affect his judgement for this one? Bruh 🗿
Kasukage
KasukageLv13

The story is actually good there are just some people who like trolling it. Don't know why.

IPreferLonerMc:If you have the fucking intelligence to know not everyone reads the story. Fuck, I’m here checking the reviews to see if I should read it but when there’s bitches like you reading this then I’d rather not
Kasukage
KasukageLv13

The mc doesn't actually predict what will happen, he only know the location of a major place like witch forest. I only ask you read the first chapter before you review any further and use your own judgement. Please and thank you.

IPreferLonerMc:Yeah, cause he’s gonna fucking predict everything happening, and how would someone know if they have experience? And writing a good story? That’s arguable, just **** up bro
IceFour
IceFourLv4

a lot of text

Adypoker
AdypokerLv7

Wtf? Why even read the first chapter if it has 0 relevance towards the story?

Kasukage:The mc doesn't actually predict what will happen, he only know the location of a major place like witch forest. I only ask you read the first chapter before you review any further and use your own judgement. Please and thank you.
SynTax
SynTaxLv14

He memory was wipe everytime he got reincarnated...

Pyoug
PyougLv4

holy śhit actually retarded lmfao

Ryuu_Gei:i like how you diss the story but you do realize he has experience of writing a good story, and it just proves that you base your judgement on what is shown in front of you, instead of thinking countless other possibilities. cuz, you are below than a mere retard. just plain stupidity
Qwip7
Qwip7Lv4

He doesn’t carry the power over, his memory gets wiped and he goes into a new body

angel701
angel701Lv5

He’s rating this story not the author

Ryuu_Gei:i like how you diss the story but you do realize he has experience of writing a good story, and it just proves that you base your judgement on what is shown in front of you, instead of thinking countless other possibilities. cuz, you are below than a mere retard. just plain stupidity
Persin
PersinLv4

You murdered him! Jesus Christ, he's already dead!

PinguGod_:What happens when Donald Trump and Hillary Clinton get a child? You happen.
KazuT13_ArtyFJinx
KazuT13_ArtyFJinxLv13

Idiot. DIDNT HE JUST SAY HE DOESN'T REMEMBER!? IF YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT HOW HE BECAME THE STRONGEST EVEN WITHOUT MEMORIES THEN THE ANSWER IS SIMPLE HE DIDN'T HAVE TIME! TIME, TO TRAIN HE WAS TRANSMIGATED AT 10 AND ONLY HAD 5 YEARS OF TRAINING. SO ITS OBVIOUS! HOW STUPID. On his past lives he became the strongest because he had lots of time.

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