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A_person_4016
A_person_4016Lv104yr
2020-09-22 15:10

The writing quality and update stability are really great, but everything else isn't. First of all, the world design. If the lowest tier orb gives 50 strength or some bs like that, why was the giant's strength a B-rank skill if low tier orbs drop like pinecones from a pine tree? Also, the infinite focus o is total bull shît, and really doesn't work. I would understand if the mc had a ability that multiplies his focus by 10, 100 even, but infinite is too much. The mc went from 1-100 since the first chapter, and there really isn't any character development. The mc is a fücking coward and really dumb. Why would he sell skill books because they wasn't suiting the type of build he was doing? For example, the golem summon spell was just sold without an explantion. He isn't unkillable, and if a speed class rushes him while everything was down, he ded. The golem provides ample protection even when he disables the barrier, and will also stall the boss for him. Why did he use the giants strength skill book and sold the ice spikes? That giant strength book is the one that doesn't match your build, and who tf makes a 'build' in a apocaplyse setting? Wouldn't he keep every spell and orb and item since he is insanely conservative?

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daddi_pezzi
daddi_pezziLv12

what are you saying? How can someone possibly ruah him when he has a 10m thick plot armor? He doesn't need the protection of the golems

A_person_4016
A_person_4016Lv10

right. I completely forgot about plot armor

daddi_pezzi:what are you saying? How can someone possibly ruah him when he has a 10m thick plot armor? He doesn't need the protection of the golems
DaoistObvious
DaoistObviousLv14

'build' lol 😂.. nah I ain't reading that

Daniel_West_2419
Daniel_West_2419Lv1

I'm currently at chapter 37 and am already concerned with how fast he's growing in power lol and assuming he'll pretty much be invincible as long as he gets to top ranks here soon. As far as your comment about the golem summon spell, I'm pretty sure the book mentioned that he was concerned with a golem slowing him down from his clear speeds for why he sold it. Also, he did realize pretty early on that he could expand his build to include more skills, although on one side he still didn't want skills that required a weapon (at least early on in the story, not sure it's still the case) and also that he just didn't want to have way too many skills and options as that would slow his response time to situations. Overall the book is good so far (like I said I'm only up to chapter 37) but I might put this book on hold if it continues to be so fast pace and MC is 100% OP in the world early on as I'm not sure that would interest me. I enjoy more char growth development books lol.

DaoistjscxfO
DaoistjscxfOLv13

The Mc is OP but his opponets scale with him and the stakes only get higher and higher. So I wouldn’t worry about him get OP too early in the sense that there are no longer any stakes. Personally I still dropped the story at around 1,300 chapters, but I’d give the story a 6.5 or 7/10 probably.

Daniel_West_2419:I'm currently at chapter 37 and am already concerned with how fast he's growing in power lol and assuming he'll pretty much be invincible as long as he gets to top ranks here soon. As far as your comment about the golem summon spell, I'm pretty sure the book mentioned that he was concerned with a golem slowing him down from his clear speeds for why he sold it. Also, he did realize pretty early on that he could expand his build to include more skills, although on one side he still didn't want skills that required a weapon (at least early on in the story, not sure it's still the case) and also that he just didn't want to have way too many skills and options as that would slow his response time to situations. Overall the book is good so far (like I said I'm only up to chapter 37) but I might put this book on hold if it continues to be so fast pace and MC is 100% OP in the world early on as I'm not sure that would interest me. I enjoy more char growth development books lol.
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TrueGodOfExp
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MadAuthor
MadAuthorLv1

i describe the book in one sentence, something out of a teenager fantasy, some random loser get a cheat and became a god,the plot of over 99% of the books, there is no weight in the story, there is no weight in any of the characters, the characters only have 3 jobs in the book,first provided mc with a op to face slap them,2 be smashed by mc and increase his power,3 be amazed by the action of the mc,there is literally no other purpose for any of the mcs,the mc is a hypocrite,he has a problem with Villain's because they wanted to kill him but want to destroy them because they are bad(makes you wonder why only bad guy's wants mc dead)the only reason he is fighting them is because of power but he continually came up with some righteous bullshit to justify his action, there is no weight in any of his decisions,he doesn't face any consequences for his actions, all he cares is power,in other word the entire world revolve around mc(which is a sign of a bad story)(any one who is with mc,is good guy,and any one who fight with the mc is a bad guy),power system is meaning less,why bother care about any ability he has when a new one will replace literally 2 chapter away,bruce lee said i am not afraid of a man who knew 1000 technique i am afraid of a man who knew one skill but has mastered it,this is exact opposite of the mc,overall a very disappointing book,a cheap story created from smashing together some random ideas in a very 2d and lifeless book,i suggests you go and read books like lordofmysteries and reverend insanity to learn how write,

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