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TFHLv63yr
2021-10-01 04:08

Honest?, the novel had a lot of potential, but everything went to hêll in since *SPOILERS* *SPOILERS* *SPOILERS* *SPOILERS* *SPOILERS* *SPOILERS* *SPOILERS* *SPOILERS* *SPOILERS* *SPOILERS* *SPOILERS* *SPOILERS* *SPOILERS* *SPOILERS* *SPOILERS* Since author decided it was a good idea to kill of MC parents and causing mc and his sisters to become wanted criminals... Thats ok, but what made me speechless was that author decided that the MC leave his sister and baby sister ALONE and they are also wanted criminals, while he went to another continent to search for the adopted girl... I was Like The F!?, at least bring your sisters with you!!. I kept reading for more chapters, but things got from bad to worse. Its not bad to add tragedy and what not, but what the author made the MC do is asking to smash his head in a wall.

Reincarnation of a Worthless Man

ForestDweller
4.0
274 Chs

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J_S_2998
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Ouch, yea I really hate when novels pull the “separation/long separation” trope.

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writing quality and other **** are all dope BUT MC is a beta,,,like this is an *****, that gets embarrassed by young girls,,,,yah its nasty. Then theres the fact that despite being an ***** in a kids body this dude aint special as ****,,,,,he is too weak.....dosnt make use of any SI modern world or anime knowledge to create spells, attacks or do anything...... then there are retarded moments where MC's sis get humiliated like getting stripped in public by some 15 yr old ***** but she does nothing but accept it cause of her pride...its retarded cause.. 1) she has pride, she shouldnt allow it, its ironic that she allows such humiliation if she has pride... 2) she is a super genius able to out rank 15 yr old, who is a noble. my ass she wouldn't get some special privileges... 3) where the **** are the teachers?, they are allowing a 11 yr old child to get bullied to such an extent, even worse considering said child is a super genius. There are many retarded moments like this that made me drop. BUT if u like a decent story with retarded moments and a beta MC...this is for u

4yr

Primordiales
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HeavenlyDaoNovels
HeavenlyDaoNovelsLv2

MC will not pick the women, the women will pick him. this would be so enjoyable to read if MC had a pair of balls. even after they get intimate he’s still awkward, which is incredibly unrealistic and outright stupid. here’s to hoping MC changes but i doubt it. the story was enjoyable but i can’t stand the MC beta personality so i’ll be dropping it. but i’m sure there are some people out there that don’t mind it or maybe even enjoy it. good writing too. what a shame :(

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SuzakuOkita
SuzakuOkitaLv5

Boring story . stupid mc who was typycial beta. Forced harem sister random girls . Autor write his her fantasy from wet dream.... World in story is to shalow..

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kosutaPejeng
kosutaPejengLv6

I have read your story until ch 60 currently. I feel much depression on the mc, and it kinda stupid and bit retarded with how I think. . He meet many people and bit exaggerated around girl if not cute then big boob. . He knew what he lacking and think he can overcome it with his the so called soon to be wife, and forget his own siblings.

4yr
Khirodra
KhirodraLv5

Story is good and heart warming which i love to read and i hope this story goes on for many more chapters.............and i hope he gets together with his sister because i don't want to see her with other male character.

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Fnatic_Fan
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Cromir
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Mc has cartoonish average japanese themed isekai personality. Personally i dont like that kind of mc and as such i end up not liking the story and wont read more of it. Nothing wrong with the story thou. So if you like or tolerate that type of mc personality. Go for it and you might enjoy your time on the story.

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