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Cloudlesswalker
CloudlesswalkerLv144yr
2020-05-17 10:02

If you’re expecting a badass cool or smart mc turn around the mc is usually lead by the nose and abused by all the women and he’s usually blushing and stuttering from them even tho he’s 30+yrs old so it leaves a rather creepy taste the mc appears to be a lolicon but all of this doesn’t completely ruin this story as long as you go into this with a light heart and don’t take it to seriously you should be fine I’m going to continue reading this in the hope that the mc grows up more and hopefully becomes a man fingers crossed

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lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

I apologize for the dissatisfaction this novel has caused you. But I do have a question, is your only problem with the mc being led around by women? Despite how I already explained it as to why he acts that way. If you reach the chapter called A story you would have an even deeper understanding as to why he acts that way around women. Hope this doesn't stop you from reading.

Cloudlesswalker
CloudlesswalkerLv14

Oh I still plan to keep on reading it I just found it a bit creepy for 30+yr old to be blushing and stuttering in front of girls I mean if you see that in real life it’d give you goosebumps it’s just that I went into it thinking like he was older and mature because the comments didn’t say anything about this and give people warning that’s all I wanted to do I don’t hate stories like this it’s just better to approach with a light heart which I didn’t I still very much enjoyed the story if I just ignored those parts and come back to it with an open mind then I can say I liked it Very much

lynerparel:I apologize for the dissatisfaction this novel has caused you. But I do have a question, is your only problem with the mc being led around by women? Despite how I already explained it as to why he acts that way. If you reach the chapter called A story you would have an even deeper understanding as to why he acts that way around women. Hope this doesn't stop you from reading.
lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

Technically he is a ten-year-old boy. Though if you add his current age and his former age you do get a thirty-year-old man. But you must remember he developed differently from others ever since the attack on his village. He's mental age and his emotional age won't be able to match up. There are many introverts that are like this.

Cloudlesswalker:Oh I still plan to keep on reading it I just found it a bit creepy for 30+yr old to be blushing and stuttering in front of girls I mean if you see that in real life it’d give you goosebumps it’s just that I went into it thinking like he was older and mature because the comments didn’t say anything about this and give people warning that’s all I wanted to do I don’t hate stories like this it’s just better to approach with a light heart which I didn’t I still very much enjoyed the story if I just ignored those parts and come back to it with an open mind then I can say I liked it Very much
lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

Also thank you for continuing to read.

Cloudlesswalker:Oh I still plan to keep on reading it I just found it a bit creepy for 30+yr old to be blushing and stuttering in front of girls I mean if you see that in real life it’d give you goosebumps it’s just that I went into it thinking like he was older and mature because the comments didn’t say anything about this and give people warning that’s all I wanted to do I don’t hate stories like this it’s just better to approach with a light heart which I didn’t I still very much enjoyed the story if I just ignored those parts and come back to it with an open mind then I can say I liked it Very much
Stormbringer
StormbringerLv4

TBH I enjoy reading this kind of thread. Hahaha and I'm not a fan of beta male type of MC.

Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU
Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmULv5

Is he totally beta or he will come around !!!?? like will be fix himself ... I don't wanna read where there's no development and goes like a crap play... no offense author...

Stormbringer:TBH I enjoy reading this kind of thread. Hahaha and I'm not a fan of beta male type of MC.
ObamaUchiha
ObamaUchihaLv4

just dont make a mc like that.

lynerparel:I apologize for the dissatisfaction this novel has caused you. But I do have a question, is your only problem with the mc being led around by women? Despite how I already explained it as to why he acts that way. If you reach the chapter called A story you would have an even deeper understanding as to why he acts that way around women. Hope this doesn't stop you from reading.
lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

But that's how he is.

ObamaUchiha:just dont make a mc like that.
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