webnovel
ayaneisme
ayaneismeLv14yr
2020-08-02 11:59

The revoked a star from the writing quality is simply on grammar, and a few spelling mistakes. Some of your sentences are a little choppy, but other than that well done. I'm not sure on your stability in updates, so I just gave it a 5 as to not retract from your overall score. The story development is quite good! I really enjoy how the powers are presented and explained, and how in depth it goes. The character is well rounded, though in my opinion he is a little stupid :> Still, I gave you five stars because personal opinion shouldn't result in a retraction of a star. Through the chapters I read, it is very difficult to get a clear view of what is around the MC. I think describing the area more would help with that! It's not too bad though, so I only retracted one star. Well done :>

Ascenders Rising...search for new book to continue

sir_impeccable
4.9
24 Chs

Liked it!

LIKE
Replies2
sir_impeccable
sir_impeccableAuthor

Hi, thanks for the review. I am working on that all, in the restarted book under WSA. And I'll appreciate if you can paste this review under it. Its the same title but with a different cover. Thank you if you can't, if not, thanks all the same

4yr
sir_impeccable
sir_impeccableAuthor

Hi, thanks for the review. I am working on that all, in the restarted book under WSA. And I'll appreciate if you can paste this review under it. Its the same title but with a different cover. Thank you if you can't, if not, thanks all the same

4yr
Other Reviews
sir_impeccable
sir_impeccableAuthor

Giving myself a 5 because why not? I’m the author and I am 100% confident in my work. This series is a interlinked with my first novel TRAILING SHADOWS, both, taking place in the same ORUN. My books draw heavy reference from Yoruba Mythology so be rest assured to be educated on Yoruba Myths and Legends. Aargh... said enough, jump in. Please, vote and comment. Thanks

4yr

TokyoAnime_Seven
TokyoAnime_SevenLv10

This story is totally a combination of mythology and modern world. I like it for its story development and world build which is unique on it's own.

4yr
Jay_y
Jay_yLv2

The way this story is developing is really good and I like how the MC evolves. I also like the way you wrote the book. This is a good read, keep up the good work.👍

4yr
Eternal_Demon
Eternal_DemonLv12

It's quite a good story, and I read 10 chapters so far and they are really good. I don't understand why people are not reading this book, the author tried really hard so I guess this book deserves a chance.

4yr
RenuKakkar
RenuKakkarLv5

Seems I am the first one to review this book after reading 7 chapters. Writing quality is good. Stability of updates is good too as about 40 chapters have been published. The story is developing nicely. The character design is good at present we see the MC evolving. The world background is equally good. Actually I am not able to located any mistakes. A good light read. All the best author!

4yr
Kenringdomstory
KenringdomstoryLv1

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

4yr
Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

Currently chapter 4 This was a novel about wolves....a book similar to the Call of the wild book I've read when I am just a kid. It really captivated me at the first chapter. The description was awesome. Keep up the good work author san! Release more chapters!

4yr
Shadow_Magus
Shadow_MagusLv4

So I like the way the novel is written, but a little more description would help the audience connect with the world. Like set the scene before going into it, so the reader can imagine that scene behind the characters. Example would be two characters fighting... but you can give like even 3 lines of description on a jungle behind them, will allow the reader to place a jungle background behind then, rather than a plain white void. Also, the updates have stopped, I hope you will continue then soon

4yr
AnnaMark
AnnaMarkLv10

wowww... Great work Author... I love the way you carry the story line and the characters nailed it... I hope your book will get top views and massive votes ❤️❤️❤️

4yr
Related Stories

I am the God of Technology

Dante is a budding young man who has the dreams and hopes of entering society with his own skills, independent of the help of family and friends. As a small-time app developer, he eventually tries to jailbreak his new phone when a malfunction occurs, and his phone swallows him into a wormhole. On the other side, Dante appears in an alleyway of a bustling city... Avalon! This futuristic city leaves him dumbfounded until he is prompted by his phone which has now merged into his body that he can travel between two universes, Earth and the Eternal Universe. Can Dante achieve his dreams with the fortunate starting point granted to him? And how could the universe sit by and let him grow without challenging him at every step? ----------------------------------------------- Discord: https://discord.gg/HU8GbjfTq2

Kotario · Sci-fi
4.3
370 Chs

Forty Millenniums of Cultivation

“Even if this universe is truly nothing more than a brutal, bloody, shadowy forest, we Cultivators will burn all that we have just to give off a single weak flickering spark in the darkness! “No matter how weak each spark is, how short-lived, how small… As long as the sparks flow unabated, then one day one of those sparks will light some tinder, and that tinder shall light some fallen branches, and those branches shall set ablaze each and every last tree of the forest! “In the end, even the smallest sparks will eventually set the shadowy forest ablaze and illuminate the whole world!” ------ ** Qidian International and the former translator, Mr. Strivon, have reached an agreement to buy out the chapters and host them on our site. We will be continuing the translation from the last chapter translated by Mr. Strivon **

The Enlightened Master Crouching Cow · Sci-fi
4.5
3523 Chs

Path to Becoming the Greatest Space Mercenary

Avery Asteria was far from having anyone's dream job. Family circumstances had him drop out of school and flying around the expanse of space looking for treasure among the discarded trash in an old ship his father had been restoring. It was far from glamorous work, but it was all he could do to earn the money he needed. He was not the only one looking for fortune among the stars, though. One day a score that looked too good to be true led to a run in with a band of pirates. With some quick wits and a bit of luck, Avery managed to escape the worst, but he ended up missing out on collecting the valuable salvage he had his sights on. Having lost a large chunk of his gear in his flight from the pirates, Avery seemed to be truly at the end of his rope. However, a twist of fate led him to discovering an experimental vessel that had been lost to the far reaches of space. With this new ship in his possession, his prospects were looking up. It had everything and more than what any spacefarer could want. And Avery was going to use it to become the leader of the greatest band of mercenaries in the galaxy.

MegaC · Sci-fi
Not enough ratings
130 Chs

People Found Out About The Base I Built On the Moon

Zhao Yu came to the deserted planet to build a base, create an underground city and hide in it. Worried about the threat from the unknown civilization, Zhao Yu dug out a small half of the planet and built star destroyer cannons capable of destroying the planet, as well as tens of thousands of fully intelligent mechanical dogs in various forms. The defensive robotic dog, the Gate God, would disguise itself as a small mountain and fortify around the base. Detection and gathering robot dog - Tsotan, would disguise as a rolling stone and wander around the planet to collect useful resources. Combat robot dog - Nezha, would disguise as a crater, scattered around the base, ready to be able to attack the enemies that may come. Around the base, they were ready to attack the enemies that might come. On this day, his gathering robot dog - Tsotan, dragged back a spaceship. It captured three alien creatures, claiming to be from Earth. Zhao Yu was confused. "Didn't I travel to the deep space of the universe? How come I'm on the back of the moon and being treated as an alien by humans?"

Silver Lining · Sci-fi
3.2
1114 Chs

Global Evolution: I Have An Attribute Board

In an age of evolution, humans coexisted with beasts and evolution was the main topic of the world. Chu Zhou was transmigrated to this world and he awakened the attribute board on his 17th birthday. From breathing techniques to fighting skills and talents, he could level those up by adding points to them. After leveling up his Basic Breathing Technique 10 thousand times, it had become the Dark Hole Breathing Technique. After leveling up his D-rank Fighting Skill 10 thousand times, it had become the SSS-rank Divine Skill. After leveling up his Normal Talent 10 thousand times, it had become the True Deity Talent. A few years later, Chu Zhou stood on top of the food chain. After facing countless space lords, true universe gods, and universe saints, he concluded his life up until then with a sentence. “Everything I gained up until now is through my own hard work… of adding points!”

Black Eyes White Hair · Sci-fi
3.7
1124 Chs
Login