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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv44yr
2020-07-23 08:12

Currently chapter 4 This was a novel about wolves....a book similar to the Call of the wild book I've read when I am just a kid. It really captivated me at the first chapter. The description was awesome. Keep up the good work author san! Release more chapters!

Ascenders Rising...search for new book to continue

sir_impeccable
4.9
24 Chs

Liked it!

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sir_impeccable
sir_impeccableAuthor

Thanks for the review. I'm happy you note the Wolf style of the first chapters but it's more of a Creature Morph-Evolution about different creatures type novel. Thanks Tho💥✊

4yr
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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

Wow I really need to read more! Thanks!

4yr
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sir_impeccable
sir_impeccableAuthor

Giving myself a 5 because why not? I’m the author and I am 100% confident in my work. This series is a interlinked with my first novel TRAILING SHADOWS, both, taking place in the same ORUN. My books draw heavy reference from Yoruba Mythology so be rest assured to be educated on Yoruba Myths and Legends. Aargh... said enough, jump in. Please, vote and comment. Thanks

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TokyoAnime_Seven
TokyoAnime_SevenLv10

This story is totally a combination of mythology and modern world. I like it for its story development and world build which is unique on it's own.

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Jay_y
Jay_yLv2

The way this story is developing is really good and I like how the MC evolves. I also like the way you wrote the book. This is a good read, keep up the good work.👍

4yr
Eternal_Demon
Eternal_DemonLv12

It's quite a good story, and I read 10 chapters so far and they are really good. I don't understand why people are not reading this book, the author tried really hard so I guess this book deserves a chance.

4yr
RenuKakkar
RenuKakkarLv5

Seems I am the first one to review this book after reading 7 chapters. Writing quality is good. Stability of updates is good too as about 40 chapters have been published. The story is developing nicely. The character design is good at present we see the MC evolving. The world background is equally good. Actually I am not able to located any mistakes. A good light read. All the best author!

4yr
Kenringdomstory
KenringdomstoryLv1

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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ayaneisme
ayaneismeLv1

The revoked a star from the writing quality is simply on grammar, and a few spelling mistakes. Some of your sentences are a little choppy, but other than that well done. I'm not sure on your stability in updates, so I just gave it a 5 as to not retract from your overall score. The story development is quite good! I really enjoy how the powers are presented and explained, and how in depth it goes. The character is well rounded, though in my opinion he is a little stupid :> Still, I gave you five stars because personal opinion shouldn't result in a retraction of a star. Through the chapters I read, it is very difficult to get a clear view of what is around the MC. I think describing the area more would help with that! It's not too bad though, so I only retracted one star. Well done :>

4yr
Shadow_Magus
Shadow_MagusLv4

So I like the way the novel is written, but a little more description would help the audience connect with the world. Like set the scene before going into it, so the reader can imagine that scene behind the characters. Example would be two characters fighting... but you can give like even 3 lines of description on a jungle behind them, will allow the reader to place a jungle background behind then, rather than a plain white void. Also, the updates have stopped, I hope you will continue then soon

4yr
AnnaMark
AnnaMarkLv10

wowww... Great work Author... I love the way you carry the story line and the characters nailed it... I hope your book will get top views and massive votes ❤️❤️❤️

4yr
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