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Primordiales
PrimordialesLv34yr
2020-06-11 10:54

I can not read more brother, I do not know how to feel this novel looks like the typical Japanese isekai I would not be surprised if in the next chapters the protagonist will tell his sister or his family that he reincarnated in that world, now I do not know how to feel with the MC, if I had to say it would be a typical Japanese MC, absolutely beta (probably because of the years he was alone in his first life, but the same is the same), the typical complex of I want to save someone, the typical blush with everything , and the typical Japanese MC who does not like physical training and only goes to the magic, as for the rest is fine, at least he is not the typical Gary stu but I do not like his personality, I would prefer that he be like Shiro Emiya if he heroes or at least pretend to be ridiculous, he blushes with an 8-year-old girl because, like this, a girl who is not even developed and the typical one is about 40 years old (literal), I mean no matter how virgin you are or how lonely you are I don't think someone you can be ashamed with an 8 year old girl. Well that is all I did not put much of the novel so as not to give spoilers more see it but I do not like it, if I liked this type of novels I will see a Japanese novel good night

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CruelFlowerDemon
CruelFlowerDemonLv4

Thx, looking at the descripion I was wondering if it has a beta MC or not.

ShaadyJ
ShaadyJLv13

Should’ve read further, I think this is actually the most well done fantasy, typical Japanese isekai I have ever read. I don’t like reading them for reasons like yours but let’s just say you should give it a shot. Tbh, I don’t understand how people can give a solid review to a novel they haven’t even finished or at least read halfway but that’s just me I guess. 🤷‍♂️

ShaadyJ
ShaadyJLv13

I don’t consider him to be a beta and you shouldn’t judge a book based off someone else’s opinion, not to mention the guy who reviewed this only read like the first 10-15 chapters and stopped.

CruelFlowerDemon:Thx, looking at the descripion I was wondering if it has a beta MC or not.
Primordiales
PrimordialesLv3

Haha I only put the MC and I did not say do not read it, I said I do not like it and I am in chapter 18 and it is still the same, the beta MC, and on top of that a filthy pedophile who keeps the panties of an 8 year old girl and those of his sister, he is also super weak, it is okay to be weak you know but he is talented and has modern knowledge and a more mature mind to live longer but he acts like a 5-year-old with lack of creativity, you go to a world of sword and magic with otaku knowledge and you are still a failure that someone who only trained a week wins, it does not matter if you like it is good and if it is not also well just give my opinion of what I read

ShaadyJ:I don’t consider him to be a beta and you shouldn’t judge a book based off someone else’s opinion, not to mention the guy who reviewed this only read like the first 10-15 chapters and stopped.
Primordiales
PrimordialesLv3

40 years old / 40 years old / 40 years old, and no matter how lonely and how virgin you are you can't blush with a naked 8-year-old girl, disgusting maybe you are also a pedophile so don't bother me but it makes me sick In addition, blushing for everything is the worst hatred when someone acts like this plus the one who lived 40 YEARS, it is impossible to be like this even if you are a social outcast and a virgin, only people with dawn syndrome and autism can act like this

ShaadyJ:I don’t consider him to be a beta and you shouldn’t judge a book based off someone else’s opinion, not to mention the guy who reviewed this only read like the first 10-15 chapters and stopped.
ShaadyJ
ShaadyJLv13

Like I said, give it a shot, you haven’t read far enough to make those assumptions about the Mc, although taking panties in general is pretty weird, whether you’re old or not but I honestly could care less as the Mc said he was a “pervert” himself. And again, all of your claims about this novel? Just read it man, thats all I’m saying, you haven’t read enough of it to be saying all that, and I even KNEW you haven’t read half of it just based off your review, come on man... There’s a difference between my opinion and yours, I have read over 50 chapters of this novel, while you read less than 20 and you know that these chapters are longer than most chapters from other novels, so you are missing a lot of information to be even having a opinion. An opinion isn’t always based on facts, but right now, your “facts” about this novel, are lacking...

Primordiales:Haha I only put the MC and I did not say do not read it, I said I do not like it and I am in chapter 18 and it is still the same, the beta MC, and on top of that a filthy pedophile who keeps the panties of an 8 year old girl and those of his sister, he is also super weak, it is okay to be weak you know but he is talented and has modern knowledge and a more mature mind to live longer but he acts like a 5-year-old with lack of creativity, you go to a world of sword and magic with otaku knowledge and you are still a failure that someone who only trained a week wins, it does not matter if you like it is good and if it is not also well just give my opinion of what I read
ShaadyJ
ShaadyJLv13

He’s giving life another shot, trying to start over again, and people who are anti social or shut ins in general can in fact become like this around the opposite sex as most are shy or have a hard time communicating socially making them more prone to being nervous. Alright, if what you didn’t like about this novel is because he blushes a lot and you think he’s a pedophile, then go ahead and drop this novel, I only wanted you to give it another shot based off what you said about the Mc in general being a beta and all, and the story, but if what really put you off was what I mentioned earlier than fine, I can see why you dropped it. I’m 17 btw so I can’t really be called a pedophile and I also don’t consider myself one. 😅

Primordiales:40 years old / 40 years old / 40 years old, and no matter how lonely and how virgin you are you can't blush with a naked 8-year-old girl, disgusting maybe you are also a pedophile so don't bother me but it makes me sick In addition, blushing for everything is the worst hatred when someone acts like this plus the one who lived 40 YEARS, it is impossible to be like this even if you are a social outcast and a virgin, only people with dawn syndrome and autism can act like this
CruelFlowerDemon
CruelFlowerDemonLv4

Sorry man, but by the description it sounds like the typical japanese isekai which is a real turn off for me. I have read many and been disappointed over and over, turning it frustrating to read.

ShaadyJ:I don’t consider him to be a beta and you shouldn’t judge a book based off someone else’s opinion, not to mention the guy who reviewed this only read like the first 10-15 chapters and stopped.
ShaadyJ
ShaadyJLv13

I wouldn’t consider him a beta for a couple of reasons or rather events that took place later in the novel than what the guy read but if I stated those reasons it would be spoiling the book for you, even if you don’t plan on reading it, others might so I’d rather not. If you don’t want to read it because of previous similar novel descriptions and stories then I’m not holding it against you, I just don’t think you should use his/her review as a basis for your dislike of this novel when they’re somewhat unfounded but your reason is as good as any. Tbh, only reason I read it to begin with is because I’m running out of novels to read but it’s not bad which is why I think you should give it a shot but in the end it’s up to you.😁

CruelFlowerDemon:Sorry man, but by the description it sounds like the typical japanese isekai which is a real turn off for me. I have read many and been disappointed over and over, turning it frustrating to read.
CruelFlowerDemon
CruelFlowerDemonLv4

I am a whimsical guy, the tiniest unpleasant detail can make me drop a book, even if it gets fixed later on, I don't have the same energy to continue. So if I see something I avoid in a review, then I'd rather not waste my time reading it. Sorry for wasting your time.

ShaadyJ:I wouldn’t consider him a beta for a couple of reasons or rather events that took place later in the novel than what the guy read but if I stated those reasons it would be spoiling the book for you, even if you don’t plan on reading it, others might so I’d rather not. If you don’t want to read it because of previous similar novel descriptions and stories then I’m not holding it against you, I just don’t think you should use his/her review as a basis for your dislike of this novel when they’re somewhat unfounded but your reason is as good as any. Tbh, only reason I read it to begin with is because I’m running out of novels to read but it’s not bad which is why I think you should give it a shot but in the end it’s up to you.😁
Kuran0666
Kuran0666Lv6

I stopped reading after he helped the F-rank trio. He's spiralling down hill and he needs to be more manly not whiny

ForestDweller
ForestDwellerAuthor

Heh, I probably shouldn't have based him off Rudy from Mushoku Tensei.

Primordiales:Haha I only put the MC and I did not say do not read it, I said I do not like it and I am in chapter 18 and it is still the same, the beta MC, and on top of that a filthy pedophile who keeps the panties of an 8 year old girl and those of his sister, he is also super weak, it is okay to be weak you know but he is talented and has modern knowledge and a more mature mind to live longer but he acts like a 5-year-old with lack of creativity, you go to a world of sword and magic with otaku knowledge and you are still a failure that someone who only trained a week wins, it does not matter if you like it is good and if it is not also well just give my opinion of what I read
ForestDweller
ForestDwellerAuthor

He'll be more manly in the future. If you want straight badass MC though, this story is not for you. I have a different idea for a story like that to be honest. More inspired by revenge isekai like Shield Hero.

Kuran0666:I stopped reading after he helped the F-rank trio. He's spiralling down hill and he needs to be more manly not whiny
Strickland_Propane
Strickland_PropaneLv14

Yo!!!👀 A story inspired by Shield Hero? i wanna read that!💯(actually im currently reading tru Shield Hero.) Your writing isn’t bad at all.(In fact, in this google translate infested app. it stands out.) So far, imo only your MC was bad.(and maybe the inclusion of some annoying anime clIches that couldve been avoided like cancer.)

ForestDweller:He'll be more manly in the future. If you want straight badass MC though, this story is not for you. I have a different idea for a story like that to be honest. More inspired by revenge isekai like Shield Hero.
ForestDweller
ForestDwellerAuthor

You're not the first to dislike Hugo. He's basically my take on a more realistic Rudeus.

Strickland_Propane:Yo!!!👀 A story inspired by Shield Hero? i wanna read that!💯(actually im currently reading tru Shield Hero.) Your writing isn’t bad at all.(In fact, in this google translate infested app. it stands out.) So far, imo only your MC was bad.(and maybe the inclusion of some annoying anime clIches that couldve been avoided like cancer.)
ForestDweller
ForestDwellerAuthor

Hmm, you know, maybe I can write a revenge isekai ala Shield Hero, Arifureta, Re;Do Healer, etc. At least the beginning part where it's all about the suffering. When I'm in a bad mood, I have the urge to write suffering into my story.

Strickland_Propane:Yo!!!👀 A story inspired by Shield Hero? i wanna read that!💯(actually im currently reading tru Shield Hero.) Your writing isn’t bad at all.(In fact, in this google translate infested app. it stands out.) So far, imo only your MC was bad.(and maybe the inclusion of some annoying anime clIches that couldve been avoided like cancer.)
Strickland_Propane
Strickland_PropaneLv14

ForestDweller:Hmm, you know, maybe I can write a revenge isekai ala Shield Hero, Arifureta, Re;Do Healer, etc. At least the beginning part where it's all about the suffering. When I'm in a bad mood, I have the urge to write suffering into my story.
Chunchunmaru_sama
Chunchunmaru_samaLv6

you know.... its really really weird for a 40 year old, that reincarnated to a child in another world to steal his 8 YEAR OLD Sister's panty even rudeus only stole panties of an older woman... but meh, added to library

Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv15

thanks chief, I hate reading novels with the classic Japanese beta, oh so holy-ier than thou type

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