Item: Ascenders Rising...search for new book to continue
Rating: 4.6
Author: Shadow_Magus

Shadow_MagusLv44yr

2020-06-06 14:44

So I like the way the novel is written, but a little more description would help the audience connect with the world. Like set the scene before going into it, so the reader can imagine that scene behind the characters. Example would be two characters fighting... but you can give like even 3 lines of description on a jungle behind them, will allow the reader to place a jungle background behind then, rather than a plain white void. Also, the updates have stopped, I hope you will continue then soon

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