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NovelDragon
NovelDragonLv44yr
2020-06-15 06:45

The MC is frustrating as he is supposed to have been reincarnated but he has no maturity and despite being a badass in his previous life is a stuttering mess around women and just gets abused by them. The novel has major power balancing issues as a 7 year old can be considered a B class swordsman despite the fact that's considered a very high standard in the world and his father whom is considered talented and who has trained his whole life is also a B class swordsman. So overall this novel os alright if you go into it just wanting to read about a stereotypical overpowered MC who seems a lot like the MC from a 3rd rate isekai.

One More Time: Rebirth

lynerparel
4.3
118 Chs

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lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

Hi, author here. I just needed to post this so that everyone that has read this work of mine before can understand. So there are no misunderstandings, first off, I am the original author of this work. I posted this on Wattpad and Royalroad back in my high school days. So you might remember it. Due to some reasons, I needed to remove them. Now, this might seem like that original work of mine, but I added a lot of new scenes and things. So this is a remake of that original work of mine. So I hope you guys don't go around saying I stole this. Cause how can I steal from myself? Alright, that's all I wanted to say to clarify the situation.

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hizer0778
hizer0778Lv14

I just wanna ask if there are any harem and if there are then I don't wanna read it.... I hate harem I hate harem I hate harem I hate harem

4yr
Cloudlesswalker
CloudlesswalkerLv14

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4

Although too early to review. It's from the same author as demon lord's reincarnation and that too a prequel so I am excited about it. Although it might look cliche but things are more difficult than MC's previous world and the first real fight did take him everything to fight. Hope author continues the momentum...

4yr
FascinatedReader
FascinatedReaderLv3

This book has potential and i can see there is a bit of a harem genre to it and it would be such a waste if this novel go to such a path like having a wife on each race, I think the first 2 potential love interest is enough already because it tends to get very messy when authors start expanding the harem. Although I am still waiting for the author to put more depth in the surrounding like what is the name of the empire/country they belong to or even the general population of the village woudn't be bad but it is still early to whether this novel would turn out good or bad. I also notice a few mistakes in the grammar.

4yr
Alyptriline
AlyptrilineLv14

Finally, the book which I've waited has arrived! Hoping to see new content on the chapters. Good luck and have fun! P.S. Don't mind this text since the review should have 140 characters and I just put this to fulfill the requirements.

4yr
Migmartinez
MigmartinezLv15

I’m gonna start with I’m really happy with this story so far as I have been reading over a hundred light novels at the same time and this one has me hooked I can’t wait to see more releases from you.

4yr
Arduril
ArdurilLv3

Nice story idea and characters. That's about all I can praise this story for. Narration is incredibly convoluted, and the story reads more like an attempt at hero's diary than a novel. If you hate novels where autor has to note out POV changes, this isn't for you since the story has no "flow". Might be a decent binge-read at +-150 chapters.

4yr
ThePotatoKing
ThePotatoKingLv14

Adopted Soldier is one of my favorite books on this site, and the other book of the author demon lord's reincarnation is also pretty amazing. This story is also as good. Though the first few chapters might not seem as impressive (probably because the author said he had written those in high school), the story really picks up soon. It is amazing and the characters are really lovely. Keep it up author.

4yr
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