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Cloudlesswalker
CloudlesswalkerLv154yr
2020-05-17 10:02

If you’re expecting a badass cool or smart mc turn around the mc is usually lead by the nose and abused by all the women and he’s usually blushing and stuttering from them even tho he’s 30+yrs old so it leaves a rather creepy taste the mc appears to be a lolicon but all of this doesn’t completely ruin this story as long as you go into this with a light heart and don’t take it to seriously you should be fine I’m going to continue reading this in the hope that the mc grows up more and hopefully becomes a man fingers crossed

One More Time: Rebirth

lynerparel
4.3
118 Chs

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lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

I apologize for the dissatisfaction this novel has caused you. But I do have a question, is your only problem with the mc being led around by women? Despite how I already explained it as to why he acts that way. If you reach the chapter called A story you would have an even deeper understanding as to why he acts that way around women. Hope this doesn't stop you from reading.

4yr
Cloudlesswalker
CloudlesswalkerLv15

Oh I still plan to keep on reading it I just found it a bit creepy for 30+yr old to be blushing and stuttering in front of girls I mean if you see that in real life it’d give you goosebumps it’s just that I went into it thinking like he was older and mature because the comments didn’t say anything about this and give people warning that’s all I wanted to do I don’t hate stories like this it’s just better to approach with a light heart which I didn’t I still very much enjoyed the story if I just ignored those parts and come back to it with an open mind then I can say I liked it Very much

lynerparel:I apologize for the dissatisfaction this novel has caused you. But I do have a question, is your only problem with the mc being led around by women? Despite how I already explained it as to why he acts that way. If you reach the chapter called A story you would have an even deeper understanding as to why he acts that way around women. Hope this doesn't stop you from reading.
4yr
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lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

Technically he is a ten-year-old boy. Though if you add his current age and his former age you do get a thirty-year-old man. But you must remember he developed differently from others ever since the attack on his village. He's mental age and his emotional age won't be able to match up. There are many introverts that are like this.

Cloudlesswalker:Oh I still plan to keep on reading it I just found it a bit creepy for 30+yr old to be blushing and stuttering in front of girls I mean if you see that in real life it’d give you goosebumps it’s just that I went into it thinking like he was older and mature because the comments didn’t say anything about this and give people warning that’s all I wanted to do I don’t hate stories like this it’s just better to approach with a light heart which I didn’t I still very much enjoyed the story if I just ignored those parts and come back to it with an open mind then I can say I liked it Very much
4yr
lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

Also thank you for continuing to read.

Cloudlesswalker:Oh I still plan to keep on reading it I just found it a bit creepy for 30+yr old to be blushing and stuttering in front of girls I mean if you see that in real life it’d give you goosebumps it’s just that I went into it thinking like he was older and mature because the comments didn’t say anything about this and give people warning that’s all I wanted to do I don’t hate stories like this it’s just better to approach with a light heart which I didn’t I still very much enjoyed the story if I just ignored those parts and come back to it with an open mind then I can say I liked it Very much
4yr
Stormbringer
StormbringerLv4

TBH I enjoy reading this kind of thread. Hahaha and I'm not a fan of beta male type of MC.

4yr
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Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU
Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmULv11

Is he totally beta or he will come around !!!?? like will be fix himself ... I don't wanna read where there's no development and goes like a crap play... no offense author...

Stormbringer:TBH I enjoy reading this kind of thread. Hahaha and I'm not a fan of beta male type of MC.
4yr
ObamaUchiha
ObamaUchihaLv4

just dont make a mc like that.

lynerparel:I apologize for the dissatisfaction this novel has caused you. But I do have a question, is your only problem with the mc being led around by women? Despite how I already explained it as to why he acts that way. If you reach the chapter called A story you would have an even deeper understanding as to why he acts that way around women. Hope this doesn't stop you from reading.
4yr
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lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

But that's how he is.

ObamaUchiha:just dont make a mc like that.
4yr
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lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

Hi, author here. I just needed to post this so that everyone that has read this work of mine before can understand. So there are no misunderstandings, first off, I am the original author of this work. I posted this on Wattpad and Royalroad back in my high school days. So you might remember it. Due to some reasons, I needed to remove them. Now, this might seem like that original work of mine, but I added a lot of new scenes and things. So this is a remake of that original work of mine. So I hope you guys don't go around saying I stole this. Cause how can I steal from myself? Alright, that's all I wanted to say to clarify the situation.

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hizer0778
hizer0778Lv14

I just wanna ask if there are any harem and if there are then I don't wanna read it.... I hate harem I hate harem I hate harem I hate harem

4yr
NovelDragon
NovelDragonLv4

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4

Although too early to review. It's from the same author as demon lord's reincarnation and that too a prequel so I am excited about it. Although it might look cliche but things are more difficult than MC's previous world and the first real fight did take him everything to fight. Hope author continues the momentum...

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FascinatedReader
FascinatedReaderLv3

This book has potential and i can see there is a bit of a harem genre to it and it would be such a waste if this novel go to such a path like having a wife on each race, I think the first 2 potential love interest is enough already because it tends to get very messy when authors start expanding the harem. Although I am still waiting for the author to put more depth in the surrounding like what is the name of the empire/country they belong to or even the general population of the village woudn't be bad but it is still early to whether this novel would turn out good or bad. I also notice a few mistakes in the grammar.

4yr
Alyptriline
AlyptrilineLv14

Finally, the book which I've waited has arrived! Hoping to see new content on the chapters. Good luck and have fun! P.S. Don't mind this text since the review should have 140 characters and I just put this to fulfill the requirements.

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Migmartinez
MigmartinezLv15

I’m gonna start with I’m really happy with this story so far as I have been reading over a hundred light novels at the same time and this one has me hooked I can’t wait to see more releases from you.

4yr
Arduril
ArdurilLv3

Nice story idea and characters. That's about all I can praise this story for. Narration is incredibly convoluted, and the story reads more like an attempt at hero's diary than a novel. If you hate novels where autor has to note out POV changes, this isn't for you since the story has no "flow". Might be a decent binge-read at +-150 chapters.

4yr
ThePotatoKing
ThePotatoKingLv14

Adopted Soldier is one of my favorite books on this site, and the other book of the author demon lord's reincarnation is also pretty amazing. This story is also as good. Though the first few chapters might not seem as impressive (probably because the author said he had written those in high school), the story really picks up soon. It is amazing and the characters are really lovely. Keep it up author.

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